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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Thank you so much for writing this❤️

Much needed...Am so glad Raavi left him. Shiva has been behaving way to insensitively with Raavi for the past few days. The public humiliation was the lowest point he could hit. I really wanted Raavi to give it back to him and go away from him. The slap in the end...he needs that

Waiting for the next update❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Glad Raavi stood up for herself and left. Hope Shiva realises the blunder he has created this time!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Coveter_Sy

I already love this.

Good on you Ravi. Just leave that stupid husband of yours. I like Dhara in this too. ❤️❤️

Waiting for update



Thank you❤️

Dhara is the silent hero in every Shivi story😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hush🤕🤕

Thank God

Now I am waiting for this story😘


Updating soon😉smiley27

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Thank you so much for writing this❤️

Much needed...Am so glad Raavi left him. Shiva has been behaving way to insensitively with Raavi for the past few days. The public humiliation was the lowest point he could hit. I really wanted Raavi to give it back to him and go away from him. The slap in the end...he needs that

Waiting for the next update❤️


Thank yousmiley27

I agree, it's as if Shiva has taken it upon himself in behaving ill with Raavi just so that Raavi could leave him😡

He deserves a slap in the show as well, that too from either Dhara or Raavi herself!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: White-Lilac

Glad Raavi stood up for herself and left. Hope Shiva realises the blunder he has created this time!


Thank yousmiley27

Yeah, he needs to realize it, big time!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Loved this take on the current track. ❤️

Glad you penned it down.

I'm pissed off with the way the show is running these days... I personally wanted Raavi to get away from the Pandya clan for a while. She needs to stand up for herself. Shiva is being too rude on her.


I'm excited for your story.

Do update the next chapter soon...

Waiting....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loved this take on the current track. ❤️

Glad you penned it down.

I'm pissed off with the way the show is running these days... I personally wanted Raavi to get away from the Pandya clan for a while. She needs to stand up for herself. Shiva is being too rude on her.


I'm excited for your story.

Do update the next chapter soon...

Waiting....


Thank you so muchsmiley27

I agree, It's as if people in the Pandya family can see what's going on, but no one is trying to make amends between Shivi. Dev tried, but Shiva snapped at him like so bad😭

Next Part coming today😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 2


"Jis baat ka mujhe darr tha, aakhir wahi hua." Dhara exclaimed as she glared at Shiva with fire in her eyes.

"Aakhir tune saabit kar diya ki maine teri aur Raavi ki shaadi karwake sach mein bahut badi galti kar di. Tune aaj yeh saabit kar diya ki jab maine tujhe uss bacchi ki jaan bachane ke liye tujhe usse shaadi karne bola tha tab maine kitni badi galti kar di. Bichari kunwari rehti to itne dukh to nahi jhelne padte use. Tu hamesha Dev ko taane maarta tha na ki usne Raavi ki zindagi barbaad ki hai, tu kya kar raha hai abhi? Tu bada pholon ki tarah rakh raha hai Raavi ko? Bol?" She jerked his vest yet again, to knock some sense in his adamant mind.

"Are kitni baar tujhe samjhaya ki ek baar apne rishte ko mauka de, jaise Raavi dene ki koshish kar rahi hai, lekin nahi, tune to gaanth maar ke rakhi hai iss baat ko ki tu uske layak nahi hai. Tune jab bola tha na ki tujhe Shaadi karne mein koi interest nahi hai, mujhe tabhi samjh jaana chahiye tha. Par nahi maine zabardasti do aise logon ko shaadi ke pavitra rishte mein baandha hai jo kabhi ek dusre ke liye bane hi nahi hain. Mujhe maaf karde Shiva, aaj tune yeh saabit kar diya ki maine wakai tere aur Raavi saath bahut galat kar diya hai. Tum dono ki zindagi barbaad kar di hai maine. Ho sake to mujhe maad karde." She joined her hands and fell on her knees, while tears finally flowed down her cheeks.

"Dhara..!!" Gaumbi ran to where Dhara was sitting on the ground and gathered her broken self in his arms. "Dhara, bass kar, chup ho jaa. Tu kyun maafi maang rahi hai? Tune to bass Raavi ki zindagi saavarna chahi."

Suman felt bad for Dhara and glanced at Shiva with her judging eyes. Even though Raavi was a bit childish, but she also thought Shiva and Raavi were a perfect match. But whatever Shiva did with Raavi was not acceptable.

Shiva felt ashamed to see Dhara's broken self, which was his own doing.

"Zindagi savarne ke chakkar mein maine uski zindagi aur bigaad di Gaumbi. Maine Shiva pe bharosa karte hue use Raavi se shaadi ke liye kaha tha. Jab Shiva ne Raavi ko suicide karne se bachaya tha to main uski care dekhkhe dang reh gayi thi. Achanak se mujhe ehsaas hua, ki agar Raavi ko agar koi sambhal sakta hai to woh sirf Shiva hai. Kitni galat thi main. Tabhi Somnath ji ne mujhe aisa sochne ke liye saza kyun nahi di. Kyun nahi..???", Dhara sobbed harder while Gaumbi tried to pacify her. He gazed at Shiva with disappointment evident in his eyes.

Shiva stood rooted on his spot after hearing everything his Dhara Bhabhi said. To say he was ashamed to disappoint her was disheartening and disturbing.

"Humari shaadi kinn haalaton mein hui kisi se chupa nahi hai. Humne bhi toh nahi socha tha ki ek pal hum dost the aur dusre pal hum shaadi ke bandhan mein band gaye the. Chahe jo bhi halaat the, humne use sweekar karke aage badh gaye. Shayad Somnath ji bhi yahi chahte the, humari jodi aise hi judna thi. Humne to kabhi aise ek dusre ka apman nahi kiya? Kabhi yeh nahi socha ki hum ek dusre ke layaak hai ya nahi. Somnath ji ka aashirwad samajhe ke hum aage badh gaye, par aaj kal ke bacche to shaadi ko mazaak bana ke rakhe hue hain. Yeh Shiva, Apni hi biwi ko bala samajhta hai, jisse isne apni marzi se hi shaadi ki. Itna asaan hai na tere liye yeh sab Shiva? Are tu kya jaanta hai Shaadi ke baare mein?"

Shiva had no anwers to her questions. He kept glancing down, his own tears slowly flowing down his cheeks.

"Shaadi ka sabse nazuk hissa hota hai 'Respect'. Tune hamesha se use dutkara hai, hamesha usse ladai ki hai. Raavi pehle teri shikayat karti thi, par mere samjhane par woh iss rishte ko mauka dene ki koshish kar rahi thi, par tu koshish karna hi nahi chahta. Baar baar use aise treat kiya hai jaise woh insaan nahi hai, teri ghulaam hai. Tujhe ye pata nahi hoga Shiva, par agar humara sabse kareebi insaan humein baar baar ek hi baar bole na, to maano ya maano, humara mann uspe vishwas karne lagta hai. Hum pehle kabhi tum dono ke beech jyaada nahi aaye kyunki hum chahte the ki tum dono apni pareshaani aapas mein suljhao. Par nahi, tune apna fiasla kar liya hai ki 'Shiva Raavi ke layaak nahi hai' Yahi hai na tera faisla? To theek hai, Mein ab tum dono ko meri galti ki saza nahi bhugatne dungi. Gaumbi hum aaj hi wakeel ke paas jayenge aur inn dono ke divorce ki formalities shuru karwayenge." Dhara wiped her tears as she angrily marched to her room, Suman and Gaumbi following her.

Krish and Dev exchanged worried glances as Rishita looked tensed. Shiva stayed rooted on his spot, too shocked and ashamed at the turn of events.

This looked bad, something bad was coming their way.

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Raavi shuffled through her phone avoiding her Mausima and Anita who were trying to gain her attention.

"Are Raavi beta, thoda sa to khaal le beta? Tune subha se kuch nahi khaya. Thoda sa to kha le na Beta."

Prafulla tried to get her to eat, but Raavi just nodded her head in negation and turned her face to the other side.

"Fui, aap jao, mein khilati hun ise." Anita took the plate from Prafulla and sat beside Raavi. Prafulla looked unsure, but nodded and left the room.

"Raavi, please thoda sa to kha le?" Anita took a morsel in front of her mouth and pleaded.

"Mujhe bhook nahi hai Anita Di. Aap please jao yahaan se.", Raavi tossed her phone away and closed her eyes.

"Dekh Raavi, mein jaanti hun tujhpe jo beet rahi hai mein andaaza bhi nahi laga sakti. Par khaane se dushmani bhi to theek nahi na. Thoda sa khaa le, tune subha se kuch nahi khaya."

Raavi opened her eyes and sat up straight,"Aap logon ko samjh mein kyun nahi aa raha hai? Mujhe bhook nahi lagi hai. Abhi kha bhi lungi to kya ho jayega?"

Anita had no answers to her questions. So she just sighed sadly at her and left the room as well.

A silent tear dribbled down her eyes as she glanced at the plate full of food which Anita had left deliberately and she turned away, ignoring her grumbling stomach.

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Shiva knew Dev was at the store, so he had the opportunity to go to Raavi and apologize for his mistakes and his terrible behavior.

After pondering all afternoon, he couldn't let the go the feeling of emptiness in his heart. His mind screamed for being illogical and mean towards Raavi for Raavi, while his heart cried as it tried to tell him to not let Raavi go away from him. He was finally in front of Prafulla's house, but he knew dealing with anyone apart from Raavi right now will lead to him losing control over his anger, and he wanted to avoid that at all costs.

So he stealthily slipped through the terrace area and skipped to Raavi's room which was on the first floor. He glanced inside but to his surprise, Raavi was not in her room. He sneakily jumped inside, trying to catch any movement of hers in the house. He could hear Prafulla and Anita's voices as he walked closer to the room's door.

"Are pata nahi aisi halat mein kaunsi saheli se milne gayi hai meri bacchi. Pata nahi kab tak aayegi." Shiva could hear the worry in Prafulla's voice and understood the reason behind Raavi's absence.

"Fui, Raavi bacchi nahi hai, aap tension mat lo. Raavi zimmedar hai. Woh aati hi hogi." Anita tried to assure her.

"Are aise kaise tension na lun? Kaisi nazuk halat mein itni der se bahar gayi hai woh. Ae maro Bhogilal, bas meri bacchi ko sahi salamat ghar pahuncha dena bhai. Meri bacchi ki abhi halat theek nahi hai."

Anita looked helpless as she tried to pacify Prafulla.

"Bas Raavi jaldi se ghar aa jaye."

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Raavi sat on the footsteps of a tree near a tea stall. She timidly ordered a tea while she gazed at the riverside. She hugged herself as the cold breeze surrounded her.

Soft songs from Radio were blazing near the tea stall as she admired the serenity of the night.

Going to a friend's place was a lie, Raavi wanted some alone time. She knew Prafulla was worried for her, but her constant pestering was unnerving, and she wanted a break.

She sipped the piping hot tea as she stared in oblivion.

Just then her favorite song started playing on the radio and Shiva's face reflected in her heart.

(Please listen to this beautiful song, totally relatable to Shivi's situation)


Darr Yeh Lagta Hai, Kya Yeh Sapana Hai

Ab Jo Apana Hai, Kal Woh Kaha Hai


Were they ever destined together?


Darta Dil Pooche Baar Baar

Darta Dil Pooche Baar Baar


She always craved for the fairytale lovestory, which she always thought she could get with Dev, but it was Shiva who made her think about them again.


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Kitna Karu

Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Kitna Karu


Love? Did she love Shiva?

What was she to him?

Did he see her as his soulmate?


Aansu Aate The Laut Jaate The

Lamhon Pe Lamhen Chatpatate The


The endless tears which Shiva gave her were countless, but there were moments that were special to her.


Phir Bhi Kiya Hai Intezaar

Phir Bhi Kiya Hai Intezaar


She gulped the sob as she realized even after all the things Shiva had done to her, she yearned for him, she yearned for his attention.


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu


She yearned for his acceptance.


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu


She yearned for his love.


Kya Pyar Hai Kya Hai Nahi

Maine Nahi Poocha Na


She knew his feelings had started to change, from her birthday to the mosquito incident. He showed her how gentle he could be, how he could be delicate with her, not the manhandling Shiva she knew of.


Ho Tum Mere Yah Ho Nahi

Maine Nahi Poocha Na


The night when he had saved from the goons, the moment she hugged him tight, she felt relief wash over her in strong waves. Her Man had saved her, and the realization had given her butterflies in the stomach.


Poocha Nahi Baar Baar

Poocha Nahi Baar Baar


The night of their reception, she was pleased when she saw Shiva literally bowled by her beauty.


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu

Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu


The little rains of love and care were overwhelming in the beginning, but she started to enjoy them.


Ek Din Aayega Tanha Reh Jaayega

Ek Din Aayega Tanha Reh Jaayega


Shiva, on the other hand who had been observing her stared at her in relief as he saw her safe. He smiled sadly as he heard the song and sighed at the irony of his life. She left for one single night and this was his state.


Dost Kya Dushman Kya Dhundh Na Paayega

Maula Ke Saamne Kehta Reh Jaayega


Why was it getting difficult to be away from her? Wasn't this the first thing he wanted from the start? so now when she was finally going away, why was he feeling disappointed himself?


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Kitna Karu

Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Kitna Karu


He feels different for her, he knew that. But was this love that he felt for Raavi?


Intezaar Kitna Karu

Aitbaar Kitna Karu


Does he love her? Can he love her?


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Kitna Karu


Is he elligible to love her?


Shiva came out of his thoughts when he felt a hand on his shoulder.

"Kya re majnu? Durr se hi apni laila ko dekhta rahega? Tu nahi jana chahta to hum jayein kya uske pass?"

Shiva gritted his teeth as he realized who it was. 2-3 of Janardhan's goons surrounded him.

"Tum log? Itni maar khaane ke baad bhi firse aa gaye? Kitne nikamme ho tum log?", Shiva taunted as he made sure he stood between them and Raavi, who had realized the situation and came close to where they were.

"Shiva?", came a feeble voice of his wife, and he hated the fact that she was scared from these goons, and felt giddy as he thought she was also scared for him.

So he just showed her a hand, telling her to stay where she was. The goons chuckled as they exchanged some random jokes on Shivi, but it didn't take them to make the first move.

A fight started between Shiva and those 3 goons who were trying to throw multiple punches at Shiva. But Shiva was handling them very well. Unfortunately for the goons, Shiva was burning with rage at the comment these fools had made at his Raavi.

His Raavi?

Yes, it indeed was this. She was his. He threw punches at the goons left and right. One of the goons knew Raavi was a weak spot for Shiva, so he went after Raavi, who shouted for Shiva, scared to her wits.

Shiva quickly reached towards them and stopped the goon from even touching her and wrapped his strong arms around their neck and dragged them away from Raavi.

"Bhaag Raavi, jaldi jaa...", Shiva screamed as he kicked one of the goons where the sun doesn't shine and he fell to the ground groaning in pain. Raavi jumped at the order but stayed rooted on the spot. There was no way she was leaving him alone. So she quickly called the police and informed them about the fight.

She quickly walked to where Shiva was still fighting them, but her eyes widened when she saw a goon carrying a knife. She quickly jumped at grabbed the knife before it could attack Shiva's back.

Her pained shrieks didn't go unnoticed as Shiva quickly came to her aid and punched the goon in his stomach and threw the knife away.

Before he could aid Raavi's bleeding hand, he was hit hard on his head by the third goon. Shiva stumbled as Raavi screamed for him and quickly stabled his swaying body as she wrapped her arms around his waist, but due to her hand being hurt, she lost balance and her leg was twisted very badly and they went crashing on the ground, with Raavi nursing his head on her lap as Shiva struggled to stay conscious.

The goons were about to attack again, but the police arrived at the correct time and once they accessed to the situation, they quickly arrested the goons, with a constable waiting by Shivi's side so that he could take them to the hospital.

Raavi cupped his cheeks and jerked him awake, trying to keep him conscious as much as she could.

After 10 minutes, Shiva finally regained his consciousness. Raavi assured the constable that they were okay. He argued about her injured head and the blood coming from Shiva's head, but Raavi told him that she will manage.

The constable agreed and notified them to have their statements registered tomorrow morning. Raavi nodded and the constable left.

"Shiva, tu theek hai? Abhi bhi dard ho raha hai?", she cupped his cheeks and asked as if she was asking a 5 year old while she examined his head. She slowly wiped the blood that was running from his forehead with her duppatta. A small smile adorned his lips as he nodded his head in approval motioning tha he was okay.

They stared at each other like there was nothing wrong with the situation. Shiva realized that she was shocked by the incident and he wanted to comfort her, but he hesitated at the thought.

Her eyes were silently pleading with him for comfort, all though her face looked devoid of any emotion.


Chhoti Raaten Hai Kitni Baaten Hai

Ab Jo Aaye Ho Ab Batate Hai


He slowly removed his handkerchief from his pocket and delicately wrapped her bleeding hand with it. Her eyes were speaking volumes, her emotions finally surfacing.


Thaamon Hamein Ab Ek Baar

Thaamon Hamein Ab Ek Baar


He leaned closer as he wrapped his arms around her shivering form and pulled her closer. She resisted the shiver she felt when her body received the warmth of his. She slowly lifted her arms and wrapped them around him as she was fighting for her want of comfort. And to have the comfort coming from Shiva, her mind was telling her to deny the urge, but her heart won as she rubbed her nose over his shoulder and finally let the tears sprout out of her eyes. He clutched her mane and let her sob over his shoulder.


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu…


"Jab bhagne ko bolta hun to jaati nahi hai, Aur jab rukne ke liye bolta hun to durr chali jaati hai. Tera kuch nahi ho sakta Chipkali." He whispered as his hands carresed her mane to comfort her.


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu…


"Jab tujhe sab apne tareeke se karna hota hai to tu mujhse kyun puchti hai? Nafrat bhi apne tareeke se karti hai, Ladai bhi apne tareeke se karti hai, Meri bakwaas bhi apne tareeke se bardasht karti hai. Kyun kiya tune aaj tak bardasht?"


Intezaar Aitbaar Tumse Pyar Itna Karu…


"Kya tu sach mein nahi jaanti ki mein tujhe durr kyun bhejna chahta tha?"

This question brought her back from her daze as she quickly broke the hug and moved back.


"Agar sab cheezon pe haq jatana zaroori hai, Mujh pe kyun nahi haq jataya?"


To be continued..


How was it?

I know it was a bit boring but the last part will be good, I promise.😉

By the way can anyone imagine who said the last dialogue?

And also, please listen to the beautiful song Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U0Wp7kHhpuc❤️❤️

Do let me know your thoughts about this part.😃❤️

Edited by Dandellion_22 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful update ❤️❤️❤️

Loved it 😍😍😍

Waiting for next one 😊😘😘

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