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Hey Maami ka Bhogilal, 7k words, bro people like me cannot read through such long write-ups in one sitting lmao, and hence I had to break and read it over the days.

Finally, tera TS aaa hi gaya, mujhe laga iss janam mein toh nahi aayega. And please, the way your write is so phenomenal, I have already mentioned it, but it is too beautiful and makes you wanna keep re-reading.

Coming to the story,

WOW

Raavi a classical dancer and the love she has for dance, the way Dev and she are actual best friends and Rishita is an added bonus here plus the bond she has with everyone at the Pandya Niwas, haayee pure gold man, Love wholesome content and this is wholesome raised to the power of 2.

And Shiva, the ladies' man, uh-huh, pretty sure Shiva if he had his way with words he would be the Shiva you have in your story and the tension between the duo is what I am here for ☺️

Waiting for them to just jump on each other and remove all of their tension and get a room too 🤣

Thank you for penning this beautiful story down, which by the way, is not less than a deeply woven poetry and keep writing.

Your stories are like contents which are blockbuster but comes out rarely and that keeps it more magical.

Thanks for the tag and waiting for the next one (which my attention deficit mind will have to once again break and read lol)

🥳

Aur hai abhi 🤡

Tags!

[Read The Note]

This is the last set of tags I'm sorry if I have missed anyone. 😳

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Review:

Wow!!

Too many emotions and am confused what to say.

I love this Raavi. Probably because she seems to be a lot like me. Raavi's evasion of Shiva, her not wanting to spend time with him, and deciding against telling him of her feelings is so relatable. And it's something we would do, right?! You can't help but feel for her. ❤️

So this Shiva Pandya too makes stupid decisions based on assumptions, huh?! Well, at least he is consistently an ass ( 😆 ). But his story of seeing his mom in pain is so descriptive. We see something hurt someone and we are immediately so wary of it with ever experiencing it. 💔

I love Rishita too!! She reminds me of one of my closest friends, pushing her friend to do more, to explore more. And the more our friends nag, the more endearing they are. 😆

Can't wait for the second part. This is a two-shot, right?! I need the next part no later than day after. Tab tak sab kuch niptaa - editing, proofreading etc. Waiting!!

Rituuuu!!!❤️

Thanks for the tag girl🤗

This was such a good read....It took me back to a memory lane of something similar...Okay wrong track...😆

Let's talk about this beautiful, fantastic piece.

This Raavi is somewhat similar to me.
A nerd hiding her feelings behind books and finding peace in dance.
Damn I can relate with her on so many levels. She is doing what is best for her. The fear of losing all because of one person is real and I legit felt it. ❤️

Coming to Shiva , well he comes out as an idiot and immature jerk. Okay! I can understand his pain, he lost his father and witnessed his mother's pain. But messing up things because of assumptions is an outright stupid thing to do. But again let's give him a benefit of doubt "of being a teenager, where you are anything but clear about your thoughts and wants" (most of the guys are like this).

But I appreciate him for the efforts he is willing to put in getting Raavi back into his life after realising he created a mess and he is solely responsible for all this.👏

That mini heart attack he got at "unavailable" serves u right dude....U deserve such attacks.😆

Rishita is a kind of friend every Raavi need. Loved the besties bond.❤️

I am so in love with this one girl..Thanks for this amazing piece. Waiting for the next one *palke bicha kar*❤️

I loved the story.❤️

The way you have described Raavi and Shiva's feeling, it has touched me right at the center specially Raavi's feeling.❤

I dont know how to say but first part was fab 😍😍

Aa gye hum

To be honest I have opened two tabs... One for page number 1 and other for typing comments. simaltaneoulsy... Kuch miss nahi hona chahiye😆

Rituuu... You have terrific way with which you write your stories, the startings always with a beautiful setting, the dialogues... Everything just looks so real.. Kuddos to you for that❤️.

Raaaviii... She is a princesss through and through.. I understand her defence mechanism. . Her hiding her dilemnas behind her books and dance is just soo perfectly narrated that one cant help but feel for raavi. Her wish for her own family,her fear of loosing pandya family.. Damn... The portrayal👏👏👏

I love this raavi so much. Dignified , poised, determined and serene. ❤️

Shiva...He looks jerk.. But do I blame him.....not exactly....But I do blame the teenage factor here.. Very turbulent phase of life that is... Very rarely we come across teenagers who have absolute clarity of what they want. So yeah... I believe shiva is learning and he will win his inner battles and evolve as a better person.

Shiva's emotion with his mother's pain.. I feel for the boy...but the method he adapted hurt raavi the most.

Lol at... Stop sneaking up at my life like a lead of some daily soap🤣

I am loving rishita here... Best friend goals. Rishita's self talk about raavi had my heart.. That girl indeed has ocean of love within to offer shiva. Rishita playing cupid.. Bring it on girl.

Shiva finally realising he is in deep shit.. Yes you are Mr. Heart throb... Would love to see what he does to sudharo his mistakes of the past and and win over raavi amd prove hself worthy of raavi.

Bonfire ni tha isme😭

Would be waiting for that one... Fastam fasttttt.

I love it Ritu... It was just perfect blend of emotions that you have presented soo beautifully to us. All close to reality.. I could see people behaving in the same manner like you have depicted. The story had a perfect flow... Ekdum makkhan ❤️

Dont ever say again.. Accha nahi likha hai..

This was among the bests I have read.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Heyyya Lovelies!!!

It has been 84 years....🙃

Yeah. Quite literally.

I don't know what or how this concept came into existence. It was the New Year's eve and we were all babbling on the DT after KDice stories and that's probably the moment I got a whiff of a possible story that could be constructed.

So then I began creating a full length plot and it was ready by 2nd January but here I am posting the part one almost 3 months later. LOL WHAT??!

We need help. Truly. 😆

This is a different take on Shivi. Totally no relation to the show and it has a completely different Raavi. She loves Shiva but nothing like what we're getting in the show currently. I've tried to explain all their thoughts and feelings with as much clarity as possible so I would advise you to NOT SKIP between the lines pls. You could get lost in the maze. Lmao.

Also this wouldn't have been possible without one person and that beautiful human is @Pottermeow. Sathya - you beautiful gem...I really couldn't have done this without you. From helping me with all the conflicts in my head about these characters to LITERALLY WRITING the dialogues for the last scene of this part. This would have never existed without her.

And also @VaishnaviG who had to keep up with my cribbing throughout. Sorry girl but you will do that for life now. 🤭🤭

I hope y'all don't sleep in the middle of reading this. 😅🥲🥲

Also We Love LONG comments...so...I mean yeah. 😳

Lots of love,

Ritu. ❤️

PS : IF has been making me edit since 7:20 pm...its 8:22 now. 💔🤡

You have put a loooooot of hard work Ritu🤗

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

the way you feel relaxed after you take off the ghoogroo is on another level 😖ahahahah😚

Believe me I KNOWWWW 🤡

Originally posted by: VNuts

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Review:

Wow!!

Too many emotions and am confused what to say.

I love this Raavi. Probably because she seems to be a lot like me. Raavi's evasion of Shiva, her not wanting to spend time with him, and deciding against telling him of her feelings is so relatable. And it's something we would do, right?! You can't help but feel for her. ❤️

So this Shiva Pandya too makes stupid decisions based on assumptions, huh?! Well, at least he is consistently an ass ( 😆 ). But his story of seeing his mom in pain is so descriptive. We see something hurt someone and we are immediately so wary of it with ever experiencing it. 💔

I love Rishita too!! She reminds me of one of my closest friends, pushing her friend to do more, to explore more. And the more our friends nag, the more endearing they are. 😆

Can't wait for the second part. This is a two-shot, right?! I need the next part no later than day after. Tab tak sab kuch niptaa - editing, proofreading etc. Waiting!!

Awww thank you so much!

Hope it wasn't boring lol

Glad you resonate to this Raavi...I just wanted to let her go differently this time. Sane, mature, opinionated in a good way.

This Shiva is a daft lol...he ain't an ass...he just mind numbingly stupid 😆

Still better than the show. Writing Suman and Darshan's equation was probably the easiest I've written here...the toughest here was Shiva himself. I'd created him SO OFF and chaotic that it has taken me a LONG time to get him right. Probably still not satisfied.

I like Rishita thought might as well use it somewhere...had half a mind to include dev but LMAO can't imagine his sanity anywhere

I haven't finished writing. I'm on the last scene still...probably will take me till Saturday...yeah probably.

Originally posted by: Kfof

I loved the story.❤️

The way you have described Raavi and Shiva's feeling, it has touched me right at the center specially Raavi's feeling.❤

I dont know how to say but first part was fab 😍😍

Awwww Thank you so muccchhhhhh Kshama. ❤️❤️

Glad you liked it...mehnat safal meri 😆