Shivi TS // Sciamachy // Chapter 2 Posted 15.11.21 - Page 9

Finally here to commentwa

And I won't lie, I expected Raavi to go all berserk on him, but then she didn't, which was also in character, given that she was so fed up and tired emotionally.

Also, my baby boi shiva voicing his insecurities and Raavi's breakdown on hearing the reason for all that happened was just *chef's kiss*

Also, you gave me my ShiVi kissy *mwaah* Purana Shiva jab Raavi ko waapas milega, tab he'll shred Suman to pieces? Ye milega pleaseeeee?

Can't wait for Suman to get shredded, I will get so much joy if both Raavi and Shiva shred her apart oh god!!

KYA WOH HAAN, KYA WOH WOH”

Shiva took a step back, shocked at the way she burst, to her credit though, it was high time. Her eyes darkened, indicating her anger, fury burnt in her eyes like an inferno

This line gave me goosebumps ok!!! 😭😭😭

I LOVEDDDD IT INNYYYY!!!💗💗

There confrontation was so emotional and beautiful..🥺

And now I am certain that your are a master at wrting emotional stuff because this was super touchy ❤️‍🩹😭

But the kiss- hayeee so cuteee

And in the ending when Shiva finally takes stand! (Show me nahi mila but yaha dekhkar- kaleje me thank dak pad gayi 😌😌) 💃🏻💃🏻

Can’t wait fir the next chapter and to see ‘Suman gonna get torn tomorrow!’ 😂😂😂
update soon loveeee!!

The potential their story has that you’ve explored here.. it just makes me sad that you aren’t the one writing the show. I mean, really.. there are sooooooo many ways to show them progressing beautifully. But no, I’ve told myself I’m not going to dwell on the could haves and should haves and I’ll take the episodes as them come.

But your writing! I can never ever get enough of it and I now really really want the next chapter! Would you believe me if I told you, that despite the absolute supernova level hotness of the sneaky peeky, I am actually looking forward to Suman ki dhulaayi? I am trying so hard not to hate you, woman! Kuch tho wajah de do! There is still a part of me that believes all this is Suman’s plan to get Shiva and Raavi back together and Disha is in on it. But still, the lady has been going way overboard with her constant taunts and celebrations and most annoyingly, that Dishu jaap of hers.

Update whenever you feel up to it, baby girl. I’ll be camped out here in the mean time.

I love you!

Inns!!!! One exams done, two more to go! But, today is a catch up on stories day and I'm here with my comment.

The second part, I can see now what you meant by messing around a bit with Raavi's character. This Raavi is much more sorted in that she knows what she wants (her purana wala Shiva), and that her anger doesn't blind her. It's more controlled in the sense that she's able to put it off for later.... Although it comes from the same empty place that her sense of helplessness leaves her in.

She walked in silently, he must have wanted to talk to her. She let him lead her in, deciding to get angry at him once they were inside.

Also, I loved the last confrontation between Suman and Shiva. The way he said that he wouldn't marry Disha either way? I wanted this soooo much on the show, so thank you for writing it. And you see Suman thinking as the head of the family, as sethani and a matriarch but not as a mother. It's a painful truth, both in this story here and on the show. She isn't worried about Shiva, she's worried about HER son.

Loved that Shiva walked of with Raavi's hand in his mid conversation!!!! That was the high point of this update for me, actually.

Love,

Sathya❤️

that's what who shiva is....raavi mane chahe nahi....he loves her and that's the bottom line.....serial mein to bichare ka character assassination kar diya....🥺

what u did is outstanding....they sorted everything and no one cares what that old witch feels or thinks.....🤬😡

cabin ka kuch aage use karo fir....☺️

eaavi deserves all the love

Beautiful Inny!

Sorry, I thought I already commented. I can't tell you how much I loved reading it, and now I have read it multiple times.

Loved Shiva running after Raavi, worrying for her, taking her somewhere private, Raavi trusting hi, and finally COMMUNICATING. That was 💕

My initial reaction at divorce cancel announcement and this, "Shiva cut her off with his palm raised and walked off to their room, clutching Raavi’s hand, much to the pleasure of the family and disdain of the matriarch.". I'm like that's right biatch. Take that!!

But all other things aside, Inny, Shiva had a private cabin?! On that's secluded from the world? Lol they need to have their romantic escapades there more often. Plus, they can let Kaandyas be, and move their if need be❤️

Now post part 3 asap!!

The way my chinni writes, is ufffffffff!!!!

The wonders of communication! I absolutely love this!

Cant wait for more and pestering you again asking for my content..

Read two chapters at one go.. this was nice! I hope we get a continuation soon ❤️