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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey everyone thx for your comments. I apologised for the fact I was out yesterday so no time to post an update. Do excuse me.

Here is my next installment:


chapter 14

It was Christmas day. It was a day of joy and celebrations. All the Christmas lights were sparkling at everyone's house. The Christmas trees were visible at each person's house despite the full tree cannot be seen in detail. Meanwhile, S opened her eyes to see a paper lying besides her bed saying:

"S, wish you a Happy Xmas. Downstairs awaits something special for you. From R"

S was in shock and pleased to see her beloved man had loved her so much and even cared about her too much. So she quickly went down to the living room to see near a Christmas tree a lovely big presents lying around the tree. In a hurry she opened the box very quickly. Fast like lightening if it just stuck a tree with horror and force grabbed R present. This was wrapped in red and lilac. It was large and soft and quickly opened to see a lovely cute teddy bear with a heart 'You are the one'. She was extremely pleased and constantly hugged the bear and gave numerous kisses for the teddy bear.

Meanwhile, M (who lived opposite her apartment) just woken up in a confused state, she was feeling extremely down. Just like if she had experienced a horrific dream as she opened her eyes so slowly. Usually she was happy during Xmas as there was nice dinner, lovely carols, and beautiful decorations as it was the most joyful festive moment. A note was left on the table:

"Hey M, Happy Xmas. I'm waiting downstairs for you. Sheeze you were speaking something and moving so much. If you going through a relationship. Anyways, come out of your bedroom. I have left you new clothes for you to wear. From Priya (your best friend and sister)" M was with joy looked, at the clothes and immediately worn it and came outside of the room and yelled, "Hey Sis! I'm so happy. You are here."

"I know dee. It's been so many years." Priya laughed
"What so many years. It's only been 4 months now." M giggled
P smiled, "Yeah, but it seems so many years da."
"I know." M says

P started to see something fishy with M. She wasn't the same bubbly girl as she was in the past. Often checking out every men along with P. She lost weight and has become so quiet and seemed like she has no one to share her feelings with. Suddenly, P told her the good news, "I am going to be married on Valentines Day."
"Who with Kishore? You met at University. God! How did he manage to fall in love with you? He's such a nerd.", laughed M
P complained, "Well we both proposed at the end of the degree and have been dating ever since. Mom and Dad first hesitated because of differences in culture and tradition. After meeting Kishore they totally loved him. Its an advantage we can speak his mother tongue Hindi."
"So sweet da. When I am going to meet b-i-l?" demanded M
P smiled, "I tell you soon." And she walked outside M's flat where she had to go somewhere.
M was happy her sister came however, she cried her heart out.

R was sitting outside in a confused state. He looked at a mess especially in a drunken state. Suddenly, there was a phone call from S and he answered the phone.

"Hi darling." S smiled, "Happy Xmas."
"Thanks." R smiled
S being sympathetic, "Listen I'm very sorry about last night."
"Listen S. I want to make something straight with you." R said in a stern way


Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
Very nice story!!

I was just wondering, are you going to continue "A romance to remember!!! " ? I liked that story.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
I am not first to comment..but beat Nishi 😆

Why was M sad? dont tell me, she has fall for R or they have messed things up?

R drinking? 😲 hmm....why do I feel you are making this dramatic, but on next, nothing bad would have happend 😉

Nice chapt sweeto 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

haan kyunki im not that bad of a person naa 😉 😆 😆 lolzz thats my excuse !!

i think meera is sad cuz she doesnt have someone like R and to make it worse, her best friend and sis Pri is getting married ooooo more drama 😆 he's prolly gonna bash her then say he loves her and make-out 😆

Edited by *Nishi* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
gud one............usha..........but confusing........come back & do the next dear
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
why is M so down something fishy 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thx everyone for the lovely comments. Ambi acca is confused dont worry slowly everything will be realised.

Malligal, my other FF i will see if I can complete on it. But since, I lost my work i wasnt able to complete it.

Nishi nice comment and Meli you wait and see the next chapter.

Nallu, you wait and see for M's character.

Enjoy my next installment:


Chapter 15

"What?" S replied

R told her straight, "I don't want to ruin this happy day. Every time you don't trust me so much."

"Yeah I don't trust you. You know why?" S pointed out the matter to R

R explains, "She was being causal to me."

"It didn't seem casual to me." S yelled, "I don't think so."

"It was causal." R pleaded, "She was friendly with me."

S straightaway asked, "Last night what were you doing at M's house. You was so drunk."

"Well I accidentally went to her house but nothing happened. M was very careful about me." R pleaded his case

S sternly told him, "Listen, I had enough of this argument. So you give me a teddy bear just to make piece."

"No! I love you so sincerely." R explained

S laughs, "Forget it! You are a useless person to argue with." slams the phone down.

The skies were dull as snows were dropping heavily onto the floor. The trees were white as flour and thick as duvet cover. Fewer people were walking across the road and people were sitting inside in the nice warm log fire.

R looked extremely depressed and quickly notices to see M coming towards him. Her face was depressed and comes towards him, "R I need you to come inside."

"Why?" R questioned

M tells him, "We need to get a few things sorted."

R agrees to come into M house. As they enter into M's house she gave him a cup of coffee and sat down on the settee.

"So what is the problem Meera?" R questioned

M straight came to the point, "I don't know how to hide but I'm going to be straight. What is the problem between you and Sashi?"

"Nothing is the problem." R replied in shock

M said, "Listen don't lie to me. I heard you yelling and then you came drunk yesterday into my apartment."

R looked in shock, "Listen about yesterday I am really sorry. What I have said?"

"How can you say sorry?" M said, "Actually, you said I am in love with you. You want to marry me and live a life together. You cannot stand S she's too controlling, over protective and paranoid about you."

"Yeah you are saying negative things about me but, you haven't asked what S has done." R drops a bombshell as M mouth opens wide.

"What did S do?" M replies in shock

R tells her, "Yesterday, I wanted to give S a lovely Xmas present with a lovely teddy bear. I went to her flat in shock to find it was open a little. It was strange as S was always secure with her door. I walked inside thinking S left it opened for me to enter. I placed her present and suddenly, I found S clothes on top of another male's clothes. I went towards her bedroom slowly. I couldn't believe my eyes what I saw."

"Rajesh, I cannot believe what you are saying. Sashi! No way!" M replied

R said, "It's true unfortunately. I found her in bed with another guy. She was enjoying a passionate affair. After a few hours the guy left through the window. S came outside. I confronted her about this."

S declines about this affair and lies. When I showed her his clothes, she was shocked. She blames me, "I did this to get back at you and he has accepted my relationship and tells me the relationship is over."

I was so depressed I had so much to drink and I went into your house. Meera was in tears and couldn't say a word. She couldn't believe the fact S had done this towards a nice and caring gentleman. M said, "You are such a gentleman. How could she? Dam. She missed a lovely guy. I really looked up towards her. She was a role model for me but, now everything is thrown at my face."

S voice is heard, "Meera! You know the truth now?"

Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
woohoo !! first one !!....meli 😆 😆

I think im confused 😕 About whos right and whos wrong 😆 gr8 chapter usha !! cant wait for next when things might get cleared up a little 😳
Edited by *Nishi* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
oh no,now S is a bad gal,is it? yaaraiya namburadhu....vonnumae puriyalaiyae........is she sacrificing for sum reason 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
I think S is acting like a bad girl for her bestfriends sake Maybe she knows M also like R or Ms sister do have a hand on this? 😕

plz post the next chapt soon sweeto 😃

Nishi gal..I just let u win 😉

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