Shivi FF -- || Fighting the Fate || Last Chapter Pg 12

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I know I still have many incomplete stories, but inn naye ideas ka main kya karoon 🤣

Before you read

In this story,

1. Dhara has delivered the baby without any complications.

2. Shiva and Raavi haven't confessed their feelings yet, but they are working on their marriage.

3. Dev and Rishita are going to play important parts.


I hope you like it :)


Prologue


"Mr. Shiva," the doctor approached him and Shiva looked rushed towards him. He was sitting with his whole family outside two wards of a hospital. Raavi was admitted in the ICU while Rishita was lying unconscious in the next ward. Dev was sitting beside Rishita in her ward and rest of the family was waiting outside.

“Meri Raavi kaisi hai doctor? Rishita Bhabhi?” he asked worry written all over his face.

Dev came out from Rishita's ward wiping his tears, she wasn’t not gaining consciousness. He went and stood with Shiva to know what the doctor had to say.

“I have a news.”

Both of them looked at the doctor as if there life depended on his words.

“Actually a good news, Mrs. Rishita is pregnant,” he smiled and shook hands with Dev. “Congratulations.”

Everyone was overjoyed with the news and hugged, congratulating each other.

“And Raavi?” Shiva asked to the doctor.

“She is still critical and unconscious, let’s hope for the best.”

Shiva couldn’t believe that was happening. It was today morning, all of them were celebrating the first birthday of Gaumbi and Dhara bhabhi daughter Aarohi. Raavi and Rishita were the most excited ones. They were running from one place to another in the whole house, taking care of the arrangements.

In the hustle, all of a sudden, the Chandelier was falling on Rishita, but Raavi saved her just in time. As a result it fell upon her and she was all soaked in blood in few seconds. Rishita too fell unconscious and the family brought both of them to the hospital.

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Rishita opened her eyes to an alien surrounding. She looked around the room trying take in the environment she was in. She got up with a jerk as a fresh memory of the chandelier falling on Raavi while saving her came in front of her eyes. The nurse looked at her and tried to calm her down.

“Please, you need rest.”

“But Rishita took off the saline tube from her hand roughly and shrieked a little as it hurt. She rushed out of the room as the nurse followed her.

“Dev,” she called as she saw everyone sitting outside.

Dev turned around to see Rishita standing near the door, he ran towards her. She hugged him in relief.

“How is Raavi?”

“She is still unconscious,” Dev replied breaking the hug.

Rishita looked towards the door of the ICU and prayed for Raavi. She went to Shiva and put her hand on his shoulder reassuring her.

“Don’t worry Shiva, Raavi thik ho jayegi. And we’ll do everything we could for her.”

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Few hours later, they were informed that Raavi was fine now and they can meet her.

As Shiva entered the room followed by Rishita and Dev, he saw Raavi standing on her feet, her head tied up in a bandage.

“Tu theek hai?” Shiva asked as he moved towards her as he saw her running towards him but to his utter shock, Raavi went past him and hugged Dev. Dev who was taken aback looked at Shiva and then at Rishita who was shocked as well.

Iss bhootnath ne phir mere saath yeh kiya, Dev. Humari shaadi hai kal aur aaj isne mujhe bike se gira diya. Dekho na, mujhe chot lag gayi,” Raavi complaint to Dev.

Rishita stood shock with her words and Shiva, whose tears didn’t stop looked at Raavi as if she was speaking some alien language.

As Raavi broke the hug, her mangalsutra got entangled in Dev's buttons. As she saw her mangalsutra she was surprised, she touched it and then looked at Dev.

Shaadi ho gayi hamari?” she said in happiness. “Lagta gai chot ki wajah se mujhe yaad hi nahi raha.”

Shiva went to Raavi and grabbed her arm.

“Tu kya bol rahi hai, Raavi?”

Khabardaar jo mujhe haath lagaya toh!” she said as she jerk away his hand. "Ab hamara rishta badal gaya hai, Shiva. Bhabhi hoon ab main teri."

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I hope that was good :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Interesting

Lekin mujeh jaldi updates chahiye I am very impatient 😆

Aur Baki ka bhi update karo😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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res

do you start a new FF everyday yo?😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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The fudge- wow !

Okay it's damn interesting

Will be waiting!

All I hope is My boy doesn't get too much hurt :((

Shiva pls be okay okay?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi Serpensortia,

The prologue got me hooked, would love to read how it progresses ❤️

Great job 😊

PS. I am Sanchi, new to the forum!!!


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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is soo Interesting 😍

I am hooked,can't wait to see how the story progresses.

Shiva is going to be badly hurt, can't wait to see how he handles the situation and raavi.

And rishita? How will she react.

You have to update this phastt phasttt. Okay?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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We hooked!!!

Please update soon can't wait. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hmm, very interesting - Reaction GIFs [Video] [Video] | Funny animal videos, Funny animals, Funny gif

I wonder what is Shiva, Dev and Rishita gonna do now? 😳 I really hope everyone is gonna get a happy ending. Unlike PS, I have actual hope here.❤️😆

Waiting for the next update!👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
#9

Another nice start

What a timing for Raavi to have memory loss🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Can't wait to read more!!!

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