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Okay few last min tags lol

Pls do read the note before ❤️

You can skip if you want to and sorry if intruding 😳

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Awww thank you so much!

Hope it wasn't boring lol

Glad you resonate to this Raavi...I just wanted to let her go differently this time. Sane, mature, opinionated in a good way.

This Shiva is a daft lol...he ain't an ass...he just mind numbingly stupid 😆

Still better than the show. Writing Suman and Darshan's equation was probably the easiest I've written here...the toughest here was Shiva himself. I'd created him SO OFF and chaotic that it has taken me a LONG time to get him right. Probably still not satisfied.

I like Rishita thought might as well use it somewhere...had half a mind to include dev but LMAO can't imagine his sanity anywhere

I haven't finished writing. I'm on the last scene still...probably will take me till Saturday...yeah probably.

It wasn't boring at all!! I loved it more because the Shiva-Raavi on the show could have been these two too. Thoda idhar-udhar in their lives and they could've grown up to be like you described them.

Of course, Shiva is way better than the one in the show. But I like the 'mind-numbingly stupid' part. Can Raavi call him that somewhere in the next part?!

Bold: This. Dev Babu ke liye izzat tere FF mein bhi nahi hai. 🤣

Okay, aaraam se likh, but by Saturday. ❤️

Originally posted by: VNuts

It wasn't boring at all!! I loved it more because the Shiva-Raavi on the show could have been these two too. Thoda idhar-udhar in their lives and they could've grown up to be like you described them.

Of course, Shiva is way better than the one in the show. But I like the 'mind-numbingly stupid' part. Can Raavi call him that somewhere in the next part?! - I think she does 🤪 Not sure tho

Bold: This. Dev Babu ke liye izzat tere FF mein bhi nahi hai. 🤣

Okay, aaraam se likh, but by Saturday. ❤️

Haan will try 🤗

OMG!!!! How I love this!!!

Thank you so much for tagging me. I wouldn’t have wanted to miss this one for anything in the world. I’m an absolute sucker for Shiva wooing Raavi and I have a feeling I’ll be getting just that here!

My absolute absolute favorite line is this one:

“The manner in which she evaded his compliment like it was something unbelievable had made him want to hold her close and whisper sweet muttering into her ear, indicating just how magnificent she actually was and the ability she held, to make him forget breathing.”

Beautifully written 👏🏻

Yes, Shiva Pandya! Yes! You are in a deep deep mess. Realizing that is your first step darling. Now do something about it. She’d that Casanova image of yours and show her through your actions, tell her in words that your silly, stubborn, jealous heart has only ever belonged to her. Please don’t disappoint her, me and yourself again!

You know the funny part? I get both Shiva and Raavi. Like what they did what they did. So typical of teenagers. Been in that phase decades ago myself so I won’t be lying when I say I could totally totally relate with both the characters. I’m so looking forward to seeing how this one pans out.

And I’m so glad they are going on this trip together. Dev aur Rishita tho apne mein hi busy rahenge, bas yeh Siddharth ka kuch intezaam karna padega so these two are constantly thrown into each other’s company. I am a devout believer that Shiva and Raavi’s problems (both the onscreen ones and the ones in your story) could only be solved by locking these two up together in a room so they are left with no choice but to confront and confess these icky mucky emotions they have for each other. And of course, my tharki brain always demands for a lot more to happen, if you know what I mean 😉

I love love love long updates so as long as you promise me long updates on this one, I am willing to write an entire review in your comments section.

I loved this, Ritu ❤️
Such a sweet endearing ShiVi take!

Rishita giving good advice to Raavi 👍🏼

I loved Shiva's mini heart attack when she said she's "Unavailable" 😆
Kaash show mein bhi Shiva ke thode emotions dikha dete, other than gussa!

Him placing his palm over his heart in the end to calm down! Awww!❤️

Lattu Shiva incoming! 😆

Excited for the next part! 🤗

This is sooo good.. So much emotions, so much unsaid feelings, angst, confusion and I'm loving every bit of it.. I'm in love with your Raavi already.. Having the same kind of studious, loner personality, I instinctly got connected to her.. Your Shiva is intriguing.. I like Raavi Rishita bond.. You are such a great writer 💕

so your Shiva is an ass and Raavi is a sweetheart.

but but both have been written way more mature and complicated than the PS writers could ever write them ❤️

I love this Raavi, kinda dont like this Cassanova Shiva but I guess the make-up part will be amazonggg, cant wait to read the next parttt ❤️

Also, thankyyou for tagging ❤️❤️

Absolutely fabuloussss. Can not wait for the next part.❤🤩☺️

Aaaamazing!

I didn’t want it to finish… loved the flow of the part.

Shivi are both pinning gor eachother but are unaware

Greatly described all the feelings… loved the shock that Shiva felt the moment he thought he had öost Raavi to someone 👏

Excited for the Next Part❤️

Ritu!!!!

Worth the wait likha hai tune, itna kuch likhna hai mujhe ispe

To sbse phle mujhe meri fav lines likhne de

"Raavi had been the only one with whom he felt comfortable talking about things he'd never imagine voicing out to the world."

Raavi & Shiva having an inseparable bond from the childhood is so so heartwarming ❤️ Shiva letting go Raavi because he thinks she is dating Dev is so like the real Shiva.

"Jab itni sundar ladki mere bagal m already baithi hai to m kyu manage karunga kisi theek thaak wali ke sath?"

Shiva flirting with Raavi without any hestitation, stammering and in his own swag vala style is something to die for Ritu.

"His head had started to hurt with that damn unavailable in the last 3 mins & when she went ahead & clarified what she meant by it he felt relief wash over his senses."

Mera pyara Shiva, mera 3/4th pyar jealous Shiva ke liye res hai, Kaise pareshan ho gaya mera cutiee patotieeee

"tu chahe jitni bhi badi Gadhedi ho par mujhe meri wali Chipkali hi theek hai.."

Meri wali chipkali Not me blushing over this and reading it for nth time now

you've portrayed the emotion so beautifully be it Shiva getting jealous from Sid to Raavi being incapable of confessing her love. From raavi removing her ghunghroo to Shiva feeling the fear of her getting away from him, sab kuch kitna sundar h