ShiVi OS- My Mess

Hello beautiful people,

This is something I wrote a few days back (it is based on the current track)

Ignore the technicalities the way Pandya writers ignore logic 😆

Hope you like it…

Enjoy😊

My mess

Shiva had a weird dream, he imagined Dev to be Raavi and was too embarrassed to even talk about it. He just left the store hurriedly. On his walk back home, he thought of the last few days when he insulted Raavi. Shiva was talking to himself.

“The bond that I see between Dhara bhabhi and Gautam, why can’t I have the same with Raavi?”

“Because she is not Dhara bhabhi.” Dev said it, finally catching up with Shiva.

Shiva was astonished, seeing Dev standing next to him with hands on his knees and breathing heavily.

“What?” Shiva asked.

“I am saying you are foolish, in fact both of us are stupid. We look at everything from a single parameter and that is Dhara bhabhi. Why can’t we see at our wives the way they want us to.” Dev said it in one go which confused Shiva a lot.

“What do you mean?”

“I am saying what we are doing is wrong.”

“Why are you talking like Rishita bhabhi. What is wrong in pointing out where Raavi is wrong.”

“The wrong is instead of looking at our flaws, we are pointing out their mistakes, which technically are not mistakes. Listen…” Just then Shiva’s phone started ringing and he was called to the hospital by his mom.

By now, Shiva and Raavi have realised one thing that wherever their family will go, a kaand will follow. This time, the whole Anita fiasco happened which made Shiva angry on Raavi and Raavi got upset with Shiva. To impress Suman and Gautam, Anita did not file a police complaint against Shiva but she was genuinely upset with Shiva

Anita was sitting in her room, talking to herself. “I am not going to forgive you, Shiva. You cut my hair.”

“You are upset, di, I know.” Raavi said while standing near the entrance of Anita’s room.

“Thank God you came here. Shiva is a hooligan. Look what he did to me. I am so glad you left him.”

“Who told you I have left him? I will go back in some time. I am just giving us some time.”

Anita was shocked hearing all this. She expected Raavi to be angry on Shiva.

“You are not upset with him?” She asked Raavi.

“I am. But that should not concern you. By the way, I went back to the hospital to get back your reports.”

Anita’s eyes widened in surprise. She was about to concoct a story when Raavi started talking.

“No need to lie anymore. I know what you have done. No one is going to believe me and I am not going to waste my time in playing guilty-not guilty with you, Dhara di, Gautam and Shiva.”

“Raavi, but what Shiva did to me-“

“It was absolutely wrong. But I know two wrongs won’t make a right. You better stay away from me and my married life. Shiva is a hooligan but he is my hooligan, he is a mess but he is my mess. I will handle him. I don’t want you or anyone to interfere in between my married life when your own life is in shambles.”

With that, Raavi left the room and came downstairs where Shiva was already waiting for her.

“Listen, I know what I did was non-pardonable but… I can apologise to Anita also.”

“No need for that. Why are you here?” Raavi asked crossing her arms.

“Gaumbi told me to come here and apologise to you and Anita-“

“Nothing else?”

“Ummm…actually. Umm…yeah…nothing…” Shiva was trying to form a coherent sentence to make sure Raavi comes with him but he was failing at it and that too badly.

Raavi was just observing his behaviour and was shaking her head. “Shiva, you know what. You need to grow up. I have adored Gaumbi and Dhara di all my life but…but even I can see the hold they have over you. You are married, to me. I will come back with you when you will get to know the meaning of this word- marriage.”

Shiva was stunned hearing Raavi say all this to him. He was trying to understand why Gautam and Dhara’s name was getting dragged into his married life but just then, it clicked when he got a flashback of all the instances where he disregarded Raavi and compared her to Dhara. He was embarrassed and emotional at the same time for treating Raavi the way he did. A small tear made its way through his eye which Raavi noticed.

“I will become worthy of you. Soon” with that, Shiva rubbed the tear and left a baffled Raavi who knew what Shiva meant by it. Now, she just has to wait.

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Thank you for reading 😊

PS. The inspiration for the title came from a scene in a show “One Tree Hill” 😊

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Sanchi I loved it❤️ though I felt Dev was being a big hypocrite

Lekin hassh last mein hi Sahi usko samaj aaya

Awesome it was !!!

❤❤❤❤

It was was awesome

Dev talking something rational can happen only in fanfics 😂😛😛

Raavi finally tired of feeling guilty all the time without any fault of her is something i really want to see in the show i really want to see her being all tired fighting and proving everyone why she is right and raavi calling shiva her mess hayee dil le lo mera this haq they have on each other 💗💗

And finally shiva realising his mistake i liked that part shiva usse apne saath ghr leke nahi gya

but here what i feel is shiva is totally worthy of raavi it's jst that he need to learn the difference that his wife and bhabhi r 2 different persons and can have different povs and isliye woh raavi ko apne sath nahi leke gya to learn this difference more seriously(wholly my pov)

love your writing 💜

Loved it Sanchi! A much needed realisation at this point... ❤️

Sanchi🤗 perfect! Just loved it ❤️

It makes so much sense for Raavi to say it and Shiva to hear it and his promise to correct himself eventually.

Can we get this in the show? I guess not 😔

Shiva is conditioned to do dhara jaap from his childhood. He will take time to get rid of this crap. I liked the way u made his realization regarding dhara and raavi. It is needed in the show. But as per the segment and today's episode, I won't agree in certain things and I really want Raavi to mend her mistakes too. In your story, u just gave general brief of that hospital fiasco but if it matches with the segment, then definitely both are at faults. Raavi shouldn't have slapped Shiva and should have stopped Gaumbi from hitting Shiva. Slapping was totally wrong and unjustified , also Shiva should have controlled his temper regarding Anita. And about worth, Shiva has a done way more things to prove that. He is the only one who risked his life for Raavi and wanted to leave her despite loving her just for her good. Raavi took a lot of time to see the real face of Dhara, 1 month earlier only, she used to do dhara jaap and had kept her above everyone. So for Shiva, it will definitely take time.

Originally posted by: Twinkle333

Shiva is conditioned to do dhara jaap from his childhood. He will take time to get rid of this crap. I liked the way u made his realization regarding dhara and raavi. It is needed in the show. But as per the segment and today's episode, I won't agree in certain things and I really want Raavi to mend her mistakes too. In your story, u just gave general brief of that hospital fiasco but if it matches with the segment, then definitely both are at faults. Raavi shouldn't have slapped Shiva and should have stopped Gaumbi from hitting Shiva. Slapping was totally wrong and unjustified , also Shiva should have controlled his temper regarding Anita. And about worth, Shiva has a done way more things to prove that. He is the only one who risked his life for Raavi and wanted to leave her despite loving her just for her good. Raavi took a lot of time to see the real face of Dhara, 1 month earlier only, she used to do dhara jaap and had kept her above everyone. So for Shiva, it will definitely take time.

Thank you for your feedback ❤️

I did not want to write about the hospital part in detail but yes, you are right…Raavi is also wrong in hitting Shiva. I did not address it because for me, Raavi has already suffered a lot…may be if I will continue it, I will show Raavi apologising too..

For me, Shiva will be worthy of her if he accepts where he is wrong; saving her life, loving her won’t do. He has to correct his past mistakes.

I stopped following the show🤬

This was so well written❤️