I have really missed a masterpiece all of them are so good and out of all I loved the first one most
The Divorce track must be done in such a way this will be best but yup it's not for trp so we won't get it but reading here gives me peace and I can imagine each and every scene... You wrote it so beautifully wonderful..👏.
2nd drabble is really steamy and hot one... I would love to see Raavi torturing SHiva for romance and this is the only time I want Shiva to lose as he do here... Since it's a star plus show we will get Raavi pregnant after two or three kisses but dialogues can be written... It's really brilliant piece...😉
Aww my sweet and cute small Shiva and Raavi... They shared the first kiss and Gaumbi Mama Mami are lucky to witness it... Gaumbi must be thinking abhi tak to main bhi virgin hoon but Shiva hit a sixer😳... So that's the reason of Prafulla and Shiva banter this will be more cute if in future Prafulla and Shiva fight for Raavi in funny manner...😎
You took the last chapter after yesterday's episode and I too liked that in first chapter too you clarified that Raavi is an average student but still her persistence and hard work will let her achieve the success she wants... As it is revealed in show that Raavi isn't a good student I would love to see her growth now... Both Raavi and Shiva can work together... Grow together and learn how to love together...👍🏼
A great piece love to read upcoming drabbles too👍🏼