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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Drabble 1:

I love Jealous Shiva, but I wish he hadn't raised Raavi's hopes like that. But considering the prologue, I'm okay with it. 😆

Shiva is such a pain, right?! Na khud Raavi se shaadi karni hai par kissi aur ko bhi karne nahi dega. 🤪

And Raavi is epic. Her dimaag went to all the naughty places, where as Shiva was referring to food. 🤣

Looking forward to the next part!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Drabble 2: Cold Showers


Shiva's eyes opened as he detected a movement near the angaan. He drowsily opened his eyes to check the time.


2 am, it read.


Puzzled, he got up to check who was up at this late. His steps halted as he saw Raavi hurriedly walk to their room, Water dripping from her long hair, Her wet clothes from the day clutched tightly in her arms.


'Why was this Chipkali bathing so late at night?' he wondered as he soundlessly tiptoed to their room, curious about her antics.

He was unable to fall asleep as various thoughts clouded his mind. Why was he so lost in these thoughts you ask? His sudden act of jealousy and possessiveness had disturbed his hatred, to a very high extent.


He was ready to push her away as he was absolutely done with her. But why was he not able to come to terms with seeing him with another man, let alone imagine her happy with someone else?


His love for her was overpowering his hatred, and he was trying to hold on to his hatred as much as he can. But he knew this vixen was not letting him move away from her. True to the popular term 'Chipkali' which he called her adoringly, she was glued to his heart with such a permanent fix, the moment he is trying to move away, with the glue, he is feeling himself being bound to her, and there was no way out of this.


His thoughts were disoriented and he was finding it hard to reach a conclusion. Yet again, he was stuck between whether she deserves a chance or not. He felt agitated when those ladies talked ill about her, and he just wanted to rip their voices from their throats to even dare utter such nonsense for his Raavi. But surprisingly, rather than getting offended by their harsh claims and accusations, she was calm, and she stood confidently for their relationship, which he had declared that he didn't want.


But it seems like she was not losing hope. She was testing her love and faith in God.


"Omph" a loud shriek of pain brought him back from his thoughts. His eyes quickly dashed to her to check what happened and his eyes widened as he saw her sprawled on the floor, clutching her foot for support.


His tongue clicked his teeth as he struggled whether he should go and help her. But then this would mean that her presence still affected him and knowing this fact, his Chipkali will start bouncing in happiness.


And he couldn't afford that. He felt bad when he saw there were silent tears as she tried to stop herself from crying in pain as she tried to soothe her foot.


'F*ck it..' He thought as he shrugged and rushed to her aid, picking her up bridal style and carrying her to the bed, lightly settling her twisted foot.


"Puri ki puri pagal hai yeh ladki. Aadhi raat ko nahati hai, fir paani pe slip hoke girti hai. Pata nahi iss khali dimag mein kya khichdi pakti rehti hai.." He grumbled as he inspected her almost swollen foot.


He pulled open a drawer beside the bed table and applied the ointment, unknown to the storm that was brewing inside Raavi.

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Raavi cringed as she felt his fingers gently massage over her injured foot. Too ashamed to voice out her feelings, she just wanted to bury herself inside her quilt to hide her embarrassment.


She sniffed lightly as the pain was unbearable. The pain of her heart, which was screaming for love. The pain of her body, that craved her Man's attention. She was no saint, she had relieved herself from all the sexual thoughts by masturbation since she knew having an intimate relationship with Shiva was going to take time.


She was okay with it, as her imagination with Shiva pleasuring her body was enough to make her wet was okay, But for the past few days, she was unable to have these thoughts as she was stressed with all kinds of thoughts.


It had been 3 weeks that she had confessed to him, and almost over a month when she had realized her feelings for him. Honestly, when she heard about Rishita's pregnancy, she felt jealous that the girl was lucky. She was getting 'it' happily from her husband, who was madly in love with her and they were now ready to start their own family.


And here, she was all waiting for the acceptance of her feelings by her Man, who was a tough nut to crack and was not even thinking of giving her a chance. She had tried all the things, but none of them were working for her. Even when she stood close to him, he had no effect of their closeness as he kept himself busy in glaring the hell out of her.


If her waiting for a perfect plan to convince Shiva to marry her wasn't enough, the pain of not being able to have an orgasm was adding up to her miseries. She had visited the doctor to know more about her problem, Only to meltdown in shame in embarrassment.


She was suffering from some sexual disorder, and she was advised a Psychosexual therapy. Psychosexual therapy may help a woman overcome orgasm problems. It involves exploring her feelings about herself, sex, and her relationship.


In brutally honest words, the doctor had told her the problem. She was not sufficient in attracting her man. Shiva was not sexually attracted to her. With all the closeness and her wearing some revealing outfits, in a shameless attempt to attract Shiva, she had made such a brutal fool out of herself. What was the point to even getting that therapy when she knew it was not gonna help her?


And to even think of something about intimacy at this point, when her relationship with Shiva was on the verge to end. Her heart cried in silent despair as she could see a probability that she might never get to be intimate with Shiva.


With a heavy heart, she snatched her feet from his hold, who was slightly blowing on her foot, and the fool was not even aware what a simple blow from those delectable lips of his on her exposed, freshly out of shower body was doing to her senses.


"Yeh sab dikhawa karne ki zaroorat nahi hai Shiva. Mein theek hun." She whispered in a low tone, desperately trying to control her pounding heart.


Her heart was also playing games with her. Reacting to small gestures from Shiva, when her body was not even responding to her sexual urges.

----


Shiva was taken aback by the sudden change in her demeanor. However, he couldn't think more as he saw nail marks on her neck and upper chest.


Nail marks on her neck? He gulped as he looked away, trying hard to distract himself.


Before he could stop himself, his hand reached out to her neck, as his fingers lightly grazed the nail marks.


"Yeh kiske naakhun ke nishaan hai Raavi?" he wondered as she looked startled at his question. He lightly pressed the nail marks, trying to figure out where did the nail marks come from.


She knew if she didn't divert him, he will make her spill the beans, and she had enough of the embarrassment for the day and didn't wanted Shiva to add one more to the list.


So she quickly blurted an excuse. "Kuch nahi, Billi ke hain. Abhi to jaa. Mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Tu so jaa aur mujhe bhi sone de." And with that she pulled the blanket above her head clearly avoiding showing any part of her body.


He frowned at his Chipkali's antics as he made his way out.


What was wrong with this girl?

Why was she acting weird like that?



I know again a short one, But I hope you are getting the wind of where this Drabble is leading to...

Stay Tuned!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

That's something new and different in my perspective

Loved it

Let's see how will he figure it out, which billi is giving the marks to his Chipkali 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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OH MY GAWD this is so different and I am already so psyched about it!!


SUPER PSYCHED!!!


Cannot wait to see how this unfolds such a different take of Raavi.


IN LOVE ALREDY!


Update soon. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Oh you bet I am getting the wind of where this is going and I’ve unfurled my sails for full power ahead.


Also, I wanted to say kudos for exploring Raavi’s sensual needs. More often than not, that POV is always shown from the male character. But this Raavi knows what she wants and is bechari desperately trying to satiate her wants by herself. I hope, nah, no, I know she has a pretty active imagination and I’m glad for her 😆 kyunki inasmuch as everyone calls Raavi a dobi, avval number ka doba tho woh Bhootnath hai.

I hope he doesn’t let go of the nail marks though and pursues her to find out the truth… about just how she desperately she loves, needs and craves him!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I just want to say this is indeed so good .... no no indeed a great update


Here's why-

Exploring Raavi's needs as I really wondered in many ffs,os,ts they explored the hidden needs of Shiva but to be very precise , yaar ladkiyon ke bhi inner feelings hoti hai and it felt so good to read it

I'm literally feeling like uhhh girl , nail marks jald hi tumhara pati bhi dega just thoda sabar rakhlo


And Shiva just blurt the beans out of your dobis mouth so that you both could be on the same page...

And the doctor consultation felt like so logical... show mein toh yeh sab dikhaane se rahe

Edited by Shru_thebaadal - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Drabble 3: The lost essence..


Shiva sighed in frustration. Today was the third day that he saw those damn nail marks on Raavi's neck, and they looked more angry and prominent on her milky skin, which she had so desperately tried to hide from her makeup.


But it was all futile when he had his narrowed and calculative gaze fixated on her neck.


'Aisi kaunsi billi padi hai is Chipkali ke peeche jo ise hi apna shikar banake rakha hai. Kuch to gadbad hai. Pata lagana padega.' He thought as he saw her hiss in pain as she stretched her mane to talk to Dhara about something.

With absolute determination, he continued to work in the store, silently devising a plan to find out what exactly was wrong with the girl.

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Raavi exited the Doctor's clinic clutching the medications tightly in her palms. The last 2 days were an absolute disaster as she tried to control the sudden burning of her body. And not only her chest, her bre*sts, but also her lower region was burning. This was worse than the period cramps that she suffered from. She was not able to figure out what exactly was happening to her, and it was equally frustrating and embarrassing to explain her situation to the Doctor too!


'This is absolutely normal Mrs Raavi, Aapki condition mein aisa hota hai. Aapki body is reacting to it's sexual urges. And jaise ki aapne mujhe bataya, Aapke pati see aapki ladayi chal rahi hai, to sexual intercourse muskil hai. But don't worry, marine aapko kuch dawayi likh ke di hain. Inko 1 week ke liye lijiye. Aapko itni gehri need aayegi ki aapko aapke sexual urges ka hosh hi nahi rahega. Continuously 1 week ke liye yeh medications follow kariye, fir hum dekhte hain ki aapki progress kaisi hai. Okay?'


She dreaded that her situation will worsen if this 1 week didn't pull through properly. She knew she saw uncertainty leak from the Doctor's eyes during the whole conversation, even though she tried to appear confident.

'Bass ek baar yeh dawayi meri condition mein madad kar de. Nahi to Shiva se meri shaadi ke plan mein main zyaada kuch soch nahi paungi.'


And she knew she had to avoid Shiva as much as could, her hormones would shoot up, and then after he leaves her alone, she wouldn't even make it to find a solution to her lack or orga*sm condition.

'What's the point of lighting the candle when the wax is wet?'

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After Dinner and lots of avoiding Shiva, Raavi settled herself on the bed, nervous enough to trust the medicine.


'Will this really work?' That was her only question. But she had no other option rather than to go with the Doctor's words.


So she ate the medicine and laid down on the bed, mentally praying that she falls asleep as soon as she closes her eyes. And true to the doctor's words, she drifted to sleep within seconds.


A small smile settled on her lips, her subconscious mind celebrating that the medicine had miraculously worked.

But unknown to her, her Bhootnath who was silently observing her knew he had to put his plan to action.

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Shiva jumped inside from the window as she had closed the door and sat beside her on the bed.


Thankfully she was sleeping on her back, and this gave him a perfect view of her neck, which was covered by her duppatta. He gulped down his fear to touch her when she was not awake, but he knew he had to do it one way or the other. So slowly, his hands hovered over her neck, and slowly his fingers brushed against her skin as he clutched the dupatta within his fingers but his body froze as he gasped as she moved.


'Ummm' a silent moan of relief escaped her lips as she wetted her lips and moved her head to the other side, but remained asleep. Shiva had absolutely lost his sense of thinking after hearing the moan. Was she even capable of emitting sounds like these? She sounded like a Cheshire cat, who was enjoying an intimate rub from her owner.


Although their situation was different. He was her husband, ex-husband to be precise, who was curious to find out why his Chipkali was covered in nail marks.


And he was terribly failing, because the moment he pulled her dupatta, her exposed skin came into his view, and the milky white skin made him shudder in anticipation. Raavi was a girl, who unlike Rishita knew how to turn even a sophisticated dress into sensual clothing even though she didn't go for sparkly outfits. And he absolutely adored the way she dressed, which always made her desirable in his eyes.


And it has been a hard task to control his eyes to drink her beauty in the most shameless way. How could he have controlled himself for so long was something even he couldn't answer.


He shuddered as his fingers caressed her neck absentmindedly, and she made some more purring noises. He was absolutely loving the fact that she was responding to his touch in such a manner, which was boosting his ego.


Slowly, He removed the dupatta, and he couldn't help but take a whiff of her scent on the dupatta. The duppata smelt somewhat floral, with a slight hint of sweat. He felt proud of his Chipkali. Just like he worked tirelessly in the Store, she worked equally in the kitchen, making sure his Dhara Bhabhi is getting the help.


But he didn't know that he will feel attracted to her sweaty scent. He never cared what people thought of his sweaty appearance, but he didn't know that he'd like someone's sweaty smell so much. The romantic part in his heart was still not able to help thinking that her smell was communicating something to him. He was finding her sweat to be something deeper than what he could see, touch, hear or taste. He had touched her before, no doubt, but to smell her scent, he felt like he was touching her mentally, and he could bet no one had touched Raavi mentally like he was doing.

Like right now. He felt like he was seeing a very new side of Raavi's beauty, and strangely he was getting attracted like a moth. He wanted more.


He sniffed the dupatta like a dog, unable to pull his mind away from the delectable smell. His mind shuddered again as his heart pushed an intimate Raavi sprawled underneath him, all sweaty after a long night of love and passion.


He shook his head, trying to focus on the task in hand. He threw the duppata to the other side of the bed and leaned closer. As if her body was expecting the move, Raavi's head tilted back too as she mumbled incoherent words in her sleep, her fingers clutching the pillow tightly.


Now his eyes widened as an arched Raavi laid in front of him, and now he could guess that his breath was falling on her exposed skin, as Raavi continued to purr in her sleep, making it extremely difficult for him to inspect the nail marks.

And if all the situation wasn't enough, suddenly he saw her arms moving and wrapping around his, pulling him close to her, such that, now he laid over her, his hands dangerously close to her body, his upper body pasted on hers. He struggled to silently remove himself from the grip, but alas!


Her grip on his neck was so tight, even his strength was failing in front of her!


He cursed his stars at what had he gotten himself into?




So Shiva is directly going for the hit?

Do you think Raavi will get relief from the medicine or someone will have to step in to help her?

Stay Tuned!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Damn!


The guy's in a soup now. Hehe.😆


And guess who loves it?❤️


ME!


I am so excited for the next one to see what happens and how they react once they wake up. Because lets face it we gonna have a field day there.


Poor girl is really beyond frustrated!!


I have a feeling HE would be the one to relieve her from her never ending want. 😉


Update soon bub. This is going amazing. ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

That was amazing

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This sounds so interesting....so beautifully expressed the situation by using perfect word that not only reflect their physical but emotional state also❤❤❤

Waiting for the next part

I am hoping that this drabble doesn't ends here it has another part

Update soon excitement is at Peak

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