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Posted: 17 years ago
Usha, going a bit too fast or is it me reading too slow?? Lot to read during the weekend!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey guys thx u for the lovely comment. Anyways i am going to complete the novel within one or two chapters up.

Well, I decided to do another novel. Anyways, enjoy the next chapter:


Chapter 20


Both R and M were kissing ever so passionately on the bench. Until, S woke up. Her palms were sweating hard and she started shivering as sweat dropped from her head and into the bed sheet.

She slowly woke up and went towards M's apartment. Just to ear drop suddenly, her door was opened. She peeked through just to see M sleeping on the bed and R was sleeping on the floor. S was shocked to see that nothing like what had she saw happened in her dream. Then slowly walked off onto a calendar looking into a date.

5 years later

R, M and S have all graduated. R and M have all passed with first class honours whilst S had passed with an upper second class honour. All of them still keep in contact however they haven't changed and yet they kept a very good bond. Despite the fact, S always felt jealous M and R were extremely close together. They all work at the same hospital i.e. St George's hospital.

It was 14th February 2013. Alias Valentine's Day. All the hospital staff were deciding to have dinner at one colleague's house since, it was their first year wedding anniversary. Everyone was dressed up nicely in nice romantic dress. S decided to get dress well to wind R up whilst, M wanted to dress up nicely.

"Well…well…well… someone is dressed up nice today." Yelled M
S looked with fury, "M I have no intentions to impress someone."
"Oh really!" M laughed, "How many times have I heard this?"
S remained silent, "For the last 5 years you have tried to win him back. Trust me darling you won't get him. Once a cheater is always a cheater." M smiled
"Yeah! At least I realise what I have wrong." S looked at her closely
M smiled, "Darling…it's too late. How many times I tried to put you two together?"
"I don't know. I don't care." S smiled
M laughed, "I know inside you are jealous?"
"No I ain't jealous." S looked
M smiled, "You are." They walked arms linking to each other whilst S couldn't stop blabbing on about how university has been.

They arrived at the colleague's house. They knocked with a surprise it was R who opened the door.
"Dude! What's cooking?" M smiled
R replied, "I am here early."
"Well…well…well…you are here to impress someone." M held his shoulder making S jealous and walked in.

Both Suzy and Jack came and greeted. Jack implied, "You lucky man! You have two chicks pleasing you."
All three look into Jack whilst Suzy laughed, "We saw how you three have been behaviour for the last few years. Even at university gosh. M wont keep her hands off him whilst S will be jealous."
They all walked in and sat down on the dining table. M and R along with J and S were drinking lots of wine and champagne. S was sitting there looking at them angrily.

Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 Good one gal.... Ur story is cool.

Going to came up with the new one soon huh? Well, so netra can expect another romance story naa 😉 ?

All the best honey.... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: netra_rama

👏 👏 Good one gal.... Ur story is cool. no no it is getting hot

Going to came up with the new one soon huh? Well, so netra can expect another romance story naa 😉 ? usha kalakkuma nee😉

All the best honey.... 😳 same here

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Posted: 17 years ago
ahh too sweet

ur ending it so sad

but since u have promised another story its OK with me 😆
Edited by nallu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thx everyone for your lovely comments n im posting my final chapter. I thx u for your support.

chapter 21

Everyone was enjoying dinner minus S who was staring at M's lovely red dress while S was wearing a blue dress. J and S were looking very closely especially at S who was staring into R while M was stroking R's red shirt and white tie.

After dinner everyone sat down in a circle and started to discuss about relationships and men.
J asked, "What do you expect from your life companion?"
"I expect her to lie to me, help me and accept what I am doing." R explain
M laughed, "You naughty boy. I want the husband to accept that I will have an affair behind the person's back."
S smiled, "I didn't expect this coming from you two."
R moaned drinking more wine, "I experienced this from a past. I fell in love with her too much. She betrayed me at the end by sleeping with another guy."
S was furious, "Men also cheat. You men make a big fuss about women cheating but when you guys cheat. We have to accept it and get along in life."
J looked in shock, "Woah! Woah! This is heated bring it on."
R argued, "Actually. You woman throw men out and make them suffer. Then you people become paranoid and observe your former lovers move."
"Yeah you got it right." M laughed

The argument continued until, J came with an engagement ring. "Yo Romeo. Since you have two Juliet's fighting over you."
R looked in shock, "You want me to get engaged to one of them."
S scolded, "You have given R a difficult situation. I bet you he wants to marry both of them."
"Nah. One is enough." Jack laughed

Rajesh looked at both M and S and the engagement ring. He walked forward towards in between S and M who was standing there looking at R.
Jack yelled at him to choose the prettiest bird whilst, Suzy advised him to follow his heart. R stood there thinking at the past times he had shared with both M and S. He remembered the times M had been there to help him, looked after him during his accident, when his parents were happy to see M and wished inside that she was their daughter in law, etc… Whilst with S he remembered the lovely times plus the bad times he had with her especially the argument and her betrayal.

He made his decision and walked towards M. He bend down on his one knee and proposed to her, "Meera I want to ask you something?" R hesitantly asked

S looked at this while M asked, "What is it?"
"Will you marry me?" R asked
M with shock, "Oh my god! I cannot believe this. Yes I would love to marry you. For many years I slowly fell in love with you. I realised you are the one."
He placed the ring onto M's hand and held her hand and walked together. J and S were clapping and they were cheering for the new couple. While S tears flowed down. M looked at S and went to her said, "Hey why are you crying?"
"No da! I am crying in happiness. I realised that you are the perfect one for R. I haven't done anything for him. You did a lot. I realised how much your friendship and love is precious towards you."

M looked at S, "Listen, I haven't done anything. It's just my nature of helping everyone."
S came to R, "Sorry for what I have done towards you for the past few years. I have done all the negative things towards you."
"You know I cannot accept your apologies since, I loved you in the past so much. Still, I care for you. Then, I realised M is a worthy woman then you are." R explained
S then said, "Wish you guys a happy life. I shall descend from this place, town and settle into some where else." She walks off into the horizon with smiles whilst R tears came and M, J and S consoled him.

The End
Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 i was shaking when he was about to propose... 😭 😭 i cant believe u are ending it... but u have another one... so... nishi ok 😳 wow... that was brilliant usha chellam 👏 👏 👏 i guess he did end up with meera... but if sashi wasnt so stubborn.... oh well 😳 that was a wonderful ending 👏 cant wait to read more of ur work 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
u ended it....super work sweeto 👏 👏 👏
So I were right naa...R with M 😳
Sometimes in our life...the right one will always stand infront us but we wont see that before the right time comes...thats what happend with R n M 😉

Its remind me of Unnale Unnale da...S get jealous like Sadha did while Meera remind me of Tanisha 😃

cant wait to read the next one 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh my god,even i can't control my tears da usha.....simply superb.....keep it up.

i was bit confused in the middle...u've ended it very well...i really didn't expect this.

looking forward 4 u'r new story 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
i knew S is not going to get R

oh usha u have me crying here 😭 😭

but i am happy for M & R

very good story buddy 👏 👏 👏

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