The story is marvelous. The way u have portrayed ravi's emotions is amazing. I saw some ppl saying that what shiva is doing with ravi is not good, I think it's wrong, Shiva and Ravi are bffs, Shiva for now maybe considers her as his friend only unlike Ravi who likes him and considers him the only one of her own, and the person who will always be with her, now it's not shiva's fault, shiva cares for her a lot too but maybe he didn't have any feelings for her at this moment. Maybe for now, ramaya and shiva are a thing which will obviously end, and also one thing shiva didn't ignore ravi, rather ravi ingnored him coz she can't see shiva with anyone else which shiva doesn't know, she is suffering from inferiority complex and is jealous of Ramya, now ramya' ch has not been explored, maybe she is also a nice girl who is actually unaware of ravi's condition, she cannot be blamed too. Ravi needs someone to talk and communicate her feelings, maybe any relative, or krish can also help.