Shivi os- Madness updated part 2 on page 7(complete) - Page 3

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Yaaar Pixie Behen ruki kyun?

Likhti rehti naaa yaaaaarrrr

Kitna acha lag raha tha 😭❤️

Raavi's crying and Shiva's Hug were the best things for me.

The way Raavi spoke in the start about her love was very intense.

The tree scene? Bomb asf.

Dhara Bhabhi harr jagah bhasad hi krengi haina? Unka fix hai. 🤪

Rahul ki tho 😡

Aur dhona tha usko ache se.

Loved the whole vibe of this piece.

Jaldi likhna part 2 haaan...😳

Thank you so much for your support ritu ❤️

I am glad you found raavi's love intense.thats exactly how I wanted it to be.what if raavi was madly in love with shiva since childhood and not dev?the girl loves deeply, she drunk the ashes of Dev's photo when her maasima Burned it on the show.

Jaldi likhungi ❣️

Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved it ❤❤❤

Thank you kshama for your constant support ❤️

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Lovely 😍

Do continue soon.

Thank you dear ❣️

Originally posted by: Scribble19

This was such a good read 😊

There are so many things that clicked for me:-

1) Calling out abusive behaviour.

2) Protective Shiva- be it the guy or his mother, he wants to save her

3) Raavi, taking matters in her own hands byvtalking to his mother

Loved it ❤️

Thank you dear ❣️

I am so glad these things clicked with you.thats exactly what I wanted to convey.

This was so adorable ❤️

Maybe I missed their confession, or the reader was just supposed to assume it, but either way I loved what I read!!

1. Raavi completely disagreeing Dhara's abusive behaviour is what I liked the most.

2. Protective shiva is my favourite kind of shiva, especially if it's for his dobi

3. Raavi wanting to sort out issues with Suman on her own.

Just take my heart!

Shiva and Raavi being in their comfort zone and so soft around each other is all i want to see! Can't wait for the next part, do tag!!

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

This was so adorable ❤️

Maybe I missed their confession, or the reader was just supposed to assume it, but either way I loved what I read!!

1. Raavi completely disagreeing Dhara's abusive behaviour is what I liked the most.

2. Protective shiva is my favourite kind of shiva, especially if it's for his dobi

3. Raavi wanting to sort out issues with Suman on her own.

Just take my heart!

Shiva and Raavi being in their comfort zone and so soft around each other is all i want to see! Can't wait for the next part, do tag!!

Thank you so much megs ❤️

You didnt miss anything.it was supposed to be this way 😆

Raavi maybe naive and innocent, but she is strong and determined when she is in love.we have seen a glimpse of that raavi earlier and I so want her back for shiva. 😒

Protective shiva for his dobi is my fav too.

I will tag you when I am done with the next part ❣️

I loved this

during the first two para me be like 😲😵

after that 😚😁😘

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

I don't have a index, I write randomly whatever comes to my head.

I have thought of creating one.may take some time but I will tag you ❣️

U write randamly bt it's good ...

I request you to maintain index ...

Whenever you get time do it...

This is amazing Pixie🥳

Loved your writing😳

ShiVi 🔥

Loved it🤗

Well written. Waiting for part 2. Update soon