Shivi FF The Challenge Part 4, pg 9 (finished) - Page 8

Hayeeee hayeee, meri bacchiii ko nazar na lage 🥺🥺

I'm so effin soft for this two I can't even 🥺♥️🥺♥️

How are they so lovable ?!

Jab that surprised question was given, I was just like Raavi thinking what is this nonsense 😂 But then when Dev and Rishita each gave their answer, I saw just how superficial their love still is. They are in love, but that love still needs time to deepen and bloom. They are NOWHERE NEAR AS CLOSE AS Shiva and Raavi's love 😂😂😂😂

I love how Rishita finally fell from that high horse she put herself on. A girl who just came into the house for a week is saying that she knows what kind of relationship this family has with each other, what bakwas. She only saw what's on the surface, not what is skin deep.

I love love how Raavi's favourite thing about Shiva was something that he was proud of himself of ! Shiva finally realised, that this girl that he though was an airhead, and was someone he thought only fought with him, actually understands the real him. The him that only his family gets to see. It's such a sweet discovery that he got emotional for a second.

As for Raavi ! She got disappointed for a second that there was nothing about her that he liked, but then once he started Shiva can't seem to stop himself from listing is 🥺♥️🥺♥️
The family adding in their 2 cents and one by one what they did for each other being revealed ! Sahi kaha Gaumbhi ne, even when Raavi wasn't around, Shiva was still thinking about her. And Raavi bhi kich kam nahi hai. Agar sachme Dev se pyaar kiya tha, toh Shiva keliye kyu projects banwati ? Aur Mamii ! Got so shocked about how her bholi bhali bacchi, her pyari Raavi, ACTUALLY STOLE FROM HER !! That was gold !! 😂😂

And as closing, it wouldn't be complete with Krish's onliner 😂😂 Raavi Shiva Pandya ☺️

Not bad Krish 😂

I love how it's a new start for them ! And it such a cute story that you've done ! Such a great great job ! This was AMAZONG ♥️😍♥️😍

I am glad that our comments motivated you to write all this in one day 😂😂 please use the motivation to finish your college essays also 😋

How cute are Raavi and Shiva?!??!! They have spent basically all their life circling around each other, observing each other and protecting each other ❤️ They know each other so well and their comfort with each other is so soothing to watch.

Absolutely loved all those little anecdotes and what they like about each other. I am almost emotional 😂

Mami cannot get over Raavi stealing from her 🤣bechari she is in shock 😆

Kinda feel bad for Rishita but it’s a much needed reality check for her!
Absolutely in love with story ❤️ Thanks for finishing it today 😆

Please do write more 👏

I'm so glad you wrote this story ,pata nahi maine kitni baar IF refresh kiya hoping that the full story would have been written.It was totally worth all waiting. Raavi boasted about knowing everything about shiva but it was more like he knew her inside out. It was so cute ❤️especially when the family members revealed their cute little secrets. It seems like these two never hated each other but secretly cared for each other omg all these cuteness has my heart. Shiva is so sweet ❤️ never knew this guy was this amazing aur Raavi bhi kitna kuch kiya Shiva ke liye ,gift laaya, project ki awww.

Just loved how adorable these two are and like Gaumbi predicted kuch toh achha hua iss game se lekar .

Very cute

Loved it so much ❤️❤️❤️

Very beautifully written. I read all the parts in one go with a smile on my face. I was eager to read to see what you had written and how you developed the whole story. I must tell that your imagination and writing prowess is too good. As I was reading especially the Quiz part, I was rooting for them to get all the answers right. I wish the Pandya store writers included something like this in the actual show. Keep writing, will always look forward to reading your creations.

Great story, shivi really are meant for eachother

Waiting to read your next story

Haye

I so loved the idea. Kitna pyara idea tha.

I genuinely feel yeh scene hona chahiye serial mein.

Maami ke 3000rs😆

Acha comic element tha yeh,

I loved this FF

If possible write something about there date.

Also I agree. School mein 50 words ke notice ke liye words nahi hote the Or ab kitna likh lete hai☺️

Chalo tum jaldi kuch likhna❤️

Read all the parts together!

Wow! This was a great read! ❤️
also, have to mention you wrote it all in a day 😆

love how you have mentioned Shiva and Raavi’s backstory, their childhood and habits in this. Makes it so much more special. Waiting for more from you ❤️

Obviously our ShiVi had to win

Ani❤️

This was seriously one of the best ShiVi story....

It was amazingly good...

Thank you for completing the story in 1 day..

Cant wait to read more of your stories.

Omgggg!!! This is the most beautiful story on Shivi❤️

Amazing write up👏