HAAL-E-DIL : A Shivi ss updated Epilogue on page 7. 15/10/21

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely forumwaasis! Greetings šŸ¤.

AN : Today's episode had me cringe to a great extent. I had to wait for my anger to simmer down so that I could pen down my thoughts. I really wanted to bang Disha's head onto some wall so that she could never show her weird toothy smile ever again. But the pen is mightier than the sword. So here I am trying to write an ss. I do not know how many parts it would contain nor do I have a clue as to how frequent the updates are going to be so please bear with me.

Prologue would be up soon !

Do let me know how it was. Happy reading šŸ’›

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Is it going to focus on Raavi more beacuse the title is songs name fromā€Sanam Teri kasamā€.There the female lead was misunderstood by her family and she was having none one by her side like Raavi . That’s my favourite movie by the way.

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I love that movie too dear ā¤ļø

But this title and even some glimpses of the story are inspired from the song with the same name which is from the movie murder 2.

As far as I have planned Raavi is going to be headstrong and would stand for herself.

Hope you'll like it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

I love that movie too dear ā¤ļø

But this title and even some glimpses of the story are inspired from the song with the same name which is from the movie murder 2.

As far as I have planned Raavi is going to be headstrong and would stand for herself.

Hope you'll like it

I would love to read then Please tag me when you update.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Enough was enough!

Just half an hour back she was seething with fury, her body shaking with rage. But she had known this with great familiarity that anything worthwhile is seldom achieved in anger.

So she gulped down two huge glasses of water and clenched her fists shut, took deep breaths and counted backwards till she could feel her overwhelming emotions simmering down. What is better is to store and channelize that anger into plans that would actually lead her to her true destination.


Yes, one cheek kiss was enough to make her realize with whom her heart had belonged all this while. She had to give it to her dobi brain to take it this long. But now that she knew what she wanted, she would make sure that it was hers, by hook or by crook.


She entered their room, taking a good look at her reflection in the mirror. Then she quickly undid the braid she had so painstakingly tied for the sake of her gorgeous, long hair. Removing the endless number of pins she’d put at various places she gave a sigh of relief as she ran her fingers through her hair. Her head felt light at the moment, and soon her heart would feel the same.

She was brought out of her chain of thoughts, when she heard a familiar voice calling out to her. ā€œ Ae chipkali ! Mai tujhse baat Kar Raha hu. Kaha khoyi hai tu ha ? ā€œ

Gum hai kisi ke pyaar me – her heart mocked her. Soon her lips turned into a smirk as she intentionally brushed past him, dismissing him and his question. She surely had plans to scratch his cheek and spray gangajal on his face, but she would save that for later.

Let the games begin, Mr. Pandya !

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Index

Prologue : Updated above

Part 1 : Page 3

Part 2 : Page 3

Part 3 : Page 5

Part 4 : Page 5

Part 5 : Page 6

Epilogue : Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interestingā¤šŸ˜

I really want Raavi to be strong and to be able to stand for herselfšŸ’•šŸ’•

Cant wait to read furtherā¤ā¤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ohh wow! I loved the prologue! I hope you have fun writing it just as I’m sure We’ll have fun reading it! Cannot wait for the games to begin!šŸŒøšŸ¤ā¤ļøā€šŸ”„

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kfof

Interestingā¤šŸ˜

I really want Raavi to be strong and to be able to stand for herselfšŸ’•šŸ’•

Cant wait to read furtherā¤ā¤

Thank you so much ā¤ļø

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Posted: 3 years ago
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As much as I love writing, my schedule does give me a headache as it gets really messy to balance everything up šŸ˜…

Thank you for your words🌺

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