Aaj Jaane ki zidd na karo- FS EPILOGUE updated pg-11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I love how you switched from past to present in 3 different situations! This is very well written for your first time posting here, well done!

I'm very very intrigued to know what happens, please no heartbreaks! Only happy reunions with happy tears and love ❤️

This is very sentimental when you think of all the jawaans fighting everyday at the border so that we can sleep peacefully! Beautifully done.

thank you soooo much meghna🤗

well i had a lot of help from my friend

yeah dont worry it will have a happy ending😆

ikr lakh lakh shukriya for all the brave soldiers

thank you for the lamba comment☺️

Thankyou for tagging me 💜

I will definetly read this after fewdays bit occupied with few things ☢️

So do tag me in futureupdates too 🤗

Maybe will give u lamba comment after reading it all together 😆❤️

First of all Thanks for Tagging me(man ko khushi mila after being tagged after months🙃)

I don't have any words.

That was just f*cking awesome. Those sweet flashbacks and the timings to switch.

Man how could you do this?

Jab heart ko dhakka khane keliye ready ho raha tha tab you entered a flashback.

And that scene, naming Riya(Shiva had an ex named Meenakumari🤣)

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Thankyou for tagging me 💜

I will definetly read this after fewdays bit occupied with few things ☢️

So do tag me in futureupdates too 🤗

Maybe will give u lamba comment after reading it all together 😆❤️

sure np❤️

take your time

waiting for lamba comment

Originally posted by: mr.Flawed

First of all Thanks for Tagging me(man ko khushi mila after being tagged after months🙃)

I don't have any words.

That was just f*cking awesome. Those sweet flashbacks and the timings to switch.

Man how could you do this?

Jab heart ko dhakka khane keliye ready ho raha tha tab you entered a flashback.

And that scene, naming Riya(Shiva had an ex named Meenakumari🤣)

thank you so much 🤗

you are so kind

i had a lot of help so❤️

will definitely tag you in future updates as well❤️

Thanks for tagging babe

I really liked how you kept switching b/w present and past. I loved your concept of story telling 😄

Kept me hooked throughout ❤️

Please go for a happy ending ❤️

What a beautiful story love❤️ I loved the movie 'Shershaah' and this being the inspiration is really heartwarming.❤️Shiva in the army.😳 And his beautiful family is love. I really hope for a beautiful happy ending for this precious family. I enjoyed reading this very much.🤗

Thank you for the tag.😳

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

Thanks for tagging babe

I really liked how you kept switching b/w present and past. I loved your concept of story telling 😄

Kept me hooked throughout ❤️

Please go for a happy ending ❤️

thank you so much🤗

glad you enjoyed it❤️

sure there is a happy ending coming soon

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

What a beautiful story love❤️ I loved the movie 'Shershaah' and this being the inspiration is really heartwarming.❤️Shiva in the army.😳 And his beautiful family is love. I really hope for a beautiful happy ending for this precious family. I enjoyed reading this very much.🤗

Thank you for the tag.😳

thank you so much❤️

glad you enjoyed reading it❤️

The whole journey of pregnancy very beautifully portrayed..❤️..how I love this shiva ravi...❤️.

So ravi is safe and the baby is too..❤️

I am waiting for shiva to be ok soon too..I wonder how ravi will deal with the news..

It was an awesome update dear..❤️

Can't wait to read more..