Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 16

Sweet!

I just saw this thread and starting reading from the last episode backwards to a couple more chapters. Very good attempt at romantic story telling, Jiggly. Can't deny the fact that it made me so reminiscent of the M&B stories of yester years. Soon I'm going to start reading your story from scratch.

Man! You write so well.. I don't know what your field is, but remember you have a talent which will come in handy, if ever needed. You've kept so many of us imagining Prajin & Meera in these roles - if they were to read it themselves, I'm sure you can catch them 😳 blushing 😳

Its' lovely & can't wait to catch more soon..

Agree with you Leena, chapter 27 was very cute and romantically. 😳 ❤️

Looking forward to 29th chapter. 😉

Aiyo Leena,

awesome chapter.....you are so romantic!!!!!!!

Lovely chapters Leena. Keep it up.

Pat

thanks a lot for ur flattering comments jenim. ur so nice!😳😳 and thanks to the rest of you who are supporting my fanfic. love you all!😃

CHAPTER 29

"what? marry you? what are you saying kailash? I don't even know you that well." deepa replied after a few minutes. "but I know you well enough to realise that you're the one for me. we are made for each other, can't you see that?" he lifted her chin up so that he could look into her eyes. "look deepa. we are perfect for each other. we just click. I think that is what made me spot you at the party. please consider my proposal. I truly do love you." he insisted tenderly & planted a kiss on her forehead. deepa just nodded with a serious expression on her face. kailash left soon after, taking an umbrella with him on deepa's request. he arranged to meet her the next day for lunch & said that he would come to her house to pick her up.

the next day started out rainy like the previous night. deepa stared out the window blankly. her mind was cluttered with all kinds of thoughts. "when will I ever find the solution to my problem? oh god!" she groaned to herself inwardly as she recalled kailash's proposal the previous night. deepa's feelings for ajay were diminishing but she still felt that attraction to him. how could she tell that to kailash? he would be shattered. the doorbell snapped deepa out of her reverie. she ran to answer it. kailash was early. she pulled it open to reveal ajay standing there instead of kailash. "ajay? what are YOU doing here?" she almost yelled. "I had to talk to you deepa. there is something bothering me so I wanted to clear it out with you. can I come in?" he enquired politely. deepa had no choice but to agree & reluctantly let him into the house. there used to be a time when she would have done anything to have ajay just give a glance towards her. now she just wanted to be as far away from him as possible.

"deepa, I want to ask you if you ever have liked me. do you still like me?" ajay questioned deepa. "why this sudden question ajay?" she answered his question with her question. "well I asked you because I think I have fallen in love with you & I am going to woo you." he bluntly replied. deepa's frail heart almost stopped at the audacity of ajay's statement. "what?" she screamed at him. "I have fallen in love with you & I am going to woo you. I don't care about anything else." he stubbornly insisted. "ajay, listen to me. I do like you. but now there is someone else in my life. I love him & I think you better forget me just like how I forgot you." deepa explained to him gently. "is it kailash?" ajay wanted to know. deepa nodded in agreement & ajay stormed out of the apartment with a black face. he didn't even say bye to her. "god! what is this new trouble you have in store for me??" deepa sighed in exasperation as she cursed her fate.

comments & suggestions are welcome! hope you all liked it. next update will be tmr.😃

~leena

Good twist to the soty Leena, way to go. Can't wait for the next chapter.
👏 👏 👏
Pat

Wow! what a twist! can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks for all ur cute compliments!

CHAPTER 30

kailash was late for their date. he said he'd be there soon but there still had been no sign of him. "where are you kailash?" deepa wondered worriedly. suddenly she heard a huge commotion coming from the compound outside her bedroom window. she rushed over to see what is was & a shocking sight greeted her. ajay & kailash were having a huge fight in the compound with loads of curious onlookers around them. deepa hit herself on her head & rushed outside. as she ran the stairs she could hear the guys' voices becoming louder. "what are you saying? she loves me!!" kailash yelled at ajay angrily. "no buddy! she loves me. she has always loved me!" ajay screamed back equally irritated. deepa just stood staring there open mouthed. it was the first time two guys had so openly fought for her. she didn't know whether to be embarrassed or honoured. soon the war of words escalated into a fistfight & deepa had to step in to stop the fight.

she tried to pull them apart but both of them were too big & strong. she tried to ask the bystanders for help too but they all refused. "STOP IT!!" deepa screamed as loudly as she could. the entire crowd went silent including ajay & kailash who had been in the middle of a tussle. they all gaped at her as they had never seen deepa look so angry & bothered before. both ajay & kailash reached out for deepa, intending to comfort her but she moved away. "don't touch me both of you. what in the world are you thinking? fighting in the open like a bunch of cavemen? I don't want to talk to anyone now." with that she turned & ran up to her apartment, crying.. ajay & kailash released their grip on each other's shirt. now they had to comfort deepa, that was much more important than their fight. deepa's tears hurt both of them immensely.

"deepa.. deepa.. please open the door. let's talk." they both rapped on deepa's apartment door gently. "go away!" came the muffled reply. "no, we won't go away till you open the door. let's talk about this. please open the door!" kailash insisted. after a few moments of silence, the door opened & there stood deepa. her face tearstained & she looked really confused. before kailash or ajay could say anything, she went in. they both followed her into the hall where deepa beckoned both of them to sit down. "so tell me. what is left to talk about? you both have already hurt me. now you guys want to hurt me even more by fighting even more?" she enquired in an icy tone. ajay & kailash cringed at her tone & started their explanations.

"deepa, we both love you a lot. I am not ready to give up. neither is ajay willing to give up. so we both decided that we both will woo you & you have to choose one of us. the guy who is rejected will stay away from you. instead of fighting among ourselves, we have decided to fight for your love." kailash finished his sentence off firmly. "but.. how I am supposed to chose one of you? I can't hurt either one of you." deepa replied in a bewildered tone. "you have to deepa. if not I & kailash might end up killing each other in a fight." ajay replied with a very grim expression. deepa sighed tiredly & nodded. she already had enough for the day. "okay. it's settled then. you look tired. we'll leave now." kailash smiled down at deepa. ajay came over & planted a kiss on deepa's right cheek while kailash kissed her on her left cheek. "bye deepa!" they both gave her a lingering look as they left. "it's either nothing or two. why? WHY?" deepa screamed at her ceiling. she felt that she might have to be admitted in a mental asylum because of these 2 guys.

that's all for now. comments & suggestions are welcome! next update will be tmr.😃

~ leena

Wow! Me first today! very nice chapter! what a fight! Poor Deepa stuck between both of them. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Greatz leena....Sorriez for not replying becoz was quite buzy....but alwayz i will never miss my darling Kailash, Ashok chapterz in this forumz....Thankz alotz for your effort to do thiz fanfic....I hopez u join Deepa and Kailash together soon in thiz storyz..... 😊