Aaj Jaane ki zidd na karo- FS EPILOGUE updated pg-11 - Page 9

This was super awesome dear...❤️..a very beautiful ending and an equally awesome epilogue.. ❤️.

Keep writing more..❤️

What a beautiful story❤️ Really enjoyed reading.

Waiting for more works from you ❤️

i love that this started as a TS and went all the way up to a FS and you had me on hook till the last chapter...

THANK GOD my babies are ok. They had a rough patch in the middle; Raavi with her pregnancy and Shiva's injuries, but they are always meant to be so they fidn their way back to each other.

Their family is so perfect with the little boy and Riya is the apple of her papa's eyes and we wouldnt have it any other way.

The end, where Raavi sings for him, truly melted my heart. You did a fab job with this little nugget of a short story its the writing equivalent of a hot chocolate on a cold day

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

This was so emotional! I love how Shiva made it back safe and sound, the emotions when he called home, the way he gave up his army job to be with his family.

Loved it! Great work❤️

thank you so much🤗

Originally posted by: Kristmas

Omg omg I don’t know which reunion made me more emotional, the phone wala or when they finally met ❤️

Awh Major Shiva fulfilled his duties, time for bhootnath Shiva do fulfill his ❤️

The Shiva Mami reunion was ❤️

Father and her daughter❤️

and omg the epilogue and their song I could cry happily❤️

This was such a great hearwarming story, thankyou for writing 🤗 looking forward to your future stories ❤️

thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: Rajvithakkar_24

i cant find last part idk why

its on page 10

check it out

Originally posted by: deeps07

This was super awesome dear...❤️..a very beautiful ending and an equally awesome epilogue.. ❤️.

Keep writing more..❤️

thank you so much deeps akka🤗

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

What a beautiful story❤️ Really enjoyed reading.

Waiting for more works from you ❤️

thank you pooh❤️🤗

Originally posted by: RitaSkeeter

i love that this started as a TS and went all the way up to a FS and you had me on hook till the last chapter...

THANK GOD my babies are ok. They had a rough patch in the middle; Raavi with her pregnancy and Shiva's injuries, but they are always meant to be so they fidn their way back to each other.

Their family is so perfect with the little boy and Riya is the apple of her papa's eyes and we wouldnt have it any other way.

The end, where Raavi sings for him, truly melted my heart. You did a fab job with this little nugget of a short story its the writing equivalent of a hot chocolate on a cold day

aww......*cries in joy*

this is the loveliest comment i have gotten❤️❤️😭

thank you so much, for reading and appreciating 🤗