Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 11

Originally posted by: anshika5103

woahhhhh..... pleaseee continuee☺️

Thank you for reading! 😳

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

OH MY GOD THIS WAS HILARIOUS PLEASE CONTINUE THIS I SWEAR TO GOD 😂😂

I guess the all caps means you liked it 😆!

Thank you so much for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

I looooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this!! You are an exceptionally gifted writer.. I’m laughing my head off while simultaneously going up in flames!!

Please allow me to be your fan!!

And will Shiva get some reprieve anytime soon? Poor guy! Hard floor, hard on… everything is sooo hard for him 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Oh my God thank you soo sooo much! ❤️😳
I am so so humbled by your words! M just a writer trying my hand at something! Comments like this just make me 😭 !

My aim was to make this funny. I think sexy and funny is such a delightful combination! I’m just trying my hand at this and am so glad it’s going down well!

As for Shiva, he ain’t gonna get reprieve anytime soon! This is his comeuppance for tormenting Raavi with the bike riding analogy! 😈😆
Thanks again for this precious comment! ❤️🤗

ufff.. this was another sizzling hot piece ☺️ would love to read more!

Nautanki Shiva was hilarious 😆

Thank you for tagging! ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

What do I say about this OS?😆 Raavi 🤣 Shiva’s riding lessons really did it’s magic 😆

And Shiva’s story🤣 only he can come up with something like this.
Shiva at the end, nothing else is going to help him be relieved, except? 😆

I just love this Shiva and Raavi💔 Thank you for giving us them.

Thank you! 😳
Do you think Shiva in canon could do something like this?
Nothing else except? 😉 What?? 😆
He deserves it for tormenting Raavi so much! 😆
You’re welcome! I enjoy writing Shiva and Raavi like this! It makes me like them a whole lot more! 😳

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Holy Lord I can't-

Daaayyuuumm Bro!

Chef's Kiss*

This was hilarious. DID NOT expect the turn it took in the end. ☺️

Ah, thank you! 😳
Glad I was able to subvert your expectations! 😆

Originally posted by: Foxii

OMG❤️🤣🤣

I couldn’t stop laughing... Shivas story kept getting crazier with every line I read🤣

Amazing

The Scene in that Room... was hot and hilarious at the se time

Thank you so much for writing about Shivi

Its a treat... really ❤️❤️

Waiting for more :)

Thank you! I’m glad I’m you enjoyed Shiva’s crazy story as much as I enjoyed writing it! I imagine all my characters’ expressions in my head when I write. It makes the process mor enjoyable for me plus it endears then to me much more! 😳 ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

champak kha.... hota🤣 🤣 I had to read twice before understanding 🤣

I need him to torture raavi plsssssss........something needs to happen.....kuch to pls ......are aisa mauka fir kahan milega

Mrs S 🤣she believed that nonsense 😆

raavi to master nikli.....baazi maar gai ladki in acting and story telling 🤣

permanent tent🤣

Aww thank you! 🤗

And bonus points to you for being the first to bring up Champak Khadan…ta! I seriously began to doubt if anyone got it and I’m glad you did! I thought that joke was gonna fall flat! 😆

Mrs S was too smitten by Shiva. She would have believed anything he said! 😆

Torture Raavi? Hmm, ye toh usne already kar diya! Usi ka badla toh mil raha hai usse! 😆

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Lizzy sweetheart 🤗👍🏼👏.....fans ki list mein mera naam likh dena.....u r just too good.....

OMG! Mere fans ki koi list wist nahi hai!!

But thank you for this comment! It made me 😳 and 😭! I feel so humbled by all your love! ❤️

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Omg this was hilarious 🤣

What a fun read this was, filled with laughter and puns 😆

Shiva's story was 🤪 He's quite filmy 🤣

Champak Khadanahihota made me cackle like a witch 🤣

Raavi's boldness towards the end ☺️

Poor Shiva 🤪 Life is very hard for him indeed 😈🤣

Ha ha, yes I wanted to put on every cheesy Hindi film trope on that story. Mele mein bichde huye twins included, but I couldn’t fit that one in. 😆

I even put down the SRK arms outstretched wala trope! 😆

And Champak K - I’m glad you caught on to that one as well!

No one brought up Lapetganj though! 😆

I’m personally proud of that one! 😆

Life (and other things) is indeed very hard for Shiva rn! 🤣
Thank you for reading!