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Woohoo I see an update coming ❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui



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Chapter 1

// Adronitis //

[ (n.) Frustration with how long it takes to get to know someone ]



She was at the Pandya house only for Shiva, only him. She kept reminding herself of that every time Suman kaki opened her mouth, every time Rishita behaved like an entitled brat, every time Dhara Di went on one of her weird mood swings, which was more often than not and every time the brothers whom she grew-up with behaved as if she was unknown to them. She wondered what sort of a mess her life had become in the past couple of months. Time and time again she had dared to hope for a better future, only for the inkling of hope to be snatched away from her cruelly. Raavi was fed up of that pattern. Now she would get what she wanted. At any cost.


She had lost her parents at an age where she couldn’t comprehend life, hence the grief of loosing them wasn’t as painful, it was like missing something she never had, a certain wistfulness and longing, to be loved and cherished by her parents, but then she had her Maasi and Mausa along with Anita, but then after the rude awakening at her wedding and the subsequent events that followed after she saw how sometimes the love that they had for her turned conditional. Then came Dhara Di the one person who she thought could never do any wrong, but then again she was proven wrong time and time again, first when she was left at the wedding alter, second when she had split the family and now when she kept forcing her to get back with Shiva. It wasn’t that she herself didn’t want him, only gods knew how much she wanted him in her life, she knew she had made mistakes but he wasn’t any less either, she at least tried to get things to work between them once again, but what did he do? Simply push her away, again and again.


The first night she spent away from Shiva, she could not sleep however she convinced herself it was simply because her surroundings had changed and that she had gotten used to the room Shiva and her had shared, and so she spent her night sleepless and restless. The second and third night passed the same as well, and then he had sent divorce papers. That night Raavi ended up destroying a lot of things in her room out of anger. Anger on him, for being so closed off about his thoughts, she knew that he was an ambivert and more often than not he usually kept to himself when it came to something that bothered him. She hated that quality of his, she needed him to talk to her, to tell her what he wanted and what he thought, what she didn’t need were those wistful and longing glances he sent her way when he thought no one was looking. Anger on herself, for being so naive and stupid, for living in her own fantasy land and anger that she couldn’t figure out what was going through her husbands head.


No matter how hard she tried it seemed as if he was hell-bent on doing what he thought was right for the both of them, he couldn’t decide for her, no matter how much she cared for him and how much she loved him, he couldn’t make her decision for her, gone was the Raavi who let people decide for her, she was better than that now. No and absolutely no one could decide the course of her life for her, she had enough of people just shoving their decision’s down her throat. She had cursed herself for being so silent and letting people do as they pleased, first with Dev and then with Dhara Bhabhi. She had enough. It was her life and she was going to take control.


Shiva on the other hand was having a terrible time, ever since Raavi was back he had felt like he had lost his mind, on one hand he was beyond happy that she was there in front of his eyes, on the other hand he was confused, if she was here for his Bhabhi then why did she keep trying to provoke him, why did she always try to get closer to him, showing him her wide brown eyes, that would always reflect pain and longing? Why did she get angry whenever Disha tried to get close to him. He needed to talk to her, but he wasn’t ready for what the outcome of tat conversation would be.


Meanwhile Raavi had tried everything to get close to Shiva, to confuse him in the hopes that he would blurt something out, considering the kind of person Shiva was, he would never open up to her willingly, it took him a lot to talk to someone to tell them of the problems he was facing, he was much more used to being the person everyone relied on, he was used to being the Chattan Pandya. She had had enough of the Chattan Pandya. She had to hasten her plans, knowing Suman kaki was hell bent on getting Shiva married to Disha, although she knew that Shiva was barely interested in her it still bothered Raavi to no ends, since when was the Shiva she knew so mute? How did he simply just let people decide his life for him? Where was that headstrong Shiva? She vowed to get him back.


Through the bike riding lessons they had gotten a bit closer, the proximity seemed to be working wonders for them, she would notice how his hands would slip to her waist from her arms, the was his hot palms would run over the length of her arms and hold loosely onto her waist would make shivers curse through her, she hoped he wouldn’t take notice of those little trembles, but he did, no matter how hard he tried he would notice her tremors and revel in the way she would feel against his chest. He wouldn’t be able to help himself from holding onto her waist, he knew it was messed up of him to give her such mixed signals, but he was still scared of being vulnerable.


It was another day and they were on their way to another bike riding lesson, well they were in a good mood, they hadn’t fought much all day and Raavi was sure Shiva was melting, Disha hadn’t shown up at the house and that was an added benefit, just as they had crossed the threshold of the aangan Suman wheeled herself in.


Here we go again


Thought Shiva as his mother entered the room with an expression of displeasure plastered all across her face. What was she up to now she wondered.


“Aye markhundi gaay, kya kar rahi hai tu, tujhe shanti nahi mili mere bete ki zindagi barbaad karke, abhi bhi poore Somnath pe bike pe chipak chipak ke jaarahe ho, Arrey thode hi dino mein talaaq hone waala hai dono ka, kuch toh sharam karo”


Just as Shiva was about to open his mouth to defend Raavi, Suman shut him down instantly


“Aye petticoat chaap, tu chup reh, main baat kar rahi hoon na”


“Aur tu, tujhme sharam naam ki cheez hai? Chodo main bhi kisse baat kar rahi hoon, tujhme khan ki sharam, tu hai hi kaagdi ki bhatiji, tujhme kahan ki sharam aayegi”


With every word Suman spoke Shiva noticed the way Raavi tensed, her palms balling up into fists, she breathed heavier and tried to reign in her anger. His mother however didn’t seem to be in a mood to stop.


“Acchi hi baat hai ki Aaradhna ben aur Pratap bhai saab nahi hai, warna tujh jaise beti paakar roh khoon ke aasun roh rahe hue hote”


His mother spit venom and he knew even he couldn’t say anything in her defence. She had gone too far. He stood straighter and watched as Raavi took a deep breathe, ready to talk.


“Kaki, aapko mere Maa-Baap ke baare mein bolne ka koi Haq nahi hai, maine pehle bhi bola hai, khud ki insult seh loongi, mere Maa-Papa ki nahi, aap meherbani karke chup hojaye, agar mera mooh khula toh kisi ke liye accha nahi hoga’


Raavi walked off in anger and Shiva gave his mother a look of disdain and walked behind her. He had to talk to her, soon.



A.N: Here it is, finally after the 3 months of pondering over the track. I hope y’all like this, Suman gonna get bashed soon so yeah, there will be 2-3 more parts to this, and I will be posting a chapter daily, also I’ve given imaginary names to Raavi’s parents because we don’t have their names! I know its been 3 months and I am so sorry for the delay, but in my defence I wanted to know how the makers would execute the track 🤪



Edited by Inaayaa_sidiqui - 3 years ago
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here for my jana smiley31

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Yes you are, and I want unreswa aaj 🥺👉👈❤️😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Some Tagzu! 🤗


Let me know if you want to be tagged in the next update!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Daily updates? I will hold you to that

Beautifully written and go ahead shred Suman to pieces😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Here


Unreswa


YES FINALLY THIS GOT UPDATED *squeals* can't wait to see you shred suman to pieces, I will literally be the happiest person.


I want to see Shiva and Raavi both shred her, I need cute moments, I need heartwarming moments I NEED THEM TO TALK AND HUG IT OUT AND CRY AND YELL PLEASE

Edited by sillysatchel - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ohh Inny my angst baby!!! What an update! The intro to the angst as you’re calling it is lovely! I’m glad you pondered on it for 3 months coz now I feel you’ll do wonders to show both their POV and what they can be if only the f*cking open their mouth!! I’m waiting for the angst, the love and the Suman bashing!!! Go for it girl!!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

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