Zard Zamano Ka Sawera (ARY) Shiroz Subzwari, Komal Aziz - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I really like the possibility of the story here and am disappointed every week. The editing or something is always missing. It's like there is a pre-requisite that you have read teh book and know what is going on so they have written the script really poorly. then then half the time editing sucks.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: awida


I think they added this Aden track to drag the drama, coz after knowing the truth their should be no misunderdtandings left. 😊


Guys, I feel so bad for those of you watching the drama without having read the book. Trust me, the novel is 10 times better in terms of plot, characterization and story build-up,

Momo is one of Rabaab's cousins in the novel, but not the one involved in drugs . There were 2 cousins (don't remember the names, but they weren't sisters, each was a daughter of a different uncle. These girls went to college with Rabaab and are involved with drugs , and their fathers try to shoot them at the end , but they live.

There is no Aden in the novel , this is a stupid plot device , I have no idea what purpose she's serving besides getting viewers frustrated. Meer is about 10 years or so older than Rabaab, and he used to like a girl when he was younger , but they were not involved, and their friendship wasn't close either. He just mentions her name to get a reaction out of Rabaab later in the story.

The opening and the first part t of the story revolves around how the two sisters and their mother are mistreated by their aunts and uncles. An important sub-plot is the drug/po*n-distribution gang that the cousins are involved with, which gets Rabaab in to trouble.Then she gets married to Meer (as shown in the novel) , and HE is the one who uncovers the whole scam . Because HE is the police officer. Sorry for the caps, but it got me so mad , that they butchered such a well-written witty character and made him in to this weird man-child who can't even carry out a proper investigation, and needs to be told by his journalist friend about what's happening.

In the novel, Meer is Subuktageen, and Ali is Ehtesham . It's Subuktageen who goes to Rabaab and Sajjal's aunts with the evidence against their daughters , so that they allow Sajjal to get married to his friend.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
I feel sad as a viewer of this show because you can see the potential of the story but in every way the script and editing sucks!

I wish I could read the book...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SS88


Guys, I feel so bad for those of you watching the drama without having read the book. Trust me, the novel is 10 times better in terms of plot, characterization and story build-up,

Momo is one of Rabaab's cousins in the novel, but not the one involved in drugs . There were 2 cousins (don't remember the names, but they weren't sisters, each was a daughter of a different uncle. These girls went to college with Rabaab and are involved with drugs , and their fathers try to shoot them at the end , but they live.

There is no Aden in the novel , this is a stupid plot device , I have no idea what purpose she's serving besides getting viewers frustrated. Meer is about 10 years or so older than Rabaab, and he used to like a girl when he was younger , but they were not involved, and their friendship wasn't close either. He just mentions her name to get a reaction out of Rabaab later in the story.

The opening and the first part t of the story revolves around how the two sisters and their mother are mistreated by their aunts and uncles. An important sub-plot is the drug/po*n-distribution gang that the cousins are involved with, which gets Rabaab in to trouble.Then she gets married to Meer (as shown in the novel) , and HE is the one who uncovers the whole scam . Because HE is the police officer. Sorry for the caps, but it got me so mad , that they butchered such a well-written witty character and made him in to this weird man-child who can't even carry out a proper investigation, and needs to be told by his journalist friend about what's happening.

In the novel, Meer is Subuktageen, and Ali is Ehtesham . It's Subuktageen who goes to Rabaab and Sajjal's aunts with the evidence against their daughters , so that they allow Sajjal to get married to his friend.


The story sounds very impressive but the current serial is me making nuts...😭
I wish I could read the novel and forget about the serial but I don't know Urdu...
I'm sticking to serial thinking there will be something good during the episode and as you say, get disappointed without fail...😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Need to wrap it up ... going in circles now and unnecessary pulling it feels
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Mubarak ho, khatam ho gaya.
I feel terribly let down. I read the novel sometime in Nov/Dec before the serial started airing, and I loved it. If they had remained true to script, and had a better cast and crew this would be a superhit. Now we're left with this mediocre piece which I can't even begin to compare to the novel. Nabeela Abrar Raja must have been pulling her hair out with every episode. Absolutely terrible.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Last epi was not up to mark. It was basically a filler and pretty much pointless. Overall i liked the drama and would recommend!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Simz786

Last epi was not up to mark. It was basically a filler and pretty much pointless. Overall i liked the drama and would recommend!


I am happy you liked it. but I won't recommend it. even without reading the novel, I can see many faults in direction, editting, performances and story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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True it had editing issues and was miscasted but i liked the overall plot i guess!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Another choppy episode and another round of poor editting. Gosh...
I couldn't understand the whole episode except that it was the ending. Even the scene where they caught Adnan, it could have been a fantastic scene but...goodness 😕


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