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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey frnds
im new to this forum
im writting a ss on rohil this is my 1st attempt
hope u like it
story is based on Roshni,Gauti n Nikhil
concept is not same as show
so here is the story begins
NEW MORNING
we saw a girl snoozing her alram clock third time n then with a jerk she get up n this is our own roshni
Ro-opps ssj ke din bhi muze der tak sona tha!! how could u roshni?chalo jaldi uth varna job k first din hi late ho jaegi
and she get ready in formal dress n went to her location,she reached infront of a big building ,she look at it and take a deep breath n smiled n said-"finally my dream come true"
then she went inside n waith for her turn for interview
Recep-Roshni katariya u r turn n then roshni went inside
in room-
five people are sitting and 1 chair is empty
one is the owner n others are his assistants
one man say-roshni katariya plz sit n then he continued i m Rohit lada owner of this company
Ro-gud morning sir
Rohit-very gud morning ,i checked ur certificates n they r quite immpressive
Ro-thank u sir
Rohit-so why u want to join our company?
Ro-sir i hv heard lot of about u n this company iwant to learn frm
Rohit-jo bhi yaha interview k liye aaye unhone sab je yahi kaha so what is extraordinary in u?
Ro-sir i not only want to learn frm u bt also to reach this company to higher level more than now
Rohit-itna confidence?
Ro-sir usike vajah se to yahtak pahuchi hu n i hv trust in myself n in u that u will guiadence me whenever needed
Rohit-one last que kal se join karogi ya aajse?
Ro-huh i mean sir aaj se thank u sir thank u so much
Rohit-so ur job is fixed u hv to assits Gautam Lada ceo of our company
Ro-thank u sir smiling😊
Rohit-gautam thoda bahar gaya hai jaise hi vo aata hai i will introduce him with u tabtak tum apna cabin aur apna new office dekh lo
Ro-thank u sir n she leaves
outside the room-
Ro-gautam lada iska aur sir ka surname to same hi hai ,chod na tuze kya karna hai?
n she goes with peon to see her cabin
in middle she meet with a girl shivani
Shi-hi im shivani maine pichle hafte hi join kiya n ur also new na
Ro-hey im roshni n ya maine aaj hi join kiya
Shi-suna hai tumhe gautam sir ko assist karna hai very lucky
Ro-hmm thanks bt vaise ye gautam sir hai kaise i mean khadus type k ya..
Shi-nahi yar he is so nice n very frndly also
then peon comes n called shivani
Shi-oh no abhi blana tha gaya mera lunch break😕😕 k bye
Ro-bye ,oh wow lunch break ho bhi gaya chalo mai bhi kuch kha leti hu muze bhi bahot bhuk lagi hai n she left the office
office k pass hi Dominos hai n uske side mai ek choti si vadapav ka thela
at the door of dominos we saw a guy ,smart n cute
he is just leaving when he saw a girl coming towards him he stop looking at her n say-how beautiful n cute wow she is coming here wah wah but his bad luck she went to the vadapav stall
boy-oh vo to udhar chali gayi bechari garib hogi but she is so cute ,oh no!! how can i forget today kitna important kam tha tu to gaya beta
so aaj k liye itna hi
hws the part?
i know short tha sorry
n i m shreya
plz comment
n wait for next part

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start Shreya! Its really good and since its nothing related to her college and past lyf, i am excited to read more. Do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww very nice ss dear 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks nash n rathitheangel for comment it means a lot
btw waht's ur real name?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyatode1

thanks nash n rathitheangel for comment it means a lot

btw waht's ur real name?

Hey Am Nishaya and she is Sara.

Ps: Dont mind Sara just commented on your behalf.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Shreya, its very nice to see someone writing SS on ROHIL. Thanks for this first of all.
Lets move to the story. Its realy a nice start with different concept other than college & revenge game. I am sure the guy at the end is our hero Nick.
Anyway continue soon, I am excited. If possible plz pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nishaya can i call u nash?
n also hi to saran thank u to anjali n sree n i will pm u when i will update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc start shreya.
so is it like a totally different scene..?? i mean gauti n roshni know nothing abt each other kya ?? or do dey hv a college past ??
story seems iontersting.
wonder how will nikhil enter this scene
waiting to read further ..
so update soon..

-Aishwarya ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyatode1

hey nishaya can i call u nash?

n also hi to saran thank u to anjali n sree n i will pm u when i will update

thanks. I hv sent u buddy req already.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyatode1

hey nishaya can i call u nash?

n also hi to saran thank u to anjali n sree n i will pm u when i will update

of course you can! Its my real nick name so don't hesitate.

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