ShiVi SS- Woes Part 5 page 33 - Page 8

emotional, heart breaking update! the dialogues were very beautiful ❤️

I wonder if Shiva has lost his memory or slipped into a coma 😲

Lakeeran vich likh di judaai

I could only remember this song as I read this chapter

You wrote it so well 👏

Wonder what will happen with them.

Woes - so apt 👏👏

It Wass soo painful 🥺🥺🥺, beautifully written 👏👏👏

I felt bad for raavi, she must be dying in guilt💔

But it was much needed, to make her realise shiva's unconditional love.that guy literally worshipped her since childhood . There is something about childhood love, so pure, so innocent and you have managed to potray it beautifully ❣️❣️.

I hope shiva is fine, they both are going through so much pain 😣.

I wish the show could capture atleast 1 percent of the intensity of their emotions that you have managed to 🥺🥺.

Waitingg for the next updatee ♥️♥️

He cannot die.. I will cry buckets if he does.. 😞😞

Oh so Shiva is really hurt.... Raavi has to pay price for all her previous mistakes now

This is really interesting

waiting for the next update

Hi Maahi,

Read this chapter yesterday..finally got time to comment now❤️

This chapter was another emotional and heart breaking chapter💔

Loved the scene where Raavi discovers Shiva's love for her through the box of things he has treasured❤️

Special mention to your dialogues....so much impact...i got goosebumps reading it

Waiting for the next chapter....do update soon🤗

Oh god 😭 So emotional! How do you manage write it like this ❤️

Raavi’s pain just bounced off the screen and settled inside me. But it was beautiful

Now what’ll happen to Shiva :(

let me start by saying u have written it beautifully....all the raw emotions affects u in ways..... u can't just save yourself....

while reading I was so so angry at raavi....to hell with what she felt later. she heard his confession to dhara and she deduced that he lusted on her, he broke her marriage and he even scared dev to marry rishita.....👏 kya story likhi hai raavi👏.....couldn't she use brain that shiva can threaten dev but how can he make rishita fall in love with dev？ 😡 this is just one emotion i felt while reading a paragraph....

m so glad that dhara gave her the key ....before that also her grief and anguish knew no bounds and I knew she would be at a place from where there is no return....her pleads of bringing him either to God, dhara or to shiva himself was gut wrenching.....I could visualize everything and cried coz I can't bring or save him.....

she got to meet herself again....this time thru Shiva's eyes....what she meant to him and what he did for her and how securely he has kept all her things....everything had its own story attached.....we got to know what was her thinking during that particular incident...

we can just feel sorry for these 2 people.....so much in love and wasted so many years.....I get it she insulted him to get back to him for leaving her but was that the only way？

dialogues are so powerful.....gautam is scared of losing his pillar of strength and understanding....its his baby we are talking about here....

I do not want him to lose his memory, be in coma....just my pov but I would always go with what writer has decided.....

I can't decide what I want to happen....even in my heart.....

Wow how emotional, poor Raavi, she is really sorry for everything she said.

I hope Shiva is fine and Raavi gets the chance to win him back❤️

Mahiii… you left it at a cliffhanger 😭

But an awesome update nonetheless- Raavi ka bulb finally jala… I loved how she got to realize the depth of Shiva’s feeling from his Kushiyon ki Peti ❤️

Looking forward to the twist you are going to throw at us 🤪