| ShiVi DRABBLE : Saawan | - Page 7

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Awwww Itna sweet! 😭❤️ Pyaaaarrrruuuu.

I find the ends and the beginnings a tougher job than the rest if I'm being honest. It takes a lot of time for me to figure out how I am picturing the start. 🤡

I'm so glad you liked it... It was a spur of the moment thing I was about to end and the Picking in arms part but then I let my imagination wander. 😳

PS : Curious Cat can know that in my history of 8 years here I haven't attempted smut at all. Read YES, written, not yet BUT I have a concept on Shivi since AGES and after finally trying to pass it on to so many writers I thought why don't I give it a shot? I mean what is the worse that could happen? It might turn funny or mechanical but I want to write it so .... YEAH IMMA BEGINNING VERY SOON. 😎⭐️

[I just like have ZERO experience in relationship/intimacy and probably that's why I feel I don't write Kiss/intimate scenes well. But the reviews y'all are dropping is motivating me like no ones business🤣]

About the PS...

I know right?!!! It's so hard to write smut without the experience!!! I have zero experience too, and despite lots of reading, it took much longer for me to write smut than other stuff... Finally wrote one on Shivi last month? I'm not sure... But it was an epilogue to a oneshot...

Here's to us gaining experience and finding smut writing easier...😆

To someday... 🍷

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

About the PS...

I know right?!!! It's so hard to write smut without the experience!!! I have zero experience too, and despite lots of reading, it took much longer for me to write smut than other stuff... Finally wrote one on Shivi last month? I'm not sure... But it was an epilogue to a oneshot...

Here's to us gaining experience and finding smut writing easier...😆

To someday... 🍷

I swear man! I haven't read many romances yet, as I've always been a fiction girl, but I discovered Judith Mcnaught and Julia Quinn and Julie Garwood and I have read a handful of stuff only. Its actually very tough, there's always this nagging that I'd end up making a fool out of myself. 🤪

WOW. Have I read it? Can you drop the link? What was the name?

Pta nhi someday ayega ki nahi zindagi mein.. 🤣

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pandya-store/5247421/shivi-os-becoming-us-again-16-epilogue-pg6

I don't know if you've read it or not, though... And don't worry!!! Someday ko aana hi padega humare paas!

Hey sorry for the late reply.

I’d seen your tag and had made a mental note to come back and read this when I had more time but it slipped my mind and then when I remembered I had to scroll past hundreds of notis to get to yours!

This was amazingly well written. To weave a character’s thoughts and actions into song lyrics and make them fit is not easy and you’ve managed to do that perfectly.

Lovely piece of work!

Btw what’s your name?

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hey sorry for the late reply.

I’d seen your tag and had made a mental note to come back and read this when I had more time but it slipped my mind and then when I remembered I had to scroll past hundreds of notis to get to yours!

This was amazingly well written. To weave a character’s thoughts and actions into song lyrics and make them fit is not easy and you’ve managed to do that perfectly.

Lovely piece of work!

Btw what’s your name?

Thank you so much! No worries. You read and that's all that matters. I'm glad you liked it.

My name's Ritu.

I don't remember if I've tagged you in any of my previous works. I'd give you the links if you want to read something sometime! No pressure though❤️

Every word written here is soooo awesome❤️

I was exported to a different world altogether...

It was sooo poetic and sooo soothing to soul

Just like a leaf outta best selling novel❤️

If you have an index please gimme a link to that❤️

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

If you have an index please gimme a link to that❤️

Heeyyyy I've been working on something after I post it Imma make an index 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Res.

Edit:

Ritu❤️!!! I listened to the song and it's so sweet! Such subtle everyday romance... Also, what you called as khichdi at the end was what I loved the most, actually.. It was like a Shivi twist to the song with the possessiveness you wove into that part. Shivi can be a sweet, loving couple like the one in the actual song, but the possessive tedha hai par mera hai makes them them. I loved the note you ended it on as well, very subtly alluding to their quite space (irrespective of what they're very obviously doing in it) in the middle of a storm...

PS Curious cat wants to know if Author writes smut... Don't judge. At all.

LOL. Not me coming back to read Sathya's comments and telling myself that I can actually write because I wrote this in the past somewhere and my current piece isn't satisfying me AT ALL. Thenks Bubssss.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

LOL. Not me coming back to read Sathya's comments and telling myself that I can actually write because I wrote this in the past somewhere and my current piece isn't satisfying me AT ALL. Thenks Bubssss.

You can write. Very well, in fact. Happy now? 😆