ShiVi SS- Woes Part 5 page 33 - Page 7

The first teaser had Shiva in pain and here we get Raavi's. This was such a beautiful yet heartbreaking transition ❤️.

Waiting for the update tomorrow .

wont be able to comment now.......

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I have read this chapter 3 times already. I couldn't get myself to comment at that point because it made me cry again.

I absolutely love how you write the dialogues, heart breaking 💔 but beautiful.

Shiva's love is so unconditional.he treasured each and every memory related to her❤

You described raavi's pain and guilt perfectly!

This story is gonna be so full of angst and heart break but I am gonna enjoy every bit of it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part🖤

awesome updatr next part soon plz

What an emotional roller coaster 😭😭

It was sad, meaningful but also so beautiful.

I love the childhood memories and the things he kept of Raavi in his box. I loved to read about what they thought about the other one and how they felt. The bond they shared since childhood, how that changed bit by bit after marriage, how they slowly not only accepted the marriage but also each other.

You wrote this story beautifully ❤️

This is going to be a lovely journey and my poor heart is waiting for the next emotional chapter ❤️




P.s. Will Raavi get a chance to tell him that she loves him? Or will he get amnesia and doesn’t remember her and she tries to make him remember with the memories they shared? Noo fishing at all 🤣

Omg omg omg loved loved loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️

You penned down every emotion beautifully 😍😍😍😍

So emotional 😢😢😢.....I couldn't stop crying 😢😢 😥😢😢 amazing ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️

I loved khushiyon ki peti part 😍😍😢😢

Hope Shiva is okay 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Again amazing 🙌🙌 waiting for next update 😊😘

Whaaat in the hell did you just put me throuuuughhh!!!

Daaamnit ! This is why I was delaying reading this story cause I knew it would be an ANGST FEST

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Uuugh I don’t even want to comment ! You’re so mean, you made me cryyy ! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I can feel the pain both Shiva and Raavi are going through and that makes you a writer that could capture the essence of your characters. Such a good job you’ve done !

Fair warning, I’m gonna be skipping some updates taki main saari chapters ek saath padh sakun. Just so I can ugly cry like all at once 😂😂😂

Again I hate you for the story plot but great job ♥️🥺♥️🥺♥️🥺

How beautifully you have expressed the pain she feels in every word❤️

This was super emotional!

have come to read after gathering all my courage......