What a beautiful story❤️ Really enjoyed reading.
Waiting for more works from you ❤️
What a beautiful story❤️ Really enjoyed reading.
Waiting for more works from you ❤️
i love that this started as a TS and went all the way up to a FS and you had me on hook till the last chapter...
THANK GOD my babies are ok. They had a rough patch in the middle; Raavi with her pregnancy and Shiva's injuries, but they are always meant to be so they fidn their way back to each other.
Their family is so perfect with the little boy and Riya is the apple of her papa's eyes and we wouldnt have it any other way.
The end, where Raavi sings for him, truly melted my heart. You did a fab job with this little nugget of a short story its the writing equivalent of a hot chocolate on a cold day
Originally posted by: sillysatchel
This was so emotional! I love how Shiva made it back safe and sound, the emotions when he called home, the way he gave up his army job to be with his family.
Loved it! Great work❤️
thank you so much🤗
Originally posted by: Kristmas
Omg omg I don’t know which reunion made me more emotional, the phone wala or when they finally met ❤️
Awh Major Shiva fulfilled his duties, time for bhootnath Shiva do fulfill his ❤️
The Shiva Mami reunion was ❤️
Father and her daughter❤️
and omg the epilogue and their song I could cry happily❤️
This was such a great hearwarming story, thankyou for writing 🤗 looking forward to your future stories ❤️
thank you so much 🤗
This was super awesome dear...❤️..a very beautiful ending and an equally awesome epilogue.. ❤️.
Keep writing more..❤️
thank you so much deeps akka🤗
Originally posted by: PoohNotFound
What a beautiful story❤️ Really enjoyed reading.
Waiting for more works from you ❤️
thank you pooh❤️🤗
Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it! beautiful!
thank you❤️
Originally posted by: RitaSkeeter
i love that this started as a TS and went all the way up to a FS and you had me on hook till the last chapter...
THANK GOD my babies are ok. They had a rough patch in the middle; Raavi with her pregnancy and Shiva's injuries, but they are always meant to be so they fidn their way back to each other.
Their family is so perfect with the little boy and Riya is the apple of her papa's eyes and we wouldnt have it any other way.
The end, where Raavi sings for him, truly melted my heart. You did a fab job with this little nugget of a short story its the writing equivalent of a hot chocolate on a cold day
aww......*cries in joy*
this is the loveliest comment i have gotten❤️❤️😭
thank you so much, for reading and appreciating 🤗
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