Only Mine - ShiVi OS (updated)

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“Welcome dear students and their family, we at CSK are very happy to begin the show of the year to declare the king and queen of CSK” said the anchor

“We would be starting the program with an opening dance from our alumni, the former King and Queen of CSK college. Please put your hand together for the dashing Aditiya Kapoor and our Diva Raavi Narayan ,ladies and gentleman.

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This is it for now

if i finish writing it today then ill try to update it today itself but i doubt that happening

But would love to see all your guesses on how the story would turn

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MINE, ONLY MINE<3


Raavi was deciding on which earring she should pair with her outfit

She would be visiting her college again as an alumni, CSK college had a tradition of King and Queen of the year which is always held in the final year of college. The sash and crown will be given to the winners by the former winners of the position


Aditya and Raavi had won King and Queen of the last year

Aditya, an allrounder one would say. He was the captain of the school football team and also is a part of the music club

Girls used to go gaga over his voice. It was quite obvious who would win

Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki aur CSK ka hottest launda


1 week earlier


“Raavi narayan?” asked a tall handsome guy


“Ji , kuch chahiye apko?” asked shiva


“Kya Raavi Narayan yahan rehti hai?” he asked


“Ji mein hoon Raavi Narayan” she said while nearing the door



Only to be found rooted to her spot


“AADIIIII” she screamed and hugged him


“RAAVIIIII” he screamed with her and hugged her back


“Kya baat hai meri rani, kaisi hai tu?” he asked


“Main teekh hoon tu bata” she added without noticing how furious shiva looked


“Aap kaun?” he asked assertively


“Hi, my name is aditya. Mein aur raavi ek hi college mein padte the” he said nonchalantly



Before he could respond that annoying cow Disha came



“Shiva! Humein couple competition ke liye tayari karni chahiye” she screamed with her annoying voice


Royally ignoring her Aditya ask shiva who he is


“Mein Raavi ka pat-” he stops midway



They share a small eye lock until she looked away



“Woh sab chod , tu andar aa na. Woh kya hai na abhi ghar pe koi nahi hai, waise tu yahan achanak kaise aagaya?” she asked


“Mujhe meri begum ki bohot yaad aa rahi thi toh mein agaya” he said while looking at her



Shiva was ready to break this buffalo's head who tf was he to call her rani and begum



“Disha mujhe kaam hai tu ja” he said , annoyance clearly visible


“Kya kaam hai? Mein madad kar deti hoon” she said with a smile


“Madad karni hai na toh nikal yahan se pehle” he murmured


“Kuch nahi tu ja mein dekh lunga” he said while eyeing Aditya


“Acha mazak chod na, bol kya hua hai?”


“Woh King and Queen of the year aa raha hai na madam”


“OHH haan main kaise bhul gayi” she said while smaking her head


“Mujhe pata tha tu bhul gayi hogi, aur waise main bata dun ki hamein ek performance bhi karni hai”


“Haan mujhe pata hai. I am so excited Adi, aise lag raha hai jaise bahut dino baad kisi cheez ke liye sach mein itni excitement ho rahi hai” she squealed


“Toh hum kal se practice shuru karte hai , teekh hai?”


“Perfect” she says


“Just perfect” they both say together



By now shiva was sure to be ready to murder him. His face was red with anger and fists closed tight.



“Apko dher nahi horahi kya?” he asked with a fake smile


“Haan yaar, mujhe ab jana hai. Mein tujhe call karke bata dunga ki kahan karni hai practice” he said while hugging her


“Teekh hai, dhyaan se ja” she said with a smile


“Teekh hai dhyaan se ja” shiva imitated her


Raavi eyed him weirdly


“Kya hai tujhe Shiva ? tu usse aise ghoor kyu raha tha haan?” she asked while placing both her arms on her waist


“Main kahan ghoor raha tha , tu hi usse chipak chipak ke bait rahi thi”


“Haan toh mein teri disha ki tarah usse chumne nahi gayi thi samjha” she screamed


“Chal hatt yahan se. Aagayi dimag kharab karne” he cursed and walked out of the house


“Isse kya ho gaya hai abhi” she thought


1 day ago


Adi and her had perfectly practiced their performance, he would be singing while she would be dancing and at the end they would do a cute little dance together. Raavi was more than happy, her excitement knew no bounds she has been constantly jumping around the house


Which annoyed the living shit out of Shiva

Yes, he wanted to see her happy but not because of some buffalo like adi he thought

And to add to his anger , everyone in his family liked that guy too . Even his mother started growing a likeness towards him.


“Rishitaaaa” raavi screamed from inside


“Aarahi hoon raavi” she screamed back


The house had become a madhouse , everyone was running from one place to another getting ready for tomorrow. Why were these people so excited on seeing his soon to be ex wife dancing with some ugly dude.


“Rishita mein yeh wale earrings pehnu ya phir yeh wale ?” she showed 2 jhumkas


“Yeh oxidized wale pehen bohot ache lagenge” rishita said


“Thank you so much. Tujhe pata hai main kal ke liye kitna excited hoon.” she said while moving around the room


Shiva who was standing outside was staring at her in awe, she looked so happy like a kid who had been rewarded with their favourite candy. She deserved all the happiness in the world. Until this Disha woman came he thought she deserved better until he started noticing her getting jealous and angry whenever that makhi type woman kept sticking to him. Not that he liked her chipku behaviour either but still


He decided he will talk to her after her performance was over


Present


The pandya family still had no clue what raavi and aditya were performing.


Raavi walks out of the room wearing a white and turquoise blue lehenga, a white cropped blouse with a turquoise blue mixed with white skirt. Paired with oxidized earring and her hair straightened , a small black bindi to complete her look.


“Haiiiii” he said while his heart did a somersault


“Bhabhi ko tad na band kar” teased krish from behind


“Tu phir bola” everyone said at once


“Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?” she asked excitedly


“Arrey bhabhi aap Shiva se pucho na” krish added while getting a glare from Shiva


“Tu ek dam pari lag rahi hai Raavi” said gaumbi while caressing her hair


“Thank you gaumbi”


“Eyy markundi gay aaj tu bohot sundar lag rahi hai. Kisi ki nazar na lage” said suman


“Thank you kaki” she said while taking her blessings


CSK college


“Welcome dear students and their family, we at CSK are very happy to begin the show of the year to declare the king and queen of CSK” said the anchor


“We would be starting the program with an opening dance from our alumni, the former King and Queen of CSK college. Please put your hand together for the dashing Aditiya Kapoor and our Diva Raavi Narayan ,ladies and gentleman.


BGM: kajra mohobat wala

“Aayi ho kahan se gori

Aankho me pyaar le ke

Chadti jawani ki ye

Pahali bahaar le ke

Dilli shahar kaa sara

Meena bazaar le ke”


Aditya sang while looking at Raavi


“Jhumka bareli wala

Kaano mein aisa dala

Jhumake ne le li meri jaan

Haay re mai tere qurbaan”


Shiva’s blood was boiling by now, scared that his insecurities may take a toll of his mind again he decides to leave but stops as Rishita holds his hand.



“Kahan ja raha hai Shiva?” she asked


“Mujhe nahi dekhna koi show , mein ghar ja raha hoon”


“Iske baad raavi ka performance hai, usse bahut bura lagega agar tum aise beech mein chale jao. Bas uska dance dekh ke chale jao” she pleaded


“Bhabhi-”


“Please shiva, usne bahut mehnat ki hai iss dance ke liye. At Least dekh ke toh jao na”


Their conversation gets interrupted by the echo of applauds



“That was a phenomenal performance by Aditya Kapoor and please put your hands together for Raavi Narayan”

Raavi dances to Naina da kya Kasoor

The entire Pandya Family was watching her dance with utmost pride, she was so graceful. Every move of hers was smooth and clean.

Shiva was brought out of his reverie on hearing everyone cheering for his Raavi.


“A couple dance for our King and Queen everybody!!!”

Dil ibadat plays in the background


They share a cute little dance


“Thank you for the breathtaking dance, you may now take your seats” the anchor announced


While getting down the stage Raavi saw how furious Shiva looked and before she could tell him anything , he storms out of the auditorium



“Ab iss ka bohot hogaya” Raavi says and runs behind him


“Shiva Ruk!” raavi screams from behind

Ignoring her , he continues to walk to some secluded area


“Shiva , behra hai kya? Kab se awaaz laga rahi hoon mein” she shouted


“HAAN HOON MEIN BEHRA, MEIN SAB KUCH HOON SIWAYE TERE LAYAK.” he screamed back


“Yahi sunna chahti thi na tu ?”


“Shiva yeh tu ky-”


“Kya Shiva huh? Aur tu yahan kya kar rahi hai? Ja na apne Adi ke paas”


“Shiva tu wapas mere character pe sawaal utha raha hai” she said sternly


“Nahi mein tere character pe sawal nahi utha raha , mein bas yeh keh raha hoon ki tu yahan se ja abhi. Mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni hai!”


“Kyun nahi karni hai baat tujhe ? aur teri problem kya hai Adi se?”


“OH mujhe kya problem hai? Wah raavi. Tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe kuch dikhai nahi deta kya ? dekha maine tum dono kaise ek dusre se chipak te rehte ho”


“Haan toh, mein teri disha ki tarah usse jake kiss toh nahi kar rahi hoon na”


“Ab iss mein disha kahan se aayi?” he said while gritting his teeth


“Oh toh ab agar mein uske baare mein baat bhi karu toh tujhe bura lag raha hai”


“Acha teekh hai, kiya usne mujhe kiss tujhe usse kya?”


“Mujhe kya ? mujhe koi farak nahi padta” she said trying to be nonchalant



He pulls her towards himself by her elbow



“Tujhe koi farak nahi padta?” he asked while looking into her eye


“Tujhe farak kyun pada mujhe Adi se chipakte hue dekh?” she asked back


“Kyunki tu meri chipkali hai, aur tu sirf mujhse chipkegi.

Ab tu bol, tujhe kyun bura laga ki uss disha ne mujhe kiss kiya?”


“Kyunki woh haq mera hai. Dhara bhabhi aur kaki ke alawa sirf mein tere itne kareeb aa sakti hoon” she said with tears brimming


“Toh pehle kyun nahi bataya tune?”


“Tune mere character par sawaal uthaya shiva” she cribbed


“Mera woh matlab nahi tha. Mujhe pata hai ki mujhe woh sab nahi bolna chahiye tha”


“Phir tune mujhse maafi kyun nahi mangi?”


“Kyunki mujhe laga tu mujhse behtar deserve karti hai”



And that was it. Raavi lost it , she jerked his hand away and walked from there


“Ayyy chipkali kahan ja rahi hai?” he screamed



This time she ignored whatever he said and walked back to the auditorium



“Raaviiii” he kept calling out while running behind her


Finally she reaches the auditorium and krish screams



“Aagayi bhabhi”


“Kahan chali gayi thi Raavi tu?” asked dhara


“Kuch nahi Bhabhi”


“Acha chod tu ja jaldi abhi”


“Now , the most awaited segment of this event. It is finally the time to announce the king and queen of CSK 2021 . May i have the former winners on stage please”



“It is a privilege to be here today and may the best person win” Raavi said with a subtle smile


“May the best person win” aditya added again


“SO LADIES AND GENTLEMEN ARE YOU READYYY”



After the ceremony, Raavi royally ignores Shiva and hugs Aditya



“Thank you for coming” she said while hugging him


“Anytime mlady” he added


“Tu aaj ja raha hai?”



He nodded while still hugging her

Shiva came and pulls raavi out of his hug and takes her out



“Tu yeh kya kar rahi hai? Pagalon ki tarah daudaya hai tune!”


“Haan toh tu pagal hi hai. Mujhe baat nahi karni hai tujhse tu ja”


“Arrey yeh kya baat hui, abhi kuch dher pehle bola ki mujhe kiss karne ka haq sirf tera hai aur tu yahan firse usse chipak rahi hai”


“Tujhe kis cheez se maarun mein. Pagal insaan”


“Raavi teekh se bol na kya hua hai?”


“Kya hua? Tujhe nahi pata kya hua?”


“Jab tak tu batayegi nahi mujhe pata kaise chalega?” he replied


“Tu ne meri shaadi ka itna tamasha ban ne diya kyun ki tujhe laga ki tu mere layak nahi hai? Mujhse pucha tune? Mujhse pucha kya ki mein kya chahti hoon? Nahi na. Ab tu ja. Mein chali jaungi Adi ke saat mumbai.” she screamed

He picks her up in his arm and places her on the bench nearby


“You're mine. Only Mine”

"How dare you let that dayan kiss you" she pouted


And without wasting a second he claimed her lips in his. On not getting any response from her he bites her lower lip. All thoughts of sanity or control flew out of the window, the gently kiss soon turned into a passionate battle for dominance. They parted ways to catch their breath


"Uss chudail ki kiss ko leke itna kya tension lena?"

"Mujhpe sirf aur sirf tera haq haii Raavi"

"I am your's Shiva"

"Mine , Only Mine"


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Jeez it finally got over

HELLO BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE , this was it

I hope you guys liked it

And let me know if you guys want more of this sort

Lots of love

Edited by hapakalanoodles - 3 years ago
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Gimmeee!!!

Aditya Kapoor matlab jealous Shiva!!!!

😈😈😈😈

✨How it’s gonna turn out- duh-> aag boi burning in aag of jalan-> dobi Raavi 😌-> HOT AF MAKEOUT SESSION!! ✨

Edited by StarLord_Owen - 3 years ago
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RES RES RES RES

UNRES


Wowza!

Loved it how you bought someone for Raavi to make Shiva jealous.

Intense Shiva is

Dreeaamyyyy ❤️

This was very good.

Keep writing bro!

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 3 years ago
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pehle to CSK is my fav team so for that name....👍🏼

m excited to read the story.....raavi chipkaliyon ki beauty queen😳

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Excited to read further❤❤❤

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Excited!❤️ When are you going to update? Waiting

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I will upload it in a few hours

Almost done with it

This one is going to a little long 😶

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Originally posted by: StarLord_Owen

Gimmeee!!!

Aditya Kapoor matlab jealous Shiva!!!!

😈😈😈😈

✨How it’s gonna turn out- duh-> aag boi burning in aag of jalan-> dobi Raavi 😌-> HOT AF MAKEOUT SESSION!! ✨


updated , check it out

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Tani, it was awesome😍❤❤

Shiva's jealousy 😂❤

Loved it❤❤

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