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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Lovely! I loved how Raavi realized Shiva might not have money and supported him ❤️

Shiva giving it back nicely to Dev is great 😈

Thanks I hope you like it further also

Updating next chapter soon😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suparna2210

I’m loving this evolved and calm Shiva! Loving the independent Raavi! Waiting for update! Stay blessed!🌸🌸

Thanks

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It’s about the time to close Pandya store when Shiva recieved a call… He was shocked to see the caller id… Raavi… Why she is calling him? That too at this hour…He was overjoyed to finally have a talk with her…But one question crossed his mind Does Dev met her even after their talk? She is calling to clear the air… What would he say to her if she ask that why he told Dev about her? Why his brother always have to create problems between them… Shiva with lot of hesitation picked it while he is still worried how will he explain her if she got angry?

“Shiva…” Shiva heard her voice in low tone… He feel that she is not okay it seems she is in pain that actually drown him in fear… Dev is looking towards him keenly and trying to get with whom he was talking at this hour Shiva become conscious he does not want him to be third wheel now hence get outside and talked to her “ Aye Chipkali…. Tujhe kya hua? Yeh murjhaya hua phool kyun bani hui hai sab theek hai” Shiva said concernly… Raavi first frown at his Chipkali word but still she thought this is best she can get with this man… “Pet mein dard hai dawaai chahiye le aayega mere liye…(She is having period cramps and needed medicine and sanitary pads) Meri himmat nahi ho rahi bhoot naath… (She hesitated in between)….”

Shiva understands her problem it’s not the first time… She had called him earlier too in this compromising situation… Once she was in her college when her cramps started she wasn’t ready to go anywhere even though when all her friends persisted she said no to them… Later on, she called Shiva and asked him to come for her…

Tujhe kya lagta hai Chipkali main vella hu jo tere ek call pe bhaga aa jaunga” Shiva said arrogantly… She wasted all her day with Dev’s jaap but now she is calling him to be in her service… Raavi started crying like a baby “Tu nahi aayega na Shiva to main yahi rahungi… Roti rahungi kabhi ghar nahi jaaungi… Tere alaava koi nahi hai mere paas jisse madad maang saku binaa hichkichaaye” Shiva cannot hear her crying voice anymore and asked what she needed… Than she told him she needed sanitary pads and also her dress got spoiled… Shiva understands her dilemma and took a suit of Dhara she wore before her marriage and sanitary pads for her…

When Shiva reached there… He saw she was adamant and sitting alone in her class while guard is persuading her to go he had to close the classroom door… As she saw Shiva her eyes sparkled he covered her dress with his shirt and give her the things she needed without talking much… Soon when she got fresh up and saw Shiva standing outside the girl’s washroom for her she hugged him tightly from backside… “Tu sach mein gentleman hai Shiva… Mera hero… I just looove…” Raavi couldn’t complete her sentence and Shiva pushed her at side…”O madam main aapka koi hero vero nahi hu…Aur gentleman nahi junglee bhalu hu noch ke khaa jaaunga… Mami ki behan ki beti tujhe thori Daya kya dikha do tu to sir pe chadh jaati hai… Aur yeh love… Sabse to kehti hai Dev se karti hai to mujhse…” Raavi cut him in between “Haan karti hu Dev se… Par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki tu kuch nahi hai… Pyaar sirf aise hi hota hai kya?… Doston ki beech nahi hota… Dekhiyo ek din tujhe bhi hoga mujhse pyaar… Par main teri tarah nahi hoon noor jahaan ke nakhre nahi dikhaaungi aajaayiyo bata diyo ussi din baahe faila ke apna loongi” Raavi said proudly… She is 100 percent sure that one day this man will fell in love with her… No matter how hard he tried she will take place in his heart and once she will be there t he won’t be able to erase her… Shiva made a face who wanted to have love of friendship with her… He isn’t sure of love but he will never love her as a friend that is must…

Shiva came out of his dream world and realized he is still in call and she is still reluctant to share her worries and also not ready to cut the call…”Tu hi to kehti thi ki main tera gentleman hoon… To sharmaa kyun rahi hai dawaai aur for Address message kar pahuchta hu jald se jald” Raavi smiled he always understands her situation why she wasn’t lucky to have someone like him in her life? Why he always hated her being his MAMI KI BEHAN KI BETI…She always needed him he was always there but still she can never have him in her life… No she got the chance at the time of wedding did she lost her golden opportunity… She rubbed the thought off it’s better like this if they were married they must be fighting this time…

OK” She said while her voice broke in pain… Shiva can feel she must be in pain for long time that’s why she thought to call him… Without wasting much time he took the medicine and sanitary pads from nearby medical shop and rushed towards her flat…

Her flat is out of the main city… The place is not much crowded and there must be no medical shop nearby them… Shiva thought what let her buy this type of place… This place is far from any kind of emergency shops or hospital and at secluded corner of the city… Surely this girl is Dobi she doesn’t think about anything and buy this place to live… He knocked the door of her flat saw her neighbours coming out of their home and looking at him with weird faces… Than he noticed his clothes he really looked like sadakchaap Gunda right now… But what can he do there is no time for him to change as soon as she called he rushed to be there… Raavi after few knock opened the door… She saw Shiva at her door with her medicine and food in other hand also she can feel he had her favourite juice she smiled seeing his gesture…

Aa andar” She welcomed him inside… Shiva enters it’s a small flat but still decently kept he can see a small photo of her with her maasi ma and Maasa pa then with her Chacha ji and also a small frame of photo of their childhood while she and him fighting and Dev, Krish are posing for the photo… Raavi sat comfortably on sofa cum bed of her and kept hot water bag to her back…

Kya dekh raha hai?” Raavi noticed his keen eyes checking each and every corner of her one room flat… Even after her question he seems to wander his eyes everywhere soon enough he noticed her glare and smile to her…”Dekh raha hu kahaan jhopad patti mein settle ho gayi tu queen Victoria itna bada ghar hai maami ka yahaan kyun rehti hai tu re…”While Shiva said this in his concerned tone but for Raavi it’s something like a taunt although she never felt bad for her one room flat but for the first time she seems to be conscious about it…”To kya hua meri mehnat ke paiso se liya yeh kiraaye ka kamra jagah kam hai par maine kaun se bache paalne hai yahaan” She said in anger… “Bache paida karne ke liye zindagi mein mard hona chahiye ped se nahi aate bache… Aur teri zindagi mein koi nahi hai tabhi to mera dimaag chaat rhi thi aaj” Shiva retorted…

Kyun tu mard nahi hai…Yaa tujhme koi technique kharaabi hai jo tere mere bache nahi ho sakte” Raavi said this in her josh but soon she realizes what nonsense she spit and curse herself for it… Shiva is taken aback this type of conversation always make him weak but this girl she never thought before speaking their children how can she have thoughts like that… And if she had these thought than she must have said yes for their marriage when Dhara Bhabhi came with this suggestion… He royally ignored what she said and pass her medicines and food to her…

Tune mujhe issliye call kiya na kyun ki paise nahi honge tere paas phir socha hoga Shiva se kya len den Raani saahiba ban ke mauj udaaungi” Shiva made an irritating face while commenting her sarcastically… Even though Raavi is in anger but his funny antics made her pass a smile she remembered how she never paid for any chocolate, chips or toffee when Shiva is at counter… Gaumbi never asked her money and when Dev was there she paid the money for his attention…

Hasaa mat Shiva badi taqleef mein hun main… Anjar panjar dheele hai… Kar dungi tere saare udhaar poore jal kukda mat ban… Ja plate mein khaana nikaal ke laa bahut bhook lagi hai mujhe…”Raavi act in attitude and lay down at her sofa comfortably as if she knows now he will do everything perfectly…

Free ka naukar samjha hai na tune mujhe… Vo to Bhabhi kehti hai buzurgon ki madad karo issliye kar rahaa hun” Shiva start putting food in her plate while keep taunting her… But Raavi is acting full relaxed as if his words are not reaching to her ears… He ractions fume his anger he was about to burst out when he heard her sob in pain…She must be in pain otherwise she won’t call him… First he needed to provide her food and medicine he will complete his revenge in future session…

Chal uth khaa le… Baad mein dekhunga tujhe to main…” he held her hand to sit comfortably and have a proper meal…

Kal sham se kuch nahi khaaya hai bahut bhook lagi thi acha hua tu khaana le aaya nahi to bhookha hi sona padh jaata mujhe” Her lips are trembling even though Shiva say he hate this girl but looking at her at such condition pierce his heart… He needed to talk to her sensibly otherwise she will keep doing this for a long time…

To kyun nahi chali jaati maami ke paas…Tune unhe bataaya bhi hai ki tu yahaan hai… Vo jaisi bhi ho tujhe bahut pyaar karti hai…” Raavi looked on Shiva for the first time he is too mild with her… And she can feel he is worried about her… His tone is soothing and in a way trying to pacify her soul…

Pataa hai unhe ki somnath mein hu… Par kahaan yeh nahi… Na hi yeh jaanti hai ki college join kiya hai… Main bhi bahut pyaar karti hu unse Shiva par tu hi bataa kaise jaaun unke paas mere liye vo paanv pe gir gayi thi Suman Kaki ke… Sab ko lagta hai ki vo sirf khud ke baare mein sochti hai… Sahi bhi hai par tu bta kaun kissi anaath ke liye itna karta hai” Raavi said this while eating her food she can’t complete her sentence when Shiva cut her off…

Tu anaath nahi hai Raavi… Kam se kam unke liye to tu nahi… Kyun soch rahi hai yeh sab galti to Dev ki hai na to khud ko kyun sazza de rahi hai? Khud ko kyun anaath samajh rahi jab tere liye ladne ko naagin ban ke khadi thi vo maami…” Shiva said this with stern face… He felt guilty he never ever thought she will feel herself too empty because of Dev… If he had a little bit idea this is going to happen then he must have tried all the way so that she would end up with Dev…

Dev ki galti nahi thi Shiva aur yeh baat mann rakhne ko nahi keh rahi… Sach mein aisa lagta hai mujhe… tujhe pata hai yahaan se jaane ki baad mujhe ek baar bhi Dev ki yaad nahi aayi haan buraa lagta tha ki mandap pe chod di gayi main… Logon ki taano ke baton ka par sach mein Dev ke saath zindagi nahi bitaa paaungi iska buraa nahi lagaa apni dil ko baar baar tatola samajh mein aaya ki usse zyada to mujhe iss baat ka buraa lag rahaa tha ki itna pyaara pariwar mujhe nahi mil sakaa…Sirf Dev ne hi nahi shayad maine bhi kabhi usse pyaar kiyaa hi nahi” Raavi pour her feelings out… She never ever share this with her Chacha ji even though he asked her again and again but she never found her words and ignored the topic but before him they came out so normally… Shiva looked at her he can understand she is feeling awkward and also thinking now will he judge her? Or he will make fun of her? But Shiva is not in mood of any of these…

He felt that sometimes before too but when she is too into her Dev jaap he never thought to correct her… Or he does but she never took his seriously... Sometimes he felt that those people who are closed to her will let her understand this but may be with time she learnt it by herself…And he is not liking the time she learn this...

Tujhe main ajeeb lag rahi hongi na… Poori zindagi Dev ka naam leke tere kaan kha gayi aur ab keh rahi hu ki shayad pyaar hi nahi tha… Kya karoon Shiva pata hai maine apne liye ek bahut pyaara sapno ka mehal banaaya tha par jo vo paani mein beh gaya na tab samajh aaya ki main khud jaanti thi ki vo mera mehal nahi hai phir bhi banaati rahi… Shikayat nahi hai mujhe kissi se dukhi hu par gilaa nahi hai kissi se mujhe… Aur vaise bhi abhi zindagi khatam thore na hui hai… Phir se mehal banaaungi iss baar lehron se takraane nahi dungi usse…” She smiled and answered him with a smile… For the first time in his life Shiva looked at her keenly she is beautiful indeed Somnath ki sabse khoobsurat ladki hai yeh… He can feel he is attracted towards her… Those words and her attitude finally made their way to his heart… He felt proud of her…

Mujhe nahi pataa tha tu itni achi baat bhi karti hai… Kahin tera dimaag mein koi chemical locha to nahi hua… Yeh vo Raavi nahi hai jo yahaan se gayi thi… Yeh to koi aur hai kahaan chod aayi meri waali chudail ko?” Shiva replied with a smile so that she feel comfortable… And indeed his idea worked, her mood changed instantly… Shiva helped her to finish her food and gave her medicine…He filled her hot bag once more and make sure she is ok while going out of the house…

Shiva… Agar tere paas time ho to kal iss waali chudail ke saath lunch karega? Jaanti hu Baba tujhe Dhara Bhabhi ke haath ka hi khaana pasand hai… Par naya ghar liya hai maine choti si welcoming party rakhi hai… Kuch professors bhi aayenge agar tujhe sah ilage to tu bhi aa jaana… (She thought for a while is she talking to someone special it’s her bhoot nath there is no need too be so formal) Formal kyun ho rahi hu main… Aa jaayiyo varna Pandya store se uthaa ke le aaungi” She smiled and said to him… Shiva smiled back this is first time a girl asked him to her home for lunch doesn’t it count as Date… He smiled shyly now acknowledged his feeling he can’t deny her… But with her so called intelligent friends doesn’t he feel inferior but how can he deny such a cute understanding woman… He nodded and went from there…

I feel inferior at times... But does it only my issue? Does my family members closed ones has nothing to do with it... If I am in a darkness and you can feel it then why don't you extend your hands and walk with me towards the light...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Really sweet update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Loved it girl ❤💜❤!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Bahut sundar update!!🌸🤍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Amazing update👏

It was very sweet and cute 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

It is soo sweet ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was very sweet! Loved the flashback, and Shiva taking care of Raavi both in the past and present ❤️

Raavi exerting her haq of Shiva was lovely 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#70

Beautiful ❤😍


Waiting for next part ❤

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