Don't know how this happened - A ShiVi story Part 2 on pg 4 31/07 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Omg this deserves to be a full blown FF like please how can you stop there 🥺

Thank you so much, love! You can now rejoice as this has indeed became a FF. Will update today!👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

🤣 he is still processing and ladki apna kaam karke nikal ki🤣

isko public demand pe thoda aur aage badhao pls.....1 more update pls

🤣🤣🤣

Public ki aur app ki kehne par yeh aur aage badhega! will update today!👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Hey guys, Pooh here! Some of you lovelies wanted this to be continued so let's see how this goes.😃


Shiva is kinda edgy.


Shiva has been restless ever since that Mami-ki-behen-ki-beti kissed him. Why did she kiss him? Didn't she love Dev? But then, what does she mean when only a junglee bhaloo can handle a chipkali? Did she meant that only he can handle her? Does she even want him to handle her? Heck, Did he want to handle her? That Chipkali is so irritating. It has been 3 days since that incident but that girl is playing all cool, unlike him.

Everyone has noticed Shiva's unusual behaviour. He was always restless, especially when Raavi comes. He would glare, but then stutter, fluster or look away embarrassed. That's not the Shiva they knew. Dhara had asked if he had any problems but he would just shrug it off. She knew that he didn't want to worry her. But could she let go of her child like that?

"Shiva, tu theek hain, na?" Gaumbi asked as Dhara wanted him to pressure him as he was the eldest brother. Gautham didn't think much but Dhara was worried.

"Haan Gaumbi! I'm fine!"

"You don't look so good for the past days, bhai." Dev pipped in.

"Kisi ladki ne kaata kya?" Krish asked in a joking manner but Shiva's reaction stunned everyone.

Shiva was having his morning tea and just as Krish asked that he choked on his tea and was in a coughing fit. That did it. Something was happening. And knowing this reaction, it's certainly a hot topic.

"Shiva! Tu theek hain?" Dhara was eavesdropping on them but then came towards him, lightly hitting his head.

"M-main t-h-theek hoon Bhabhi!" He smiled at Dhara but then turned towards Krish in a menancing stare.

"Krish, come here for a minute!" Shiva said cracking his knuckles.

"O-oh no! I'm good here!" He said leaning behind Gautham. Shiva glared at him but sighed.

"Shiva... If you're not well, you don't need to come to the store right now." Gaumbi said as he and Dev left for the store. He was about to object but one look from Gaumbi shut him up. Dhara went to do her chores but not before giving a look to Krish. Krish understood it. Dig out everything you can find. And he's going to do exactly that.

"Shiva, What's wrong, bhai? You know you can tell me anything! I'm your chotu-sa-pyaara-sa bhai!" Krish egged him.

"Krish.."

"Yes?"

"Chup kar nahi toh ek doonga!" Shiva said bringing his fist.

Krish frowned. Shiva is a hard rock. It's not going to be easy for him to open up. So he has to be the first initiative. Now, this is a girl problem. It has to be, if it is making Shiva this restless. Now how to open him---

"Krish?"

Oh? "Haan"

"What do you do when you get punched by a girl?"

Say what? Shiva Pandya was punched by a girl! Oh My God! That girl has guts!

"Shiva, ek ladki ne tuje punch maara?" Krish looked shocked.

"H-haan! par..."

"Par?"

"Muh se! We got our mouths smashed!" Shiva looked embarrassed as hell.

Oh teri! Yeh kya ho gaya maera Bhogilal!?


So, That's it for now! Shiva has got his face smashed with Raavi. Yeah, That sounds a bit horrible!🤪 Anyway, this kinda became a story now. I don't know how many parts this would take, let's see how far this goes. Let me know in the comments on what you guys think and show some love. The first part got so many love and comments and I thank you!🤗❤️❤️❤️ I hope you guys have a good day! Toodles!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Awsome ❤❤❤😅😅😅😅😅


Plzzz continue

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

This is amazing. ❤️


Glad that you decided to continue this story.

"Ladki ne punch maara, par muh se."- 🤣 Bhagwaan, kya hoga Shiva ka. 🤣 Such a hilarious type of denial. He couldn't accept that he got kissed. 😆


Krish is going to make khichdi out of this information. 😆 I can't imagine what would be the bawaal when he finds that Raavi is the one who punched his brother. 🤣

Waise khaayal toh Shiva ho gaya hai. 😳


This is getting interesting.


Waiting for the next part.


Do update soon. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

I dont know whether to give you a hug for such a cute update ... or be mad at you cuz it's so chotu and mann bhara nahin .. Like I want moaaaarrr pweez🥺


Got punched in the face by a girl.. 's lips .. sounds about right for a ShiVi kiss🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Hahaha embarrassed Shiva is adorable 😂

Loved it, looking forward to the next chaper ❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Punch maara mooh se!! LMAO!! 🤣🤣

OMGGG!! Update the next part soon!! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Glad you extended this 😆 Love the confused Shiva.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Shiva got punched in the face by a girl's lips.. hilarious! Lovely, cute update! ❤️

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