Loved the story, there are various things u have mentioned which by now, I've accepted that it will not happen in the show. 1st one was Raavi's madness and extreme devotion and respect for Shiva. I just loved it. I always wanted Raavi to be like this but I didn't get it in the show. 2nd was Shiva and maami's proper conversation. I loved how they can go any extremes for their love. I loved how Raavi objected about the physical violence. Slapping is also abuse. Suman and Raavi's relationship was also nicely portrayed. About Shiva, we have seen his madness and possessiveness in the show. So it was not new for me. But here, it was more wonderfully portrayed. Their romantic scenes were also cute specially the kiss and the back hug. Please write more stories like this.