Shivi TS 18+|| Kuch Iss Tarah || completed (Part 2 on pg 4) - Page 2

Oh my god this is sooo beautiful and cuteee and please please continue this ya!!!

Waiting for an update!

you write so well,can you pls continue if possible

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Dekho mai kuch nahin sunungi .. this NEEDS to be more than an OS .. aise kaise yahan rok dogs. Bohut naa insaafi hai😳☢️

PLEASE !!!

Kitna pyara tha yeh .. that hug had me melting into a puddle ☺️

I cant wait to read the next chapter 😍

Thank you so much, Barkha! I will try to continue this story :) If you have any suggestions then please let me know!

Hello everyone! Thank you so much for the overwhelming response to my first fanfiction! I have decided to make this a TS!! Currently, I'm unsure as to where I want to take this story so if you guys have any suggestions then let me know! Make sure you tag me! 😉

Will come back with longer comments later, but for now I'd just like to say that I love this story, and that you should definitely continue it! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Will come back with longer comments later, but for now I'd just like to say that I love this story, and that you should definitely continue it! ❤️

I’m a big fan of your writing! Having you comment on my piece is extremely overwhelming for me! Thanks for your kind words ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: nolee3097

I love it ❤️
Shiva's feelings. The uncertainty and confusion that we get to see him witness as he navigates himself towards his MamiKiBehenKiBeti, is sooo cute

Aw! Thank you so much for noticing the little details! If you have any suggestions for the next part then let me know!

Originally posted by: mandira2

I’m a big fan of your writing! Having you comment on my piece is extremely overwhelming for me! Thanks for your kind words ❤️❤️

He he... A fan, you say? I'm flattered and blushing away at the same time right now. Can I hope for a comment on my works from now on then? 😳

PS What may I call you? Just Mandira? Or something else?

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

He he... A fan, you say? I'm flattered and blushing away at the same time right now. Can I hope for a comment on my works from now on then? 😳

PS What may I call you? Just Mandira? Or something else?

Yes of course! You can call me Mandira :)

Awww, I am seeing more pre- marriage Shiva and Raavi stories in the forum these days and this one is just ❤️

Is Shiva slowly falling for MKBKB, even though he claims to hate her? 😆 Raavi is no less either 😆

I think you should continue and make this OS into an SS and write how they fall in love and their next cute interactions can be during Dev- Rishita marriage 😍

Looking forward to reading more of your creations ❤️