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SS88

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

@bookworm

What''s your name ?That is , if you don't mind.

Rula diya yaar. I know I'm going to cry buckets on Wednesday too, but aapne to pehle hi rula diya.

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Push-pull

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This is so overwhelming and heart touching.. Loving the way Asfi is taking it slowly with her and letting her be.. Giving her thr time she needs.. Finally when she's gonna open up crying she's not gonna regret it.. She'll embrace life all over again.. For all thT she deserves..

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SanFrangirl

@SanFrangirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

@bookworm123, please dont stop. I am like literally hanging on to your words.

Beautifully written and somehow I think this is how the scene is going to pan out on this Wednesday.

Wow you pack so much talent.

Please , please, phir kya hua???

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bookworm123

@bookworm123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Ladies, thank you so much for your lovely words of encouragement and appreciation. This couple and the way they have been portrayed is so beautiful. No wonder so many of us are are on the forum making posts and trying to be writers!!

Edited by bookworm123 - 7 years ago

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Jiyagulabi_26

@Jiyagulabi_26

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

OMG

So intense❤️

Spec when he says look into my eyes n then tell me u don't want to marry.

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masooma

@masooma98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Another beautiful update! You convey their emotions so beautifully it feels real. Please do write more, love it!

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--HiNa--

@--HiNa--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .Anya.
Wow good one yar continue karo zubiya k confession tak le k jao

sirf confession tak heiiinn?

anya yeh kya hogya tumhe?

ludo game ki insult hai to sare amm😲🤣

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Wow👏Absolutely beautiful, loved it so much, already read two times, you have conveyed their emotions so well, had tears in my eyes, please do continue, I d love to read more, next part of the conversation, loved the way you kept the characters intact, Asfand is such an amazing guy, hopefully we get something like this in the drama too,

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--HiNa--

@--HiNa--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: farahs_6

ThankGod Anya..tum confession tak keh kar ruk gayi,,..uske aagay tak nahi gayi 🤣🤣

😆😆 doctor asfi khawab me akar dand gaye hai anya ko

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--HiNa--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Tell me you don't want to marry me", he said.

"I do not want to get married", she responded.

"I did not ask you whether you wanted to get married. Look me in the eye and tell me you do not want to marry me", he insisted.

"This conversation is making me uncomfortable", she said, hoping he would relent. "I am sorry but I need your answer", he said, not sounding sorry at all.

When she did not respond, he removed his glasses and looked at her intently. She tried to look away but could not.

"Zubia, I am sure you know how I feel about you. I don't know when exactly things changed between us but for quite some time now, I have been thinking about you all the time. I..I don't know if I admire you more or adore you more.."

this is soo beautifull <3 <3 this is what asfi would sdo remove his glasses watch her intently <3

loved it please keep it coming ,