Am i your priority? (Part-7,8,9page 13) - Page 5

Originally posted by: mkc12345

This was really sad, poor Raavi. Shiva needs to realize Raavi's importance. Please continue. ❤️

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This is beautiful! My heart breaks for Raavi so much! Especially the part where she can't even find her husband in him. But Shiva has seen/observed her. Hope he can assure her and tell it off to the family so she doesn't have to feel like an outsider with her own husband. She should have first right to bask in glory of bher halusbandd success as she was the force behind for it to happen! Can't wait to read the next part!

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

When are you updating the next part. Please update soon

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Both the Episodes are ❤❤❤ this is the thing which is very easily Ignored in Show you have depicted it Very nicely👍👍👍

Eager to know How shiva will get toknow about raavi's insecurity whether it will be through raavi's outburst or shiva ka self realisation

Kuch bhi ho bs ek request hai dora the chipku aurat ki beizzati jarur honi chahiye I know ye shiva k character ko suit nhi krta but wo sab choubeys hai dekhne k liye ye shivi fans ki duniya hai yaha sab chalta hai.

I am so obssessed with dhara ki beizzati kya karu🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

Bas ab phata phat se update de do jyada wait mat karanaa

Waiting for the updates.....

Stay tuned

Originally posted by: princess369

Very sad part

I felt I like crying

Plsss write shiva’s point of view as well

Plsss update sooon

Will be waiting

PART-III

SHIVA'S POV,

"Arre yaar........ Koii meri chipkali ko mere paas kyon nahi aane de raha........ "

This is the line i have spoke n'th time in this evening after my prize distribution.

I know i have done wrong by not mentioning her name in my thank you speech but in reality she is the one who had pushed me to do this and achieve this goal....... She knows me right how i am............... Par vo mujhse milne koi nahi aaa rahi hai............ Areee gadhedhe vo aayi thi par dhara bhabhi aa gayi thi beech mein......... Vo gadi mein baithna chahti thi par nahi aa payi aur fir sabne tujhe ghar aakar ghair liya vo kaise aayegi.............

Par abb kahan hai kahin dikh nahi rahi............... Dhara bhabhi ne gajar ka halwa mangvaya mere liye aur usne kuch bhi nahi dekh lunga ise main...........

Than dhara says,

"Shiva main gaumbi ke paas jati hoon aur vese bhi sham hi gayi hai tu aaram kar........ "

I nodded and bhabhi left soon maa also left after giving me blessibg i took a sigh of relief that finally i am free and i can talk to raavi and than my eyes fell on a bowl full with my favorite shikhand. My mouth watered and i took the bowl and tge aroma itself told me that it was Raavi's prep. Now i remebered she has came near me when she was serving tge tea with this and bhabhi intervened..... Ugh........ Where is she now i need to talk.............

I directly went to my room with that shikhand in my hand and saw raavi sitting on the chair near tge window and her back was facing me i called,

"Ae chipkali....... "

No answer.....

"Raavi aise kyon baithi hai...... "

I went near her and knelt down in front of her and what i saw was something i feared My Raavi looked broken........

She was looking nothing at particular and just was clutching her mangalsutra her eyes were red.. . .. . She must have cried.. . .. . . I asked her

"Raavi meri taraf dekh..... "

She didn't she didn't even utter a word and was lost somewhere i again spoke

"Raavi kya hua hai bol tujhe kisi ne kuch kaha...... "

i cupped her face to look into her eyes............ Now she came in her senses she looked at me deeply her right hand reached my left cheek. And tears started flowing out of her eyes.

Her eyes were reciting her pain which i have failed to notice.. . .. . . Her each tear was telling me some unsaid tales buried deep in ber heart which i again have not noticed.. . .. .

i moved further and joined our forehead. Just feeling her and absorbing her pain......... .

Raavi's tears were continously flowing and now soft sobs and uneasy breathing was increasing.. . .. With each uneasy breathe her hands tighten my shoulder and my hold became firm. I slowly joined our nose and now the tears were not just her if they left her eyes they dripped down my cheek......

Her chest heaved and i encircled my hand on her waist and moved in to and fro motion to make her feel comfortable..........

But why she is crying.........

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It was indeed a short one but hope you all like it........

Do share your views and ideas what you need shiva to pacify raavi......

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Sad that Shiva still hasnt realized why she's so broken...

Nice, at least he noticed that she was kept away from him and dhara came in between them somehow.

I hope he listens to Raavi, but I feel Raavi should calm down and ignore him… Shiva deserves it.

It was really nice 😊. I am happy that Shiva understood that it was wrong that he didn't say her name during the speech and also that Dhara keeps coming between them. I hope that Raav doesn't tell him why she is crying because he has to figure it out himself and repent.