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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 Interesting. Well done usha. Will came back and edit my comments later naa 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meli

I thought S was a nerd....she hardly passed..thats a big 😲



ya me too u took me by surprise 😆 😆

i like the way story is heading 👏 👏 clearly confusing me 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nallu



ya me too u took me by surprise 😆 😆 😲 melis not a nerd 😆

i like the way story is heading 👏 👏 clearly confusing me 😆 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
thx guys for your comments n heres the next installment.

Its nice and short:


chapter 18

Meera was getting ready to celebrate her exam result with Rajesh. She was dressed in a nice traditional blue sari with lovely lavender flowers draping down her long black silky hair. As she was getting dressed a strange noise came from her phone. It was a love song and M couldn't believe it came through her phone. She came to answer it and it was R, "Hi there!"
"Hey! How u doing?" M smiled, "You sure added your own ring tone for your contact."
R smiled, "The ring tone suits your personality."
"Ha Ha Ha…. Very funny." Meera laughed, "Where are you?"
The doorbell rang and Meera opened the door with shock to see R waiting there wearing a blue shirt and black trousers.
"Well… well… well… we have something in common." Rajesh smiled.
Meera laughed, "Yes sir! We have something in common. The colour."

S opened the door and looked with jealously, "I see you are dating him. You two will spilt up."
"Keep on dreaming darling. We are only friends. We want to celebrate our success. Now you can step back and stay there." Meera smiled
S with anger slammed the door. "Just ignore her. Since she didn't do well she's jealous of our pure friendship." Meera told until she saw him depressed, "I can understand you have a soft corner for her. Still, she's useless and doesn't even deserve you. Someone will be there to make you happy. This girl will make you happy throughout your life."
Rajesh smiled touching her shoulder, "Thanks da. I really need your support." He continues, "Let's go and celebrate."

They both left the building smiling, giggling and talking. R was causal but M said to her mind, "Ever since you have saved me. I have decided you are the one."
Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
aaahh 😉 meera is falling in love 😳 while raj only wants friendship 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nallu

this M is really wicked 😉

yeah true
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thx for the comments. I love those comments. Heres my next installment:

Chapter 19

Both R and M had a lovely day celebrating at Central London until, dusk. Night time came; the full moon can be seen. M was linking onto R's arm and was walking towards a romance candle lit in London. R sat down on a bench whilst M was smiling and holding the bars smiling ever so much.

R saw M smiling and her smile resembled to S as he started to walk closer to her. He held her shoulder and starts holding her being so naughty.

M smiled, "Hey darling."
"Hi M, so you are enjoying the view." R grabbed her hips
M laughed, "Yeah. I'm sure am. You are so touchable."
"Well I am....what?" R asked
M smiled, "Look at what you are doing?" she blushed, "You are so romantic."
R blushed, "I see…" and continues, "I don't know I can feel the connection with you."
"I can also feel chemistry flicking with you." M smiled
R laughed, "You are romantic women."
"Romantic is my middle name." M smiled pulled his cheeks.
"Ahemm… Ahemm…" Rajesh coughed
M smiled, "Lets see what you are capable dealing with me."

R seized the opportunity to grab her and start bringing her head. They both looked at each other for a while and paused staring at each other's eyes. M touched at R shoulders and walked forward singing like a princess.
"I knew never your voice was sweet like honey." R yelled at her
M smiled, "Thanks." Shyly walks away.

R follows her forward until, she hears his footsteps and a bench which, she walks backwards and turns towards his head and whispers something. This made him to ran behind her until she saw a bench and slips onto the bench. Suddenly, M sari flew onto R's face and he approached closer to her. He whispered into her ears, "I have something to tell you."
"What?" M whispered after grabbing the sari off R and wrapping it around her.
R continues, "You are so beautiful." He came closer to her face and passionately kissing her lips.

Expect for a twist next chapter. 😉

Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
aawwwwwwwww 😃 cant wait for da twisty!!! 😛 seems like r thought it was s the whole time? 😉 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
ahha so its M & R atlast omg 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
who is wrong here........M,R or S.....anybody tricking here.....confusing but interesting though....may be i'll find an answer in u'r next chapter.

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