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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Ritu this is so pyarasmiley27

You have penned down his thoughts so beautifullysmiley42

This is the Shiva we all want to see...The one who put Raavi above all. Protect her from all the evils of the world. ❤️

Shiva thanking his stars (which he should)❤️

The cuddling part was 😳 this is what we all are looking forward to 😆

And the song just enhanced the beauty of this.❤️

Loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was a treat ngl. Shiva Pandya in its truest sense. And everything about it screamed pure love thanks for this ✨ Also, I have the song in the background while i read this and it came off too creepy and horror movie vibes more than romantic. (Male version)

The words are really cute but the score is scary or its just me because I'm watching a lot of ghore.

Also, aise likhte reh 🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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LMAO I was waiting for someone to say this.😆


The movie is a suspense / paranormal story so the vibe of the music is maintain.


In this song the ML is re-imagining his dead wife and getting FBs of how they met back in the day. Personally Shreya Ghoshal>>>>>>> always but this fit because female version has different lyrics altogether. 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

LMAO I was waiting for someone to say this.😆


The movie is a suspense / paranormal story so the vibe of the music is maintain.


In this song the ML is re-imagining his dead wife and getting FBs of how they met back in the day. Personally Shreya Ghoshal>>>>>>> always but this fit because female version has different lyrics altogether. 😳

No wonder, but damn that score is horror movie vibes, but I can use it in case I wanna write something scary.

ML is imagining is dead wife, this is from a horror movie 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

No wonder, but damn that score is horror movie vibes, but I can use it in case I wanna write something scary.

ML is imagining is dead wife, this is from a horror movie 🤣

Not entirely horror though...call it Paranormal thriller if you will....But a nice underrated movie nonetheless


Plus John Abraham as a Doctor with rimless specs >>>>>>>>>

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pixierocks

Awwwiee ❤️

Thoughtful protective shiva pandya lost in the innocence of his lovely wife while cuddled to her and regretting his actions ? Making a silent promise to trust and protect her? Yess please. The perfect first night

this was beautiful ritu ❤️

Thank you so muchhhh Pixuuuu ❤️


You inspired me for this one. We both wanted cuddling so bad I didn't want to take risk with all them creativity lol. Khud hi likh liya. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pritha_31

Maine bola tha na OS hai, I'm very good at decoding surprises. Ab padhne ja rhi

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aaye ho meri zindagi me tum bahar banke

Laaye ho pyare posts, tum bhar bhar ke.


Shiva adoring his wife silently, recalling the first marriage memories, promising her a forever, realising his mistakes, cuddling. My heart wasn't ready for so much love. This is the kind of actual romance I wish to see in their lives. ❤️❤️❤️

The way you frame the sentences to describe the situation and emotions are way too good Ritu❤️

Or ye ewwsurprise nhi awwwsurprise tha smjhi


@bold 🤣🤣🤣


I wanted to include his state of mind during the first wedding because I've always felt they failed to do justice to his feelings back then.

Awww thank you so much bub ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kristmas

Oh Shiva’s inner feelings ❤️❤️

It’s beautiful how you showed his regret, guilt, happiness but all with a sense of peace because he had her cuddling beside him.

He knows she knows him the most, the way she endured everything. The cuddle, an innocent sleeping raavi, just pouting with his disturbing

You help me visualise the whole scene and my heart is so full ❤️

I’ve said this before, but you definitely should write more, it’s beautiful ❤️

Thank you so so so much for reading and the kind words. ❤️

I would try writing more....whenever the inspiration strikes. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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