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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys!!

Wrote a poem about Khirad's feelings!!😉

Toh arz kiya hai...😆

Saalon baad hui humari mulaqat

Lekin ab baray mushkil hogaye the halaat

Unkay samne meri nazar jhuki si rehthi thi

Na jaane unhay dekh kar dhadkan kyun tez hoti thi

Woh dastak dengay humaray dil pe yun socha na tha

Kabhi pehle kisi ko us nazar se dekha na tha

Unhay dekha mainey kisi aur ke saath

Toh nahi kar payi main theek se unsay baath.

Jab pocha unhone mera haal

Toh hogaye unhay dekh kar mere gal laal.😳😆


Ab unkay ghar mein roz hoga humara samna

Toh sochthi hoon kasiay chupaongi main apne dil ki chupi hui kamna.😍

Hehe this was totally random and I wrote it on request of meepha!! Tell me what u guys thought?! I know some of the rhyming is weird!! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i think it was fantabulous


*standing ovation*


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Posted: 14 years ago
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ab pocha unhone mera haal

Toh hogaye unhay dekh kar mere gal laal.😳"



ahahaagaha

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh wow! That was greattt!!! Please keep writing more!😃
Posted: 14 years ago
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Wah, wah! Great poem!
The rhyming was absolutely fine. I wrote poems myself and know how hard it can be to get it correct.

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