FF: The Fire in our Hearts; Khisher. (Chp 6; Pg 10)

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Aw, lovely chapter. So, Khirad has a past of some sort, I suppose. And I really wasn't expecting a Sara 😆 But, it works. I think we're in for some surprises. The way you write, is very calming. I read it slowly and try to take in every word. You just do that. Excellent work.

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

o-o! sara hun? nice... loved it! continue asap!

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Resss :P
Can't wait to read :D
Will read as soon as I can :P

*edited*
I jus read the FF!! Ohhh MYyy it's not fair yaar you are so good at this !!I was laughing like a idiot through out reading it !! Ahhh the flow was perfect <3 Hayeee asherrr????pls find me someone like him !!And she cares abt khirad !! And Sara's entry was perfect !! And khirad's has a past !!! Ahh I so can't wait to read further !!Ahh it was lovely !! Too good Naqi <3Awww !!! You deserve all thr applause !!:)

Edited by -ZumSrK- - 11 years ago

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summerchild

@summerchild

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Aw, lovely chapter. So, Khirad has a past of some sort, I suppose. And I really wasn't expecting a Sara 😆 But, it works. I think we're in for some surprises. The way you write, is very calming. I read it slowly and try to take in every word. You just do that. Excellent work.

Aw, thank you so much for reading!

And haha, how can there be an AK story without Sara? xD

@SaneWhispers: Thank you! And I will try to update soon! :)

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BlackStar

@BlackStar.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

so. like I've said before. any thoughts about dramatizing this?
because it's brilliant and it's the kind of writing i've always wanted to see in a Pakistani drama.
coming to the FF, Naqi you just keep on getting better and better.
no honestly I love your FF.
Asher remains my favourite character, Khirad is close by.
I can't wait to see how everything else unfolds and I'd love to see a jealous Khirad.
also. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long. I'd like to know who the guy was.

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Natz

@natz

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

uff..what do I say that hasn't been said before? This just keeps getting better & better!

Hope it won't be like cannon though, now with Sarah & co in the story.. 😳

Hope you update soon! 🤗

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

fab update..!!

LOVED it..

Khirad was feeling kinda insecure due to Sara's presence..and yeah loved the last part where Asher and khirad spend time together..!!

thanks for updating..:)!

do PM me when u update.

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Dabangg-

@Dabangg-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

OMG ... I am Loving it I am Loving it I am loving it man <333

Every t hing is just prefect ... Asher Khirad Zareen Saran <33 AK are beautiful their Romace OMG how sweeet the plan scene the airport One's the drama about hasband and wife OMG it was funny and Lovelt too ... WTH I was think about 7 chapters but there are Only Five man ... I want more abhi ... plxxx

@Naqi ... you're Awesome with your stuff ... :DDpLX Add some more romance me and sand would Love to read it more ...😉

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Anaya Ali

@khisher

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

the story z going on tooo good,,,plzzz write more,if u r busy then just end it up in 2 chapter but plzzz write more,,,can't w8 to read more plzzz update soon plzzz😛