Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 44

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Kitne optimism se pucha hai...Utne optimism se abhi 'No' ayega 🤣🥺

Likhna hi chalu nahi hua abhi tho!

Waise, likhna toh chalu ho gaya hai!

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

How are you skeptical about the garmaa garam thing? It ain't the USP because there's such a BEAUTIFUL premise with every mature content you write I find myself oscillating from hot and bothered to emotional wreck throughout my read!

This stuff is hard to write bruhhh like..takes SO MUCH more brain than any normal piece. (I can say I know now lol 🤪)

And that's why NEVER be skeptical about any of your garma garam stuff because even to this day, it is being read by people repeatedly. Which I think is a massive thing!

I HAVE TOO MANY IDEAS MAN! Given 2 prompts already to Innu!

And so many in my mind...After today's bts by KD I might actually auction the prompts out 🤣

Sorry for taking over your comments section @LizzieBennet!

@EuphoricDamsel I’m glad you enjoy what I write. I’m kind of moody though when it comes to writing. Kabhi 10-15 minute phastum phast ideas aur words aa jaathe hain, aur kabhi (kind of like now) chaahke bhi there is nothing. Zero. Zilch. Nada.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Roopa!! 🤗

Thank you! Missed your review on my previous update too, with your special gifs (but I know you read it!)

Maybe I should start marking my chapters nsfw from here on! 😆

Ye bolded part samajh nahi aaya. 😔

Both are testing the waters for sure, but both are also being held back by circumstances (namely Dev! 😆)

Thank you for bringing up the fact that he and Raavi are equal in every way. I absolutely want all the couples I write to be like this. A skewed power equation can mess things up big-time!

Thanks for reading! 🤗

nalla is dev, who is useless......and maagin is Prafulla who is forcing raavi to get married ...I m 😡at dem both...

my laptop has died and its not fun to comment using phone....😔

Woah.. this was super hot!! Thank you for tagging me

I loved reading all about Shiva and Raavi's feelings.. and this Shiva is similar to the show too, in terms of how possessive he is of Raavi and how strong his feelings are for her ❤️

Of course he doesn't act upon his feelings in the show, but that's why we have FFs 😆

I loved it! ❤️

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Sorry for taking over your comments section @LizzieBennet!

@EuphoricDamsel I’m glad you enjoy what I write. I’m kind of moody though when it comes to writing. Kabhi 10-15 minute phastum phast ideas aur words aa jaathe hain, aur kabhi (kind of like now) chaahke bhi there is nothing. Zero. Zilch. Nada.

Its okay @LizzieBennet doesn't mind. I've been ruining her thread this whole week. She okay. 🤡

I do. I really do enjoy whatever you write. Oh I feel you man. It only comes when there's that sudden wave of inspiration present otherwise nothing helps.

I really love this story. You write so well and I love your versions of shivi.

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Woah.. this was super hot!! Thank you for tagging me

I loved reading all about Shiva and Raavi's feelings.. and this Shiva is similar to the show too, in terms of how possessive he is of Raavi and how strong his feelings are for her ❤️

Of course he doesn't act upon his feelings in the show, but that's why we have FFs 😆

I loved it! ❤️

Thank you for reading and you're welcome for the tag!

I'm usually hesitant tagging anyone when it comes to my work because it seems slightly intrusive to me, so please let me know if you prefer not to be tagged from here on!

Shiva being possessive is canon, I have learned, and yeah I hear your frustration about him not acting on those feelings in the show. Like you rightly say, that's what FFs are for, though I realize this story departs from canon in many ways!

Originally posted by: loveableangel

I really love this story. You write so well and I love your versions of shivi.

Thank you for your kind words about my writing. I'm glad you're enjoying 'my' version of ShiVi because it really is just my version. I know the 'real' ShiVi are quite different even though there might be some common elements. Which is why it amazes me that people are still able to relate to this version of ShiVi!

Thank you again for reading! ❤️

Tho kaha tak pohonchi baat?

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Tho kaha tak pohonchi baat?

First draft is nearly done, but the next couple of days are gonna be busy at work, so idk when I'll find time to proofread and edit and make it cosmetically appealing 😆

I'm really not happy with what I have this time! 😭

Maybe it's writer's block *shudders*