Shivi os- Madness updated part 2 on page 7(complete) - Page 2

Lovely 😍

Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Thank you dear🤗

I will ❣️

If possible kindly provide ur index of stories...

It would be great!!!

Pixie🤗!!! You're on a roll these days and I'm loving it so so much!!!

I loved how you started it off, "Shiva", like a prayer, and then later you followed up on it with the "Bhagwan se zyada" line when they were talking about the trust. Protective Shiva is my absolute favourite, and so it goes without saying that I loved how he helped her go against Rahul and keep her safe from him right from the beginning. Also, Raavi was equally protective with how she recognised the slap as abuse, intentional or not, and vowed to prevent it as much as she could❤️. Rishita here reminds me of newly wed Rishita, but even more arrogant, but I'll wait for the next part to pass my judgement.

Also, the ending? How Shiva didn't want her to talk alone with his mother because he didn't want her to have to listen to all those taane? Had my whole heart!!!! ❤️

I'm assuming the next part will in involve Suman closely, but I'm curious about whether she will be redeemed or not. Mami at least implied agreement to things pretty quickly when she realised how serious Raavi was, but how much does Suman Pandya the mother hold sway over Suman Pandya the sethani? 😆

Originally posted by: freebird_dd

If possible kindly provide ur index of stories...

It would be great!!!

I don't have a index, I write randomly whatever comes to my head.

I have thought of creating one.may take some time but I will tag you ❣️

PixieI love this madness😍

Raavi though dobi, is in love with Shiva from the get go😆 How did this happen? Dev was never in the picture at all? 😆 Anyway good though she is a prefect match for the ulti kopdiwaala, juggadlu, and sanki Shiva😆

Loved reading how they are there for each other, be it when Dhara slapped or when Rahul tried to misbehave with Raavi.

Now can’t wait to read what Raavi will do to her married to him since both Suman and Mami cannot stand each other.😆

This was such a good read 😊

There are so many things that clicked for me:-

1) Calling out abusive behaviour.

2) Protective Shiva- be it the guy or his mother, he wants to save her

3) Raavi, taking matters in her own hands byvtalking to his mother

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Pixie🤗!!! You're on a roll these days and I'm loving it so so much!!!

I loved how you started it off, "Shiva", like a prayer, and then later you followed up on it with the "Bhagwan se zyada" line when they were talking about the trust. Protective Shiva is my absolute favourite, and so it goes without saying that I loved how he helped her go against Rahul and keep her safe from him right from the beginning. Also, Raavi was equally protective with how she recognised the slap as abuse, intentional or not, and vowed to prevent it as much as she could❤️. Rishita here reminds me of newly wed Rishita, but even more arrogant, but I'll wait for the next part to pass my judgement.

Also, the ending? How Shiva didn't want her to talk alone with his mother because he didn't want her to have to listen to all those taane? Had my whole heart!!!! ❤️

I'm assuming the next part will in involve Suman closely, but I'm curious about whether she will be redeemed or not. Mami at least implied agreement to things pretty quickly when she realised how serious Raavi was, but how much does Suman Pandya the mother hold sway over Suman Pandya the sethani? 😆

Thank you so much saathya for your constant support and encouragement 🤗

I had envisioned shivi as two people who have their own world and are fiercely protective of each other.the show had given us many such hints in the early days.be it the choti raavi who did a chole andolan,who flinched everytime the kidnappers hit him, be it shiva who protected her at every step despite the claimed hate.

Imagine the care when they are in love? It didn't go well with me when raavi silently watched shiva getting beaten up during danda kaand.it didn't go well with me when shiva stood silent when his mother was hurling insults at raavi and poking her with a stick.

The next part does involve suman 😆

Yaaar Pixie Behen ruki kyun?

Likhti rehti naaa yaaaaarrrr

Kitna acha lag raha tha 😭❤️

Raavi's crying and Shiva's Hug were the best things for me.

The way Raavi spoke in the start about her love was very intense.

The tree scene? Bomb asf.

Dhara Bhabhi harr jagah bhasad hi krengi haina? Unka fix hai. 🤪

Rahul ki tho 😡

Aur dhona tha usko ache se.

Loved the whole vibe of this piece.

Jaldi likhna part 2 haaan...😳

Originally posted by: mpks1

PixieI love this madness😍

Raavi though dobi, is in love with Shiva from the get go😆 How did this happen? Dev was never in the picture at all? 😆 Anyway good though she is a prefect match for the ulti kopdiwaala, juggadlu, and sanki Shiva😆

Loved reading how they are there for each other, be it when Dhara slapped or when Rahul tried to misbehave with Raavi.

Now can’t wait to read what Raavi will do to her married to him since both Suman and Mami cannot stand each other.😆

Thank you premaa for encouraging me with such warm words on whatever I write 🤗

raavi ka focus bachpan se sahi jagah tha 😉

I had always imagined shivi to be there for each other, have each other's back no matter what the situation is.they can mess with each other, but no third person is allowed to do so.show mai to nahi hoga, so here is my khayali pulao 😆

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was beautiful.....

Want part 2 soonish.....

😘🥰😍

Thank you dear ❣️