Shivi Drabble Series: Lifeline - Drabble 9 updated !! Pg 18 - Page 12

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Fu*k that was hot 🥵 Shiva put her needs before his 😌 talk about a considerate aashiq 🤪 Thanks for updating so regularly!

holy hell😮☺️

that was so f*cking hot...

looking forward to your next update

And he felt like hitting himself. He almost gave her all the pleasure and forgot her lips. What about devouring before moving down to base 2? He skipped the first base and directly jumped to base 2.

Yk what sab kuch padhne ke baad I really felt like meine kuch chod diya tabhi toh lip kiss hi nhi hua😔

But no Shiva Pandya being Shiva Pandya

He directly went to base 2 and first base ka kya🤣

OK so now overall talks:

"Aise kaise marne deta tujhe. Pagal hai tu? Tu mar jaati to kya mein zinda reh paata? Bol?"

My boi he will never let his chipkali get harmed or be in pain so easily & at the moment he knows the reason so how could he let that happen 😭

He knew the perfect solution to her problem. Or situation to be precise...

HE himself was the solution.

Exactly yhi baat toh kabse samjh jaani chahiye thi but koi nhi

Jab jaago tab savera 😃

"Uss Doctor se agli baar milo to unko bolna ki apni degree faad ke phenk de kachre ke dibbe mein. Meri patni ki condition ko agar koi theek kar sakta hai..." he removed his shirt from his other hand, his vest right after.." To woh sirf aur sirf uska pati hai."

Waise being a science student Shiva made me somewhat offended but koi na he knows about the inner pleasure of his wife more well than the Dr. So ..

YEH BHI THEEK HAI

And some whole mentions cause one line will not do justice .....

The pain from which Raavi was suffering😭🥺 , it would be so much frustrating for her to not get the desired pleasure and it makes me more sad & I want to cry for my bby girl but no worries I believe in my boi My Shiva he will surely make Raavi cure & normal soon👍🏼

Though it wasn't the whole deed but

Husssh now I can believe we will get the deed soon☺️😳

Loved the chapter ❤❤❤situation & emotion of shivi is expressed very nicely

But I am slightly disappointed with raavi getting convinced so easily I did not want her to forgive shiva so easily & I was expecting ki shiva ko raavi ki condition k baare me patch UP hone k pahale pata chale but I know u r a Great writer if you thought about any plot it Must be interesting 🥰🥰

Keeping faith in your khurafati mind & writing skills waiting for an update