Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 18

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Lizzie...... Lizzie..... You always amaze me with the updates......... 😘🥰😍 want more....

Aww, thank you so much! 🤗I'm so glad people are enjoying the way I write ShiVi! ❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

Eeekkkkssss Adorable and HOT and just ❤️❤️

Loved it so much.

Shiva talking about casual hook ups was pissing me off 🤣 god knows how raavi felt

Can we have a third part... pleaseeee

This has a full FF potential

Shiva talking about casual sex was pissing you off? I know my Shiva is quite different from canon!Shiva. Is Canon!Shiva extremely prudish that this one seems unbelievable? 😔

I thought this was the third part (or at least the third OS) 😆

Full FF-- hmm, you maybe right but I don't want to get into that. I want this to be only about Shiva and Raavi and don't intend to bring in the other characters much except when I need them for a plot point. I hope that's okay with people.

Also, can someone here help me- what does Raavi address Shiva's mom as? And what do all the brothers call Suman? And do they all refer to Gautam as Gaumbi including Raavi and Shiva?

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Hayeeee☺️ Raavis gutter thoughts

I wish this was longer

Kuch hua hi nahi yahan to🤣

Well, people asked for 'torture' and I gave y'all that na? Raavi is feeling very, very tortured right now, I can assure you! *puts on innocent look*

Thanks so much for reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Pausing my reading mid way to insert this expression which I remembered after reading the lines where Raavi calculates. 🤣🤪

🤣

This was exactly the expression I had in mind when I envisioned Raavi calculating! 🤣

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

DAAAYUUUMM GURRRL!

This was exhilarating.

What lovely flow...Imma SO LIKING THE CHEMISTRY here.

Plusssss she already have hots for him and not Dev.

Total win win.

Also eargasm? eargasm.

Wait, isn't eargasm a thing? I thought it was, honest! *confused, innocent look*

Yep Raavi in my stories won't be pining for Dev but she will very much be pining for her Chattaan Pandya! 😆

Thanks, I'm so glad you're enjoying the flow and the chemistry! 😳

Tagging a few people who've been regular readers!

Also if you prefer not to be tagged, please let me know.

The third OS is up on Pg 20.

More tags ..

If you prefer not to be tagged, please let me know.

The third OS is up on Pg 20.

Lizzie!!!!!!!!!!!!! My heart!!! I can't!🤗 This was so hot!☺️

Thank you for the tag! And no, please DON'T stop tagging me.😆

Oooooohhhh, what an update, Liz I should have guessed you would leave us as flustered as Raavi at the end, since there was no mature tag in this story 🤣

Your Shiva sounds sexy shmexy ☺️I could totally imagine his deep hoarse voice seducing Raavi slowly. He is totally the man, a gorgeous specimen designed to be innocent Raavi’s downfall. I was holding my breath hoping there would be a kiss at the end but damn, I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter 🤣 Hope you intend to continue this.

You’re amazing at building tension and you give a new dimension to every story you write. It’s always fun to read what you have penned 😍 Keep tagging me, girl! Lots and lots of love ❤️

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie!!!!!!!!!!!!! My heart!!! I can't!🤗 This was so hot!☺️

Thank you for the tag! And no, please DON'T stop tagging me.😆

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed this! 🤗

And I love your little teddy emoji! ❤️