Aa jao na - A ShiVi OS [Updated and Complete] - Page 2

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Tagging cutiepie because she'll kill me otherwise

hey i'm not that bad 🤣❤️

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

hey i'm not that bad 🤣❤️

You and I both know that you would 😜😜

The only complaint? It finished too soon. This was so so beautiful. I’m crying. The angst the strength the internal conflict. Everything is just beautifully written!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Such a beautiful OS😍🥰💕

Uff..the last line❤️‍🩹👏

Minn this was beautiful....you made me emotional❤️

I could feel the pain of both of them. It was sad to see Raavi trying to move on...And Shiva...I am glad he realised what damage he has done to Raavi and his relationship. So well written...thank you for this❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This is beautiful min ❤️

Raavi 💔

Loved how she held herself together, stood strong and tried to move on even if it was so tough for her.

Shiva realising how he broke her in the want to protect her and finally telling her to come back.

Loved it ❤️

Thank you pixie... Means alot that you loved it even though it wasn't my normal style. 😊❤️

Originally posted by: Kfof

This was amazing❤

Loved it how Raavi decided to move out and move on in her life😍😍

Shiva finally realising how much he wants her❤

Last line❤🔥

Kshama, thank you. I think this is the only advantage of not watching i can bend the story to suit what I'd love to see. Glad you enjoyed it. ❤️

Originally posted by: Scarysea

beautiful as always Min

Thank you Chikki😘

Originally posted by: Foxii

Shivi need eachother❤️

They can very well function without but its just that... they won’t be living 💔

Glad they came across eachother and Shiva said, what was needed

Loved it

The definitely do need each other. Shiva has alot to atone for in the actual serial so it's nice to have him suffering... And this Raavi stuck to her self esteem and was getting through life, in a broken way but getting there. I want him to ask her to come back. ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Bahut pyaaaraaaaaa

I loved it Minmin

But I usually do🖤

It was short and sweet kinda story🖤

Thank you Maahiii 😘😘

I find writing shorter pieces more challenging especially when the scene needs to make an impact, so I'm so happy you loved it ❤️❤️