In the Trance- A Shivi TS- (Part 2- pg 5) 25/12 - Page 4

This was so so so beautiful ❤️

Part 1. I loved the idea and revelation of secrets. And 5. From how they started off with trivial michevious things to the matters that showed their concern for each other as they silently took care of the matters that troubled the other ❤️

However, the child abuse but was extremely shocking and y heart went out to Shiva. Raavi is truly his anchor. And half they didn't shy away and pretended it to be one time thing when Dhara called them at the end. Them smiling at each other t the end ment, new beginnings for them❤️

And Part 2.

Loved the 4 year gap and how beautiful you wrote about how they grew closer to each other. And the best was you exploring his insecurities and giving us a glimpse into how much he was effected by the abuse as a child. And she being his rock in that difficult phase. It had all the feels and emotions.

Any chances of Part 3 which explores what Shiva mentioned here, that one day, he hopes to convey to her front of the world in who was the reason behind his succes?

Lovely story❤️

PS. Merry Christmas ❤️

It is so beautiful🤗

Both the parts have my heart. Is there any possibility of third part?

So glad to see a continuation to this one! I loved how Shiva fought and overcame his childhood abuse and also finished his degree, with Raavi supporting him through it all and waiting patiently for him to come back to her ❤️

Loved it a lot!! Beautifully written!

Love love love !!!

It was awesome ❤❤

Perfect line - You are the negative root of minus one 😍❤

Second part was even better than the first... Loved it soo much

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES RES RES RES RES❤️

haven't been this happy whole week 🤗❤️

UNRES :

This was one of my most fav pieces on the forum. The part one was something I have been reading again and again from time to time simply because it has this overwhelming emotional quotient.

The moment I saw there's a part two I screamed in glee. Ngl.

If I'm being honest I didn't expect them to be in a relationship. That was something very very very good.

The way you kept it sort of a secret? Mind-blowing.

Them and their conversation? OMG.

How can they be so intense and comforting at the same time?

How did you concoct this SO BRILLIANTLY?!!!

Oh the love. The intensity.

The anxiety portion? BOLD. Very bold. I always feel writing these things require a certain levelheadedness and I'm so so so happy with the way you've written it. So happy.

'You are the negative root of minus one' Ahhhh a different kind of poetry. Understood. Acknowledged. Saved in memoryyy. ❤️

I have said before Imma say again. I need more pieces from you man. Pre-wedding, AU or anything. I need more stuff. Keep writing. ❤️

Thank you so much!

I'm beyond happy to watch you cherish my work! Gratitude from heart.💖

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was so so so beautiful ❤️

Part 1. I loved the idea and revelation of secrets. And 5. From how they started off with trivial michevious things to the matters that showed their concern for each other as they silently took care of the matters that troubled the other ❤️

However, the child abuse but was extremely shocking and y heart went out to Shiva. Raavi is truly his anchor. And half they didn't shy away and pretended it to be one time thing when Dhara called them at the end. Them smiling at each other t the end ment, new beginnings for them❤️

And Part 2.

Loved the 4 year gap and how beautiful you wrote about how they grew closer to each other. And the best was you exploring his insecurities and giving us a glimpse into how much he was effected by the abuse as a child. And she being his rock in that difficult phase. It had all the feels and emotions.

Any chances of Part 3 which explores what Shiva mentioned here, that one day, he hopes to convey to her front of the world in who was the reason behind his succes?

Lovely story❤️

PS. Merry Christmas ❤️

Thank you so much!

I'm happy that you loved my work. 💖

I still don't have an idea for part 3...will try thinking about it. 😊

Originally posted by: prernapewdie

It is so beautiful🤗

Both the parts have my heart. Is there any possibility of third part?

Thank you. ❤️

I haven't given a thought for the third part, will let you know. 😊

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

So glad to see a continuation to this one! I loved how Shiva fought and overcame his childhood abuse and also finished his degree, with Raavi supporting him through it all and waiting patiently for him to come back to her ❤️

Loved it a lot!! Beautifully written!

Thank you so much!

I'm grateful that you loved my work! ❤️

Originally posted by: Kfof

Love love love !!!

It was awesome ❤❤

Perfect line - You are the negative root of minus one 😍❤

Thank you so much! ❤️