ShiVi : Rewriting Our Story [Ch 3 - Pg 5 - Updated 26th July 2021] - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

What a beautiful and emotional chapter ❤️

Can’t wait for the next one

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

This was painfully beautiful! Can't wait to read the next part! Please update soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Loved this chapter. ❤️

The momentum Raavi's exit inflicted upon Dhara, Shiva and Prafulla are same yet different. You've portrayed their pain brilliantly. 👏


I'm really satisfied with the fact that Dev got the punishment for his blunder. His one word could have saved many lives from the disaster.



I'm really excited for the next chapter....


Do update soon. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful update👏

Dhara, Shiva and maami are so broken by Raavi's departure😭

Glad that here Dev got the punishment for his mistake 😈


Thank you ☺️

They are 😔

He deserved it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ShinyShine

Great

Loved the way u described everyone's emotions

Thank you ☺️

Glad you did ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

beautiful update....new side of mami....

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

What a beautiful and emotional chapter ❤️

Can’t wait for the next one


Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was painfully beautiful! Can't wait to read the next part! Please update soon!

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loved this chapter. ❤️

The momentum Raavi's exit inflicted upon Dhara, Shiva and Prafulla are same yet different. You've portrayed their pain brilliantly. 👏


I'm really satisfied with the fact that Dev got the punishment for his blunder. His one word could have saved many lives from the disaster.



I'm really excited for the next chapter....


Do update soon. 🤗


Glad u did ❤️

True it could have!


Thank you ☺️

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