Shiva Rishita OS- Empathy (Updated on page 4) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Haaye Wali

Gir gayi ho tum meri nazron mein Faara!😆

Thank u sooo much Aalu baby!

Wali is one of my favs

Uske dialogues to Farah when she comes to stay with him in the haveli are so good

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Wali is one of my favs

Uske dialogues to Farah when she comes to stay with him in the haveli are so good

Yup wali is amazing

Mischievous serious

Enigma

Is it weird that I’m in tears 😭😆

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED!!!

Omg Maahi, this is absolutely perfect! 🤗

Honestly, I don’t think I can put into words how much I love this!

Each and every line was worth reading over and over! The way you recreated the shirt scene and the small moments between all of them! Especially, Shiva and Rishita! Their conversation! Ahh this is brilliant ❤️

Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece! I can’t wait to read more on these two and I hope you keep writing! This one is going on my reread list

You’re absolutely right, if there is anyone who can advise Shiva about changing himself it’s Rishita.

Tumhen uske liye bura lagta hai ki use tum mile aur woh compromise kar rahi hai aur wo zyada deserve karti hai! Aur tum fir bhi usko upset kiye ja rahe ho

What we all want to ask Shivaa 😂❤️

Omg it felt so good seeing Rishita stump Raavi during the kurta selection, for some reason!

I was laughing so much at Raavi’s expense, thank you Maaahi 🤣

That sawarna conversation from Rishita to Suman is so close to my heart. I was just telling something like this today morning to my mom. 🤗

Shiva and Rishita truly are stars and you brought out the best in them. Love it Maaahi ❤️

This is so so good! There is so much in this one shot! Shiva Rishta had my heart here ❤️

Dev and Raavi understand that they need to be more understanding.

The last ShiVi scene ❤️

Loved it🤗

Just one word..beautiful❤️❤️

You create magic with your words....looooved it❤️

Hello darling, this was a wonderful oneshot....

I loved Shiva and Rishita's bonding... They're actually both very similar people(except for her occasional selfishness). Both have their hearts in the right place more often than not but do not express themselves rightly due to their anger...

And Raavi's break down, oh god will someone mail a soft copy of this to the CVs!!!! I really wish that whenever they come around to the Shivi conversation about both of their insecurities they atleast try to make it similar to this....

P. S Would you mind telling me your name?

Oh my gosh Maahi!!!😍

I can't even begin to explain how much I love this!!!❤️

This is what I always wanted for Shiva - someone who is exclusively in his team! Poor li'l bean suffers so much alone. 😭

Loved Shiva-Rishita's bond. And a jealous Raavi and Dev is simply *chef's kiss*⭐️

Loved loved loved the story!!!! Already looking forward to the next.😳

Beautiful update, no words for it🤗

Shiva and Rishita's bond was beautifully described👏

Dev and Raavi feeling insecure and realising their mistake was beautifully described👏

Waiting for your next story

Maahiiii!!🤗

This is super duper amazing!!!😍

I'm so glad I read this before sleeping 😆

I loved it! ❤️

I adore the Piddi bhabhi-Kingkong devar bond so much here!! Thanks for this