Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 10

Originally posted by: Kfof

Oh my god🤣🤣

The story was hilarious but awesome😂😂😂❤

Noise part, Raavi doing it and Shiva's reaction 😂😂😍😍

You write so awesome....please do continue this only if possible😍❤❤

Loved the story❤

Thank you so much! ❤️❤️

I love how you're always the first to respond, having finished reading before I even get ready to tag people! 🤗 Thanks for the enthusiasm for my writing! 🤗

Tagging a few folks- Second ShiVi OS is up! Eager to know your thoughts! 😳

OH MY GOD THIS WAS HILARIOUS PLEASE CONTINUE THIS I SWEAR TO GOD 😂😂

I looooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this!! You are an exceptionally gifted writer.. I’m laughing my head off while simultaneously going up in flames!!

Please allow me to be your fan!!

And will Shiva get some reprieve anytime soon? Poor guy! Hard floor, hard on… everything is sooo hard for him 🤣🤣🤣🤣

What do I say about this OS?😆 Raavi 🤣 Shiva’s riding lessons really did it’s magic 😆

And Shiva’s story🤣 only he can come up with something like this.
Shiva at the end, nothing else is going to help him be relieved, except? 😆

I just love this Shiva and Raavi💔 Thank you for giving us them.

Holy Lord I can't-

Daaayyuuumm Bro!

Chef's Kiss*

This was hilarious. DID NOT expect the turn it took in the end. ☺️

OMG❤️🤣🤣

I couldn’t stop laughing... Shivas story kept getting crazier with every line I read🤣

Amazing

The Scene in that Room... was hot and hilarious at the se time

Thank you so much for writing about Shivi

Its a treat... really ❤️❤️

Waiting for more :)

champak kha.... hota🤣 🤣 I had to read twice before understanding 🤣

I need him to torture raavi plsssssss........something needs to happen.....kuch to pls ......are aisa mauka fir kahan milega

Mrs S 🤣she believed that nonsense 😆

raavi to master nikli.....baazi maar gai ladki in acting and story telling 🤣

permanent tent🤣

Lizzy sweetheart 🤗👍🏼👏.....fans ki list mein mera naam likh dena.....u r just too good.....

Omg this was hilarious 🤣

What a fun read this was, filled with laughter and puns 😆

Shiva's story was 🤪 He's quite filmy 🤣

Champak Khadanahihota made me cackle like a witch 🤣

Raavi's boldness towards the end ☺️

Poor Shiva 🤪 Life is very hard for him indeed 😈🤣