Shiva Raavi - Alternative Universe DT#79 - Page 9

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Originally posted by: loveableangel

Wasn't KD followers ar 361 just yesterday? He seems to have lost a lot of followers. I wonder why

Originally posted by: Unnati05

it must be some glitch, this is happening since past week

Ohhh that makes sense. It made more sense for him to lose followers during the disha kaand.

Originally posted by: Saakshi2k

Okay I thought of writing something related to latest segment where dhara is listening to music and raavi asking her why she is so happy and then leaves to the room.

This is purely my imagination and yes I am not that good at writing so please bear😆

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So raavi goes to her room irritated at dhara for letting dev rishita leave the house. Shiva follows and finds her walking to and fro around the room. He can't tell her the truth because she is "pet ki kacchi".

S:(admires her and thinks) "yeh dil se kitni saaf h sabke baare me kitna sochti h...me isko sach nahi bata sakta ek baar plan successful hojae fir sab bata dunga" and smiles at her

R:" muskura kyu raha h kya tujhe bhi koi farak nahi pad raha dev-rishita ke ghar chhod ke jaane se..sab ko ho kya gaya h...mene aaj jo subah kaha tha usko soch ke dekho usse kaam asaan hojaega yeh kya zidd h ghar chhod ke jaane ki"

Shiva tries to something but Raavi cuts in between " wese in sab me ek cheez mujhe bahut sahi lagi..dev ne rishita ka saath nahi chhoda...chahe kitni bhi mushkil ho usne uska saath diya..woh usse pyaar karta h aur uski respect aur woh apni zimmedari ache se nibhane jaanta h...unki tarah nahi jo wada karte h kabhi nahi chhodenge aur fir mu fer lete h" she let the last words as whisper and a tear rolled down her cheeks.

(FB of khandar scene when shiva said those words)

Shiva heard that and felt really guilty. He knew he has hurt her so many times.

R- " bol shiva agar aaj Rishita ki jagah me hoti toh tu kya mere saath ghar chhodne ke liye tayar hota..mera saath deta? Yaa fir uss din ki tarah ghar se nikalne ke liye chilla ke bolta"

(FB of mannat track when raavi leaves the house)

He cannot make eye contact with her. Raavi was looking at him waiting for him to say something. Shiva was left with no words. He is really ashamed of his acts and words. He felt bad for not able to make her trust him. She still fears to trust him. Trust him that he will never leave her.He was all silent.

Raavi misunderstood his silence and thinks:" itna bhi mushkil sawal nahi tha Shiva...haan yaa naa me jawab chahie mujhe please bolde nahi chhodega mujhe kabhi please" but he didn't respond.

She again felt heartbroken as she thought he will never be on her side and he is just feeling pity for her. She left the room trying not to cry. Shiva was just looking at her retreating figure. He wanted to shout,scream and tell her he never wanted to leave her, always wanted to stay close to her,to protect her from evil but he was helpless. He was crying for hurting her again and again.

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That's it. Wrote something I hope y'll will like it. Wese bhi makers ko ShiVi love story nahi dikhani toh MU hi dikha de... atleast isi bahane they'll confess their feelings (especially Shiva why he divorced her,why did he changed himself,why agreed to engage even after being married)...but unhe BHABHIIII dikhana h..🤦🏻‍♀️

I am tagging few whom I remember (only able to tag 5)😅so please give feedback on this. If anyone wants to continue this can take this or want to write some OS please do I'll love to read🤩

This is so good! She needs to question him and need answers, can’t be taken for granted all the time. I still have my doubts on Shiva. He says won’t leave her or let her go and turns around does the same. Kangan kaand, divorce track, engagement track, so many instances.
Now I want to know if Raavi was in Rishita’s place would he have had supported her?

Originally posted by: Saakshi2k

Okay I thought of writing something related to latest segment where dhara is listening to music and raavi asking her why she is so happy and then leaves to the room.

This is purely my imagination and yes I am not that good at writing so please bear😆

-------

So raavi goes to her room irritated at dhara for letting dev rishita leave the house. Shiva follows and finds her walking to and fro around the room. He can't tell her the truth because she is "pet ki kacchi".

S:(admires her and thinks) "yeh dil se kitni saaf h sabke baare me kitna sochti h...me isko sach nahi bata sakta ek baar plan successful hojae fir sab bata dunga" and smiles at her

R:" muskura kyu raha h kya tujhe bhi koi farak nahi pad raha dev-rishita ke ghar chhod ke jaane se..sab ko ho kya gaya h...mene aaj jo subah kaha tha usko soch ke dekho usse kaam asaan hojaega yeh kya zidd h ghar chhod ke jaane ki"

Shiva tries to something but Raavi cuts in between " wese in sab me ek cheez mujhe bahut sahi lagi..dev ne rishita ka saath nahi chhoda...chahe kitni bhi mushkil ho usne uska saath diya..woh usse pyaar karta h aur uski respect aur woh apni zimmedari ache se nibhane jaanta h...unki tarah nahi jo wada karte h kabhi nahi chhodenge aur fir mu fer lete h" she let the last words as whisper and a tear rolled down her cheeks.

(FB of khandar scene when shiva said those words)

Shiva heard that and felt really guilty. He knew he has hurt her so many times.

R- " bol shiva agar aaj Rishita ki jagah me hoti toh tu kya mere saath ghar chhodne ke liye tayar hota..mera saath deta? Yaa fir uss din ki tarah ghar se nikalne ke liye chilla ke bolta"

(FB of mannat track when raavi leaves the house)

He cannot make eye contact with her. Raavi was looking at him waiting for him to say something. Shiva was left with no words. He is really ashamed of his acts and words. He felt bad for not able to make her trust him. She still fears to trust him. Trust him that he will never leave her.He was all silent.

Raavi misunderstood his silence and thinks:" itna bhi mushkil sawal nahi tha Shiva...haan yaa naa me jawab chahie mujhe please bolde nahi chhodega mujhe kabhi please" but he didn't respond.

She again felt heartbroken as she thought he will never be on her side and he is just feeling pity for her. She left the room trying not to cry. Shiva was just looking at her retreating figure. He wanted to shout,scream and tell her he never wanted to leave her, always wanted to stay close to her,to protect her from evil but he was helpless. He was crying for hurting her again and again.

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That's it. Wrote something I hope y'll will like it. Wese bhi makers ko ShiVi love story nahi dikhani toh MU hi dikha de... atleast isi bahane they'll confess their feelings (especially Shiva why he divorced her,why did he changed himself,why agreed to engage even after being married)...but unhe BHABHIIII dikhana h..🤦🏻‍♀️

I am tagging few whom I remember (only able to tag 5)😅so please give feedback on this. If anyone wants to continue this can take this or want to write some OS please do I'll love to read🤩

Wow. This was very heart-wrenching yet beautiful. ❤️ I can understand Raavi's pain. Hope Shiva takes good care of her.

Though I think if Raavi was in the place of Rishita, Shiva wouldn't come with her willingly but when Bhabhimaa gives the ok signal, he'd go 😆 Just like everyone in that house.🤪

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

You write pretty well, actually! Would you consider doing a second part to this where you show them having a conversation and clear things out? You could post it all together as an OS!

That aside, loved that she finally questioned him. How insecure must Raavi have felt when he found it so easy to break promise after promise. He needed to hear this, and she needed to get it out. And it was so Raavi to see the positive aspect of Devta leaving, no matter that Dev was only acting upon Bhabhi The Maa's orders.

Glad that you loved it🤗

Tbh I just wrote without any further idea how to continue it but will definitely try to write. I have to brainstorm to write🤪 coz I am very lazy to think.If someone can take it to continue further, surely welcomed.

PS- I thought I replied to your quote but actually it wasn't send😆

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Originally posted by: Saakshi2k

Glad that you loved it🤗

Tbh I just wrote without any further idea how to continue it but will definitely try to write. I have to brainstorm to write🤪 coz I am very lazy to think.If someone can take it to continue further, surely welcomed.

PS- I thought I replied to your quote but actually it wasn't send😆

Please continue it❤️

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