| ShiVi DRABBLE : Saawan | - Page 6

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Main Intezaar kr rha hu

Ritu❤️!!! What can I say? The holiday has been packed for me since I don't live at home.... Spent some quality time with mum since it was just the two of us this time...

I have this open on a tab for whenever I get free😆. Probably once I get to college tomorrow... Will edit as soon as I'm done though👍🏼!!!

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

dil toh toota hi raha 😭💔
tujhe sab yaad the sivaaye mere 🥺

Sach mein Sorry!

Mere dimaag se hi nikl gaya ekdum 😭🥺

Maaf kr do na? Next time sbse pehle pakka!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ritu❤️!!! What can I say? The holiday has been packed for me since I don't live at home.... Spent some quality time with mum since it was just the two of us this time...

I have this open on a tab for whenever I get free😆. Probably once I get to college tomorrow... Will edit as soon as I'm done though👍🏼!!!

Aree aaram se! 🤗

This is so beautiful❤.. Loved it

This was really nice ❤

I loved it!

I loved the song also!

Beautifully written❤

Keep writing such beautiful pieces

Thank you for tagging! This was so beautiful!

Their intimate moments were written so well

ShiVi and baarish is something I have always wanted to see, so loved reading about it! ❤️

Originally posted by: majoni03

This is so beautiful❤.. Loved it

Thank you so much! 🤗

Originally posted by: nafees5

This was really nice ❤

I loved it!

I loved the song also!

Beautifully written❤

Keep writing such beautiful pieces

Thank you so much! Will be posting something soon. ❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Thank you for tagging! This was so beautiful!

Their intimate moments were written so well

ShiVi and baarish is something I have always wanted to see, so loved reading about it! ❤️

Aww Thank you so much for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Res.

Edit:

Ritu❤️!!! I listened to the song and it's so sweet! Such subtle everyday romance... Also, what you called as khichdi at the end was what I loved the most, actually.. It was like a Shivi twist to the song with the possessiveness you wove into that part. Shivi can be a sweet, loving couple like the one in the actual song, but the possessive tedha hai par mera hai makes them them. I loved the note you ended it on as well, very subtly alluding to their quite space (irrespective of what they're very obviously doing in it) in the middle of a storm...

PS Curious cat wants to know if Author writes smut... Don't judge. At all.

Awwww Itna sweet! 😭❤️ Pyaaaarrrruuuu.

I find the ends and the beginnings a tougher job than the rest if I'm being honest. It takes a lot of time for me to figure out how I am picturing the start. 🤡

I'm so glad you liked it... It was a spur of the moment thing I was about to end and the Picking in arms part but then I let my imagination wander. 😳

PS : Curious Cat can know that in my history of 8 years here I haven't attempted smut at all. Read YES, written, not yet BUT I have a concept on Shivi since AGES and after finally trying to pass it on to so many writers I thought why don't I give it a shot? I mean what is the worse that could happen? It might turn funny or mechanical but I want to write it so .... YEAH IMMA BEGINNING VERY SOON. 😎⭐️

[I just like have ZERO experience in relationship/intimacy and probably that's why I feel I don't write Kiss/intimate scenes well. But the reviews y'all are dropping is motivating me like no ones business🤣]