Aa jao na - A ShiVi OS [Updated and Complete] - Page 3

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

The only complaint? It finished too soon. This was so so beautiful. I’m crying. The angst the strength the internal conflict. Everything is just beautifully written!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Awww suparna.. You can read some of the longer pieces I've written if it makes this one being short bearable....

I wrote this to challenge myself to write out a sequence in a specific word count, hence why it finished so soon... Who knows i may write another piece to this 🤔😉

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Such a beautiful OS😍🥰💕

Uff..the last line❤️‍🩹👏

Thank you.

The last line leaves it open ended for any ending the reader wants to imagine 😉❤️❤️

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Minn this was beautiful....you made me emotional❤️

I could feel the pain of both of them. It was sad to see Raavi trying to move on...And Shiva...I am glad he realised what damage he has done to Raavi and his relationship. So well written...thank you for this❤️

Oh priya priya priya... I want them to move on, feel hurt and heal to be stronger together. Glad you liked it 😘❤️❤️

Min, it was beautiful to read❤️

I really liked how Raavi left on her won accord and stayed strong throughout, decided to move on to better things like education.

Its' high time he realized that he broke and hurt than he can ever imagine and much more than what he went through. Finally he mustered the courage to ask her to come back because he wanted her in his life wholeheartedly.

When are we going to see such things in the show?😕