HAAL-E-DIL : A Shivi ss updated Epilogue on page 7. 15/10/21 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ae gadhedi, dimag to thikane hai tera. Kya bake ja rahi hai. Subah Subah bhang chadha li hai kya tune. Abhi tak to mujhe ye bhi samjah nahi aaya ki tere sir pe ye modeling ka bhoot kab se chadh gaya or tune mujhe bhi is jhamele me ghasit liya. Kya ? Chal kya Raha hai tere is dimag me ?”


Ohho Shiva tu khamekha me bp badha Raha hai. Or vaise bhi jab chize apne kabu se Bahar ho to peene ka shauk tujhe hoga, mujhe nahi. Mai to bas vo karne ja rahi hu Jo mujhe bahut pahle kr lena chahiye tha or vo hai khud ki pehchan apne dam pe banana. Ab dekh pure Somnath ki sabse Sundar ladki hone ka koi fayda to hona chahiye n. Akal se to vaise hi ye sari duniya mujhe dobi samajhti hai. Or Mai teri tarah Chattan Pandya to hu nahi ki itni mehnat kar saku. To ab jab mujhe apne talent k according koi kam mila hai to tujhe to Khush hona chahiye na.”


Dekh agar tujhe ye sab karna hai to kar. Vaise bhi teri Zindagi hai or tu apne faisle lene ke liye azaad hai. Par isme mujhe Kyu ghasit rahi hai?”.

He was glad that for once his innocent wife had decided to do something for her own self. But what he could still not get as to why was she hell bent on getting him involved.


“Is bhootnath ko kya lagta hai? Ye mujhse sawal karega or Mai kisi bholi bachi ki tarah ise saari baatein bata dungi. Are aisa kiya to fir mera plan kaise successful hoga”.

Raavi smiled internally when Shiva said, “ Yaha khade khade bas daat dikhayegi ya bolegi bhi kuch?”


“Ha to sun. Mujhe is consignment k liye ek guardian figure ki zarrorat hai. Mausapa itna travel apne health k chalte afford nahi kar sakte. Maasima to mujhe bhi n Jane de, mere Sath kya chalengi. Anita di se Mai kahungi nahi. To us family k sare members cut ho gaye. Ab bacha ye parivar. To kaki maanengi nahi. Gaumbi or Dhara di ko Mai kah nahi sakti. Rishita ki nayi nayi job hai to use chutti milegi nahi. Krish ka college hai. To bacha kon? Tu. Isiliye tu chalega mere Sath”, she replied with a childlike glee.


He couldn’t help but smile as to how she had considered each one of his family even though she had never actually been treated the right way. However something still bothered him which he could not bring into clarity to pinpoint onto.


“Chal agar maan lete hai ki Mai tere Sath chalne ko taiyar hu. To badle me mujhe kya milega?” he raised his eyebrows.

Are tere man ka to pura khyal rakha hai maine. Mai vapas aate hi make sure karungi ki hamari divorce proceedings fasten up ho jaye. After all teri or Disha ki shadi bhi to honi hai na. Or to or maine apne lawyer se baat kar k alimony ki demand bhi remove kara di hai. To tu bas ye samajh ki ye meri alimony hai jise tu legally na nahi kar sakta”.


He’d be lying if his heart hadn’t been pierced by the way she had said everything in a sing-song manner without the slightest flinching or fumbling. There divorce yet had time to take place and she already seemed far and distant. “Well, serves you right for all you did. After all you were the one who wanted all of this to happen in the first place”, scolded his brain.


He quickly hid his pain with a scowl as per habit and said, “Manzur hai mujhe. Par chuki divorce ham dono ka hai to mai jab apni alimony ki demand Karu to piche nahi hatna”.


Deal then”, Raavi brought her hand forward which Shiva took with his signature smirk as he shook it. “Deal it is”!

Edited by RainbowChaser - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

I am loving the story❤❤

I really need Raavi to stand up for her self and not make a fool and this Raavi is doing the same❤❤❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Another fantastic update! I can't say enough about this Raavi, just love her. As a woman, this is how I would like to see other women to smart and successful. Raavi has not disappointed me in this story, Thank you for writing a strong Raavi, Can't wait for the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much dear ❤️

So glad you liked it 🌺

And yes, strong women is what the world actually needs

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

I loved it Anu

Smart Raavi😎

Ab Suman ki Disu ki hawa tight hogi hoga hi nahi usse yeh sab itna kaam and upon taht Suman ka taunts

Jhepega hi nahi 😈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That was fantastic.loved it.

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The next few days went in a jiffy. To see Shiva agree to Raavi's request was something none of them had expected. Suman did not want his son to go but couldn’t deny Shiva’s wish either. Her son was already getting married against his will so she could not bring it in her to stop him when he told her that he wanted to go. The other family members were surprised but glad as finally the couple would get some much needed alone time.


Sharmishtha did all the arrangements as promised while Raavi did some quick shopping for both of them and got their luggage packed. She had made her famous puppy eyes at him the other day getting him to agree that he would let her do as she pleases cz she wanted to make the most of this journey and wanted them to have a good time together.


Soon the d-day arrived. The family bid them good byes with heavy hearts, telling them to take care of each other and call up every day. Dhara sent a quick prayer to the almighty to solve their differences and unite the duo.


As the airplane soared high in the air, Raavi could not help but feel like a bird herself. But the tiredness of the past few days soon showed its effect as deep sleep took upon her. Latched to her husband’s strong arm and shoulder, she slept like a baby. Shiva on the other hand could not help himself but smile at the innocent figure sprawled onto him without a care in the world. This was his chance as he could drink in her beautiful features without letting her know the same.


Some 12+ hours later, Raavi and Shiva finally found themselves in the City of Love. Sharmishtha had come to receive them at the airport and given Raavi a big jaadu ki jhappi and did a quick intro with her oh-so-handsome jiju. Soon they were in the hotel and were led to their room. Details from the breakfast buffet to the bathroom basics were all shared, credits sweet Sharmishtha.


Raavi had taken a nap during the flight but Shiva needed his sleep right at the moment. So when she came out of the shower feeling all fresh and fabulous, she found her husband sleeping and couldn’t help but awe at the cuteness he was when he wasn’t awake.

She grinned as her plans begin to stir in her mind.

Well plan 2 was done well,

time to bring plan 3 to action!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it❤❤❤

Lets see what happens in the city of love❤

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A loud ring brought Shiva’s otherwise really sweet sleep to an end. It was Raavi’s phone that was ringing. He nudged her a few times but she refused to wake up, so he picked up the call. It was Sharmishtha.

Hello!”, his voice still thick and heavy from sleep.

Good morning jiju. I know aaplog ko thoda jet lag feel ho raha hoga but Raavi ko aaj se hi kaam pe aana hoga kyunki model late milne k karan hamare dates already push ho chuke hai. To aap dono please jaldi se taiyar hoke breakfast kar lo. Mai aap logo ko pick Karne thode me aa jaungi”.

The rest of the time was spent on proceeding onto her orders cz they couldn’t afford to be late as that would leave a very unprofessional impression.


What Shiva had not expected was the men at the brand to be bowled out by his wife’s beauty. He already had enough such cases back home and didn’t appreciate these firangs casting their eyes on what was his. Raavi on the other hand was having a hard time controlling her laughter as she had turned the tables.


She was soon engrossed with work as the designers took her for various measurements. Raavi had always taken pride in her body and the amount of time she spent in taking care of it actually bore fruit today. They decided that they wanted to go with the minimalistic bride’s look.


Long tale cut short, the shoot went really well. Within a few shots, it felt as if Raavi had always been in front of the camera. Her breathtaking smile, her pearly whites, the sparkle in her eyes, the blush on her cheeks, everything made her the perfect model bride as her dear Sam had predicted her to be. But what bothered her after they packed up, was that her bhootnath was nowhere to be seen.


The last time she had seen him was when he had been throwing a dead glare at the photographer who had adjusted her duppatta, to get a better glimpse of her blouse. Her brows knitted in confusion as she couldn’t understand where he could go in this city which was ajnabi to both of them, totally.


The door quickly opened and shut, much to her shock. She got a sense of relief as she looked at the intruder. It was her husband. “Shoot ke bich me tu achanak se uth ke kaha chala gaya tha. Dhara di ne tujhse kaha tha n mere Sath rahne ko. Mai Kitna ghabra gayi thi ki tujhe Kaha dhundungi”.


Her talks were cut short as she felt his lips lock onto hers. They were soft and supple, quite in contrast with his rough and tough exterior. She had just begun to get a taste of what Heaven felt like when he broke off. His eyes were intense and she could get forever lost in them.


Maine aaj tak har baat saaf saaf karne me believe kiya hai Raavi. Tere case me meri ye aadat kab exception ban gayi mujhe pata nahi Chala. Par aaj Mai apni ye galti sudharana chahta hu. Mai tujhe kisi or ke Sath nahi dekh sakta. Ha, maine socha tha ki Mai tujhe khud se dur karke aazad kar dunga. Par yaha tujhe in logo ki bheed me ghum hota hua dekh, jaha tera dhyan mere alawa kisi or ne banta rakha hai, nahi dekha gaya mujhse. Tujhe koi or chue ye meri nazro ko bardasht nahi hua. Mai tere mamle me khudgarz banna chahta hu”.


Finally, finally tune jana to sahi ki beetein kuch dino me maine kya mehsoos kiya. Kya beeti muhjhpe jab us disha ne tujhe kiss kiya. Pyaar karti hu Mai tujhse Shiva. Khud se bhi zyada. Zarrorat ban gaya h tu Meri”. She kissed him with this confession. Something she had wanted to say for so long.


The lovebirds had finally realized their folly and united.

The City of Love had worked its charm onto the biggest gadhedas of Somnath.

Edited by RainbowChaser - 3 years ago
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Loved the confession part❤❤❤

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