Os- buried feelings part 2 updated on page 2

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Hey guys...after watching pandya store and reading some amazing fanfics I wanted to try my hand at writing something.plzz let me know how how is it. Both appreciation and criticism are welcomed😊.


BURIED FEELINGS


It has been 2 months since the wedding. There is no haveli track.they are still in pandya niwas. Shiva and raavi still fought like kids. There were moments when raavi could feel her heart beating fast when she saw shiva shirtless after a bath with water dripping from his hair,she couldn't help but stare at him.when she saw his biceps flex when he was lifting the heavy sacks in the store,she again became lost.what are these new feelings?she never felt this for dev.she had spent her whole childhood believing that she was in love with this guy but she never dreamt of him shirtless. All she dreamt of was being a part of pandya parivaar, and some old 80s song to which she and Dev were dancing to. But even those dreams included shiva, even though as a villian.



She wanted to clear her mind. So she went to Rishita to have a chat.their relationship had significantly improved. After being assured that raavi has no feelings for Dev in any form,she was secure and had tried to be friendly.raavi being the innocent and sweet bean she is happily obliged. She went to her room and saw all her clothes on the bed.

" Yeh kya hai Rishita "? Raavi asked

"Acha hua tum aa gayi.dekho na mujhe Samajh nahi aa raha ki aaj Shyam ko Mai hamare dinner date par kya pehnu " Rishita replied

Raavi's eye caught a beautiful black dress. It had a halter neck and was upto knee length.rishita noticed her looking at the dress.

" Raavi..tum yeh dress try kyun nahi karti.maine tumhe Kabhi western dress Mai nahi dekha.yeh tumpe baht suit karegi " Rishita said handing over the dress to her.

Raavi had never wore a one piece in her life. She had only seen heroines on TV wearing them.and maami would have never allowed her to wear one anyways.


Just then dhara called Rishita.

" Ayi dhara bhabi. Acha suno..tum yeh dress le jao aur pehenke mujhe zaroor dikhana " Rishita said and went away.


Raavi came to her room.she changed and stood in front of the room. The dress fitted her perfectly enhancing her curves.the halter neck highlighted her collar bones . The dress ended just above her knees. Raavi felt different. She felt sexy. But she couldn't go out like this.she felt too conscious.

Just then shiva entered the room shouting

" AE maamikibehenki...."

Raavi was startled at the sudden intrusion and took one step back and tripped , she closed her eyes waiting for the fall, but before she could touch the ground two strong hands held her.she opened her eyes to see shiva deeply staring at her.her hands were on his shirt to which she grabbed onto. They both got back to their senses and shiva let her go. He turned away from her.raavi was fidgeting with her dress as she was feeling very self conscious.


"Tu apna yeh fancy dress competition room band Karke nahi kar sakti.koi bhi as Sakta tha" shiva said angrily


" Hann to.. Maine kapde pehne to hai.koi aa jata to kya hota.waise bhi rishita to aise kapde pehenke ghumti hai " raavi replied


" Rishita ki baat alag hai" shiva said. What he meant was Rishita wasn't uncomfortable In such clothes so it's ohk. But raavi took in the wrong way.


" To Tu kehna kya Chahta hai. Mai aise kapde carry nahi kar Sakti. " ? Raavi said.


Shiva didn't mean it that way , but how can he let go of a chance to fight with her.

" Ghar ke bahar do kadam nahi chal Sakti Tu in kapdo Mai" shiva said.all this while turned the other way.

" Galat.mai aaj Shyam Inn kapdo Mai hi jaungi khaana khane .phir dekhna Tu " raavi replied confidently.


Shiva sighed and tuned to look into her eyes.

" Dekh lenge " shiva said and headed out.he forgot for what work he had come.

Raavi pov -

Raavi , tune us bhootnath ke samne badi badi baatein to keh di par tu kaise bahar jayegi kaise. Air dhara Di aur Gombi ke samne kaise jayegi.


It was evening and dhara Di had arranged a double date for the Newlyweds in the best hotel of Somnath. Shiva called her and said she was waiting for her outside. Raavi glanced at the hall and saw that it was empty. She took this opportunity to run outside.there he saw shiva on his bike . He was wearing a red vest paired with a black shirt. Shiva saw her from her top to bottom. She was looking... sexy. But her eyes were downcast and she seemed nervous as 2-3 people stared at her. Her hands were crossed and she sometimes pulled the dress downwards.he can't make her this uncomfortable for a challenge.

" Sun. Tu jeet gayi. Mai haar Gaya. AA gayi do kadam Ghar ke bahar iss dress Mai." Shiva

Said

Raavi was delighted.she beamed and replied

" Tu haar maan Gaya. To to mujhse hamesha haarta hai, par aaj tak Kabhi maana nahi tha"

" Han Han.. thk hai. Ab itna mat ud. jaake kuch aur pehen le. Phir nikalte hai." Shiva said


Raavi was relieved. She went inside and changed into a black Kurti ( imagine the bonfire dress ).


She came out and sat on the bike. Conscious to not put her hands on shiva .she was scared he would shove it away. This was their second bike ride.

Shiva saw her through the mirror. She looked so innocent. He wondered how could she be related to that evil maami.


Shiva started the bike. There were a few bumps on the road and raavi held onto shivas shoulder for support but quickly removed them again.he could sense her hesitation.

" Haath rakhke baith ja. Kahi gir gayi to dhara bhabi mujhe dande maregi " shiva said with a straight face.

Raavi put her hand on his shoulder. A soft smile adored her face. Shiva didn't miss it. He smiled as well.

Suddenly the bike stopped.

He tried to start it but couldn't.

" Tujhe Meri bike se kya dushmani hai?. Tu jab bhi baithti hai yeh band pad jata hai. Panauti " shiva said

Raavi pouted and got off the bike.

" Tu itna roughly chalata hai. Bike to kharap hogi hi. Mujhpe kyu chilla raha hai."

Shiva got down to see whats wrong.

Meanwhile it started raining.

" Bas ISI ki Kami thi "

Shiva looked around and couldn't find raavi anywhere. Then at a distance she saw her twirling in the rain. She looked happy, after a long time he had seen her smiling. Her dress was etched on her body like a second skin. She looked beautiful. Shiva unknowingly kept walking towards her. Raavi saw him and looked down. They were on a deserted road. Shiva held her by the waist and pulled her closer. Raavi was shocked initially but later became comfortable in his arms. He noticed her quivering lips and downcast eyes. He came closer to her lips and looked into her eyes. Raavi couldn't read his eyes or rather couldn't believe what she saw in them.was it desire ?

She closed her eyes surrendering to the moment.shiva grazed his lips softly over her lips and kissed gently. It was a soft kiss. Suddenly a horn jerked them back to reality. Shiva backed off and ran his hand through his hair. What the hell was he doing?

He looked at raavi.she had her hands covering her and her eyes on the ground. A soft blush adored her cheeks. He noticed some men on the bike staring at her. His possessive side took over .he removed his shirt and placed it over her .

" Ghar chalte hai. Tujhe thand lag jayegi " shiva said

Raavi quitely sat on the bike. A thousand emotions running through her. Is he also attracted to her like she is getting affected by him?

They reached home and silently ate and slept. Shiva said to dhara bhabi that their bike broke down and it was raining.she didnt ask much. Shiva was avoiding eye contact and slept facing the other way. Raavi sighed and slept but she knew sleep was far from her eyes.

Shiva remembered their kiss and shuddered. How can he lose control like that? He felt ashamed. Their realtionship was already so complicated.he Just complicated it further .what was he thinking?

Raavi pov-

We have to talk. This is getting out of hands. They can't keep having such moments and not talk about it and act as if nothing happened.there is a spark of attraction between them and now she knew it's not one sided.

, And she will address it tomorrow.


Ohk..that's it guys. My first ever one shot.Do let me know what you think about it. And should o continue or not . Thank you 😁

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This is cute. You should definitely continue. ā¤ļø

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Raavi is so sweet and innocent in this and her bond with Rishita is so nice ā¤ļø Loved itšŸ¤—

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This really was really sweet . I really wanted something like this to happen in the show but stupid covid . Please continue this . I really wanted this sweet and somber moments between shiva and raavi

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Really great start, looking forward to more ā¤ā¤.

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This was amazing...

Pleasee do continue..

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It was awesome.please continue. It would be fun to read how ravi will want to talk but Shiva being ashamed of himself will want to avoid it.

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This was so amazing!! Please write more

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Beautiful updatešŸ‘

Loved Shivi's momentā¤ļø

Raavi is so sweet and innocent here😊

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Loved it. thank you

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