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Posted: 18 years ago
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HAPPIEZ BIRTHDAY LEENA 😊 😊
I am so upset 😭 AND ANGRY 😡 😡 with thiz penn CJ.BASKAR BECOZ FOR SEPERATING DEEPA AND KAILASH.....STUPID DIRECTOR....BUT NOW I AM HAPPY BECOZ YOU ARE COMING TO JOIN THEM IN THIS STORY....SO SWEETIZH OF YOU LEENA I ENCOURAGE YOU ......AND SO FAR I READ UR STORY ITZ GOING GREATZ....WELL DONEZ LEENA.......Hope they both will join their handz in their next serial as husband and wifez.... 😊 😊
My darlingz Prajin i will have imaginary that u and Deepa will join in Leena'z story.....Thatz great .....Thankz alotz to you Leena..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: trisha_coolizh


HAPPIEZ BIRTHDAY LEENA 😊 😊
I am so upset 😭 AND ANGRY 😡 😡 with thiz penn CJ.BASKAR BECOZ FOR SEPERATING DEEPA AND KAILASH.....STUPID DIRECTOR....BUT NOW I AM HAPPY BECOZ YOU ARE COMING TO JOIN THEM IN THIS STORY....SO SWEETIZH OF YOU LEENA I ENCOURAGE YOU ......AND SO FAR I READ UR STORY ITZ GOING GREATZ....WELL DONEZ LEENA.......Hope they both will join their handz in their next serial as husband and wifez.... 😊 😊
My darlingz Prajin i will have imaginary that u and Deepa will join in Leena'z story.....Thatz great .....Thankz alotz to you Leena..... 😊

thanks for ur bdae wishes trisha! it was very sweet of you to do so!😃 i can't believe i am a year older now already! lols!😆😆

that is true. believe me, i was darn pissed at the CJ Baskar cos he seperated my fav jodi. how could he do it to us?😡😡 it was unfair yaar. and now in anjali, he puts malika instead of meera. honestly speaking, meera shared TONS more chemistry with prajin than this childlike malika. she looks like prajin's sister, not wife.😆😆😆

awww.. thanks for all ur ownderful compliments trisha. i will try my best to make this story good & interesting. i also hope meera & prajin will act in another serial. i miss them!!😭😭

here is my latest chapter.

Chapter 4

her tears had a mind of their own. they trickled down her soft cheek onto her sari. deepa' silk sari was ruined by the tears but she didn't care. "so what? my whole life is already falling apart. it's not like this sari even matters." she told herself forlornly. but deepa didn't notice someone standing behind her. the person whom she missed so much. "deepa…." a very familiar voice called out. she spun around to find kailash, right in front of her. in the flesh.

"where are you deepa?" kailash questioned silently, brushing past some rogue tree branches. all of a sudden, he found himself in a small clearing. spotting a figure clad in a sari sitting on a log, he drew closer to find that it was deepa. her shoulders heaved as she cried. kailash's heart went out to her. he couldn't bear to see deepa hurt. she hadn't noticed him & seemed to be lost in her own world. kailash called deepa's name very gently. deepa froze for a moment but turned to face him. she looked shocked & a little angry.

"didn't you get married?" he aksed deepa softly. "what does it look like? will any bride cry on her wedding day?" she snapped at kailash irritably. kailash opened his mouth to speak but deepa silenced him with a swift motion of her hand. "let me speak now. you have ruined my life once. I am not ready to let you ruin it again. please leave me alone. "deepa firmly completed the sentence & stalked off. kailash sighed dejectedly, memories flooding his mind.

starting from the next chapter, i will relate the flashbacks of deepa's & kailash's love story.😳😳 hope u all will enjoy it. comments & suggestions are welcome! love you all!😃

happy new year people! hope u all have a great year ahead!👏👏

~leena 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainykid

thanks... late birthday wishes... "happy birthday"...

thanks a lot for ur wishes BK!😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Looking forward to flashback scenes, Leena. Keep it up 👏 👏

To last but not least,
Wishing you a Happy Birthday and I hope you had a wonderful celebration with your family and friends
😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WISH YOU ALL A VERY HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR 2007!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: serial123

BELATED BIRTHDAY WISHES! LEENA.

thanks a lot serial123! i had a great bdae!😃

hey, how come so few pple commented on my story? is it that bad?😭😭

anyways, here is my latest installment. please read & comment!

Chapter 5

kailash had first met deepa at a party. he was the photographer for the event. the gala event was hosted by Ajay, chennai's youngest businessman. he had just clinched a major deal & was throwing the huge party as a celebration. as he was snapping some pictures of an important VIP, kailash spotted a girl having an argument with the security personnel. "let me in!" she was yelling at the top of her voice.

the commotion had attracted the attention at quite a few people in the party, including ajay himself. "what's going on here?" he questioned strolling over to the entrance. "deepa? what are you doing here?" ajay's tone changed from annoyance to surprise. "I came to see you ajay. the stupid security are not letting me in!" she whined cutely. "look here deepa. I already told you. I don't like you. I am not interested in you. now please stop following me." pleaded ajay in a low voice. "but….. I really like you!" deepa insisted. ajay just gave a nonchalant shrug & walked off. deepa pouted & stormed off. kailash followed her, his curiosity sparked off.

kailash spotted deepa sitting on a park bench, grumbling away to herself. smiling at her indigence, kailash walked up to her & tooka seat right beside her. "what do you want?" deepa snapped. "well, I saw you & ajay. you both seemed to have a little problem back in the hotel. why are you chasing him? he says he doesn't like you, then why are you still pursuing him?" he questioned deepa. "that's a long story…." deepa sighed tiredly. " I have all the time in the world. now tell me what's going on!" kailash insisted stubbornly. deepa shot him a furtive glance & began her love story.

okie, so how was it? do u all like it? comments & suggestions please.😃

have a great new year people!👏👏

loads of love,

~ leena 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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leena, great story. Happy late b-day.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its great, Leena. Like BK said, people are busy in holidays I guess.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The story is goodz....Keepz continuingz Leena'z
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww.... thanks a lot everyone!😳😳 i will continue my story soon! i am really happy that people like my story.😛

oh ya, i found some pictures of meera vasudevan. she is so pretty! i love her smile.😳😳😳 now she looks perfect as the heroine of my story.

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